Originally posted by: --starstruck--
um can i just say i still hate Asad cause according to me if you love someone you should never be weak enough to let them go. you should stand up and fight no matter what not behave like a coward. The path of love is never easy that doesn't mean you give up on them on the first obstacle that faces you, it just shows how weak the love was. you may think that this intensity of love never happens in real life but i would say that it's the only reason why i search for this type of love in fictions!
Anyway that's your fiction and i can't really say much i just wanted you to know my honest reviews since i like u as a writer a lot! however whatever the reason Asad will never be redeemed for me.
Btw. the part was beautifully written, i like your detailing and it was good to know Asad's past. Do you take requests? can u give us a part about how Zoya dealt with this whole situation along with her pregnancy and maybe a part where Zoya is in labour and all she wants is Asad by her side?
Again I'm so sorry if my comment was very harsh or rude. Im very sorry but you should know I'm not saying bad about you as a writer or your story I'm just sharing my views on Love!
Anupamaa
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