SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 9...

Is all about tanveer fit in the family...
got everyone attention...

and her over concern ... for asad...

dilshad wants her kids happiness to...
asad deny it coz of his father... hmmm
same past... divorce

in the moment... she thought tanveer would be good for asad...
dilshad suggest it... asad against it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Read your fanfic in one go

Simply amazing😊👏👏

Love the storyline😊😊

Glad that asad is warming up to zoya 😳

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 9 / 2

Asad talk to tanveer .. she did sound understanding

and knows asad stand... happy to get married...

Asad have this doubt... aboy tanveer ..but did not think
much... and he change himself to accept
the marriage..

and then tanveer got pregnant and deliver baby...

so he meet his old friend...the name tanveer bring out
worries for rehan... so what is it...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 10...

So the entry of new baby girl... special moment
for the khan family...

So najma named the baby...

so the ugly past of tanveer... came ...
perfect mask...

poor asad... after so much turmoil... he is so shock...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 11...

She deny... but she can never stop...

she broke the family... and their trust...

poor dilshad broke down... she wish for good ..only
see the life change ...

love the way zoya comfort her...

asad also..thinking about his past... and feel regret
with what he did...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 11...part 2

first he forget about naina... and start leaving his
life for her... evil tanveer try to
march in again... but cant... she break more
disgusting truth... naina...
who is the father...
so only asad knows it... nobody knows this...

but that is the limit... he cant accept naina...
his already kill his soul...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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chapter 11 part 3...

wow asad venting his pain .. punching bag..

zoya saw it... she can see the pain

this 2 soul going through...is coz of her... both visit
the past...

wow zoya can relate to them... but she doubt he own
vision... is she in denial...

oh thinks can change if their want to...