asya OS- Challenge accepted

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Challenge Accepted

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She stood near the window in their room,looking outside. Starring at nothing. Her face adorned with a beautiful dimpled smile. 7 years had passed since she had became Zoya Ahmed Khan from Zoya Faroukhi but still it seemed like few days back they met. She never missed being Zoya Faroukhi. Her love for her Asad had increased with every passing day. She stood frozen remembering the past 7 most beautiful years of her life. She was pulled back from the world of love as she heard the clock strike 11. She again began to concentrate on her work, the work. Waiting for Asad to return from his business trip. She hate waiting for anything but if waiting means to be with Asad, she could wait till her last breath.

She turned as she heard her little princess call her.

"Ammi" called the beautiful 5 years old girl standing beside zoya.

Yes she was her daughter correction their daughter 'Adya'.

"Yes my Baby"replied Zoya

"Ammi I have finished my homework can I now go and sleep." asked adya innocently.

"Sure my princess" said Zoya as she proceeded towards bed followed by Adya.

She caressed her hairs as sleep overtook her angel. Adya was a cute girl. She loved cleanliness. Her habits were almost similar to that of Asad's but she actually appeared as Zoya. Any stranger could easily recognize Adya as asad's and Zoya's daughter.

She ran to the main door as she heard the doorbell, expecting that to be Asad. She was right, it was Asad, her love. Asad took her into a deep hug. He only knew how much he had missed her in these 2 days.

"I missed you so much Mr. Khan"said zoya making her free from the hug.

"I too missed you love"said asad

Asad and Zoya moved in holding each others hands.

"where is Adya"asked Asad not able to find her.

"She had slept, she too wanted to sleep after you came but..." zoya stopped mid way.

"I too wanted to see her but i can't even leave work"

"Mr. Khan is your work even more important then me and Adya?"

"No Zoya, but"zoya cut him in between

"No buts and ifs Mr. Khan. You are taking a off tomorrow and that's final" ordered Zoya

"No Zoya i can't take off. I have lots of work in my store unlike you" asad taunted. How much he missed bickering with her in these two days.

"Mr. Khan do you want to say that I stay free at home"

Zoya continued without giving Asad any chance to even speak "You go to office that doesn't mean that you are the only one who works. Live my life for a day and you will understand, how busy I stay"

"So do you accept this challenge?" asked zoya

"Challenge Accepted"

oOo

The night soon turned into morning replacing the darkness. This day was going to be tough day for both the love birds. Asad had already began to cook breakfast. The much he tried not to mess up, the more he messes up the kitchen. As Zoya got a glimpse of the kitchen she was forced to say "Mr. Khan you still have time, you can accept that you lost this challenge"

"No Zoya I would somehow handle this, you must think of yourself"

As Zoya sat on his chair for breakfast, Asad served her bread jam with black and bitter coffee. The only things he knew how to make. Asad was about to go back to kitchen when called by Zoya

"Mr. Khan see you have left the mug unclean" said zoya pointing towards the little spot on the mug.

Asad cleaned the spot with the annoyed look on his face while zoya enjoyed.

Soon Zoya left for office and Asad began to clean the mess in the kitchen. Thankfully Adya's school was off today

o0o

There zoya was having a fatiguing day in the office. To prepare a presentation in an hour was no less than impossible for her when she even didn't knew the information completely but still she tried.

After lots of efforts too she failed to complete the task instead she was gifted with a headache. She soon realized only Asad can do this and decided to leave for home.

o0o

There Asad too was unable to even cook the food properly. He had just got a cut in his hand while cutting the vegetable and now food was spoiled.

He realized there is something that Asad Ahmed Khan can't do. He wished Zoya to be there. Looks like if he had wished something else then his that wish would also be fulfilled like this one.

Zoya was standing in front of him. He then honored her with a Sorry and got a similar response.

They both hugged each other tight interrupted by Adya

"ammi abbu"said the little angel as she ran to asad and zoya

They three shared a group hug.

Their life was now complete.

-THE END-

o0o

a random OS

running before you began to throw your shoes on me


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Guguminti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So cute 😳
Loved ASYA and Adya and your OS do write more😃
Edited by Guguminti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute...
I want to see Adya on the show...bas
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute yaar ❤️ please write more 😉
Edited by MagicalRed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagicalRed

Res...
Baad main padhing 😆

atleast last vale ki tarah bina pade very nice not kahing😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow this was superb ankie..⭐️
lovely os...👏
cute adya like asad😳 dreamy😳
poor asad when he got cut while cutting vegetable😭
his realization was cute..😆
group hug was perfect😳
overall superb os⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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https://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8460oyOFw1r76lino1_500.gif
Amazingly written
short and sweet= this is what we call as One Shot😳
Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is cute !!
Loved the whole concept 😳
Do write more stories !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a refreshing change..
Wonder how this scene will play out..in love with it..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So cute...

I love da whole wrk...


M waiting for your more updates

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