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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

emotional, sad update...

Love has this dimension also...

Thanks for PM..

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Maliha-
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Prizi!!

it was hell emotional ps beautiful...
have you someother work too? if yes? then i need yo index...
keep writing n rocking

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awww thank u sooo much... Glad u liked it... I wrote poems and 2 AR OS bt after a longgg time i write sumthing... I was hell nervous before posting this.. Bt nw i'm overhealmed seeing ur response

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

again thank u sooo much :)

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra
Awww tht really cute but sad too.
Nyc start do ryt more but in tht stories asya shld be alive.😛

thanx 😊 okk boss if i write more toh i'll remember this 😆

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: neenabinu
Asad ko maar diya aur Zoya ko bhi😭
well written...

hahaha ab kya karu asad nhi hai toh zoya kaise asad k bina rahegi 😉
thank u

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika
emotional, sad update...
Love has this dimension also...
Thanks for PM..

thanx.. Glad u liked it

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jasleen kaur

@Jasleen_asya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Ohh...gawd...dis was rily sad n depressing...bt dis shows dat even death cant seperate Asya...
Good job done!!!! 😊

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Your first try and you chose to write something sad? 😳 🤣

Nicely written for a first timer .. Keep on writing because practice makes perfect! 😃

It would have been even better if it was longer 😆

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Jasleen_asya
Ohh...gawd...dis was rily sad n depressing...bt dis shows dat even death cant seperate Asya...
Good job done!!!! 😊

thank u :)
yes even death cant seperate them

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Your first try and you chose to write something sad?😳🤣

was trying to sumthing else bt end sad pe ho gayi

Nicely written for a first timer .. Keep on writing because practice makes perfect! 😃

thank u...surely i'll write more bt don't knw when... 😉

It would have been even better if it was longer 😆

hahaha itna hi hua mere se.. Nxt time i'll remember this 😃