SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 3...

Zainab heart broken... and almost lost zoya...
coz of her pain... she neglect zoya

Zainab move on... and zoya became everything
to her...

Zoya's neighbor is christian and how she become involve
in santa clause...

Okay who is Naina and the lady...make so much in the story..
are they going to be zoya future...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 4...

So zoya mother past a way... she did not get along with
her father... and now shift to new house..

huge step for zoya to move out from the house...
sara is the only one cheer her up..

nice house... and there is one house caught zoya

hmmm so the lady meet again... and the same house...
zoya happy find someone... not alone..

is going awesome...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 5..

Was so intense... zoya reaching the house and meet
asad... very cold small fight

after that intro... asad give her weird look...

dilshad mention about zoya before... to asad...

nice zoya lashing on asad... and complain to dilshad..

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Chapter 6...

Sara and zoya friendship is good...

now zoya is going to dinner... to dilshad house...

zoya making muffins...

so there is something about naina quietness..

dilshad did not say much...

so naina is asad's daughter... no DIL...

zoya meet najma...

Asad being very cold with her... . zoya cant understand
him...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 3...

Zainab heart broken... and almost lost zoya...
coz of her pain... she neglect zoya

Zainab move on... and zoya became everything
to her...

Zoya's neighbor is christian and how she become involve
in santa clause...

Okay who is Naina and the lady...make so much in the story..
are they going to be zoya future...

Oh you just started reading the story... and you are giving me a review for each chapter... so sweet of you.. thanks Dear...😃

will reply to all your comments later... i am going to update chapter 13 now..
hope you will like rest of the chapters as well and is not disappointed when you read about Asad's past.😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 7...

Zoya getting close to the khan family...

with out asad being around...

so sweet naina reach out to zoya... so sweet went she start talking...
to zoya and answer her...

So asad and zoya have cold war...

she never stay for dinner... to meet asad...

and their many meets.. which did not go nice for zoya..