SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 19

Originally posted by: jas91

Omg I m sad after knowing Asad's past🤢

although it was expected that Tannu will b cheat🤬

but i pity Asad😭

poor him had started trusting her

if Dillu wouldn't have pushed him this wouldn't have happened😡

Rehaan was a great frnd👏

even i liked Feroz he was not that -ve👍🏼

it was tanveer who was after him🤬

Poor Asad was silently bearing d whole pain🥺

waiting 4 d nxt part

how Asad will reveal her in front of his Ammi😲

that's d reason he is cold 2wards sunaina also😒

both Asad & Zoya have same past

Asad was cheated by his wife & Zoya's mother was cheated by her father😭💔

Atleast Zoya will understand Asad behavior now but what about Asad😲

continue soon I wanna read more😃

atleast updt once a week ⭐️😉

plz PM me 4 nxt part😳

sent u Buddy rqst except that also😆

thank you Jas... glad you liked the chapter...

and yea everyone thought Rehan will be negative... but he is a good friend of Asad.. and yea even Feroz is not very bad... he is also hundred times better than Tanveer and i tried to highlight that such men also exist... men who has some grey streaks but still are not scrupulous... and glad you noticed that.

Did you read chapter 11? looks like you didn't.. in chapter 11 , Asad revealed everything in front of Dilshad.

yea Zoya and Asad has similar past and that will help them in connecting.

Will surely Pm you next time.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

thanks Preeti..😃.. and a big hug to you too... sorry i made you cry but then it means the chapter is emotional as i wanted it to be...right ?😆

Next update it will be AsYa.. but sorry it won't be a really happy update as if i suddenly go to a happy mode, story will loose direction... but after few more chapters happiness will come and after some twists and turns story will have a happy ending... i won't be sadistic like Gul..😆.. so hope you will stick by..

Love this photo of Asad throwing out Tanveer... but during that time, i wished it was more dramatic.😊

I can read and enjoy few sad updates of AsYa with a promised happy ending. It's far better than the show toh. :P And I guess I was too emotional while writing the comment lol
Even I didn't like the way Tanveer was thrown out...It was so un-Asad type! Well that's gone.
Update soon!!!!

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

felt really bad for dilshad asad n naina...

zoya knows the whole truth nw...

hopefully she will help him to overcome his fear...

wonderfull...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thank You..😃.. glad you liked the update.yea Zoya knows the truth but Zoya has to tread with Asad very carefully... so it will take time.😊

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

yup we can change someones aadat bt fitrat cannot b changed

Exactly.. and i guess even psychologists doesn't know why some people turn out to be the way they are.😆

Originally posted by: sanasahel

Wow what an emotional update.


loved it.

Hehe... glad you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

Wow!! that's an awesome update!!
truly mind-blowing it was!! amazingly penned it was!!
i soo loved it to the core!!
ahh!! poor Asad! feeling so bad for him!!😒 he had such a dreadful past!!!nd that Tanveer is such a bloody beep!!😡 totally crap she is!!
nywayz superb nd incredible chappy!!
do continue sooon!!😃

Thank You Dear..😃... glad you liked the update.
Yea Asad has a real dreadful past... but he will find happiness ... that i can assure you.

Will try to update soon.😊

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

Thank You... so sweet of you.😃