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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys please stop it... We should talk about something else...

''why???why??? Tujhe sharam aa rahi hai apne unke bare me baat karne me???''

''kya hua bata na??''

''toh bol na roz baat karti hai apne unse??? Kya kya baat hoti hai???''

''arre khamosh kyun hai???? Bol na...''




enough guys enough... Just enough... Bahut ho gaya... Jis din se ye sab start hua hai tum sab ko bas ek hi topic mila hai baat karne ko... Mujhe dekha nehi bas start ho jate ho- ''arre Zoya bol na tera woh kaisa hai???
Treat kab de rahi hai???
Kanjoos mat ban..
Arre tune bataya nehi tera woh aaya tha...kya baat huyi??????''



enough guys.. Bahut ho gaya.. Ghar pe bas usike baareme baat hota hai.. Aur tum log bhi.. When u guys knw very well that i don't wanna do this marriage... Then why r u doing this???


One of my friend Aliya : Zoya kab tak??? Kab tak aisa chalega??? Ek baar uncle aunty k point of view se soch.. Woh bahut khush hai Zoya..


Zoya : but i'm nt Aliya... I'm nt happy.. I don't wanna do this marriage.. And u guys knw the reason very well.. Bt ammi, abbu don't want to listen.. Aisa kya karu jisse woh log samjh jaye???



Another friend of mine Sadaf : but Zoya...



Zoya : plz sadaf... Btw i think i should leave now...




In Home



Dear ammi- abbu,
sorry ammi...sorry abbu bt i can't do this nikah.. I can't.. I just can't.. I did try ammi bt I failed ammi... Your daughter is a failure ammi.. How can I marry someone... when I belongs to someone else.. I love him ammi.. I still love him.. I can never forget him.. I love Asad abbu... More than anything in this world i love Asad ammi... Aap log kehte ho woh nhi hai.. Bt ammi,abbu woh hai... He is here in my heart... Har pal, har waqt woh mere sath hai.. Duniya ke liye woh do saal pehle guzar chuka hai lekn mere liye woh abhi bhi hai.. He is still here guys.. He is here with me.. How can i even think abot someone else???? Tell na ammi...Maine aap logo ko bahut samjhane ki kaushish ki.. Bt aap ne nhi samjhi...Sorry guys m taking this step.. Forgive me for this... Luv u lots ammi abbu.. Keep smiling...

Zoya




i'm sorry Asad.. I knw i promised u that i'll move on.. Bt nhi hoga mujhse ye Asad.. I really luv u... I can't move on Asad.. I can't love someone else... I'm coming Asad.. Tumare paas.. Apne mohabbat ke paas...



hola people!!!! This is my first try on our beloved ASYA...Plz tell hws it...
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Ceon thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A sad one but well written. Good job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st wala...
Sad wala...😭..
But a lovely one..
...👍🏼..wish you many more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice
plzzz pm me for your next work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

<font color="#ff00ff">1st wala...</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Sad wala...😭..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">But a lovely one..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">...👍🏼..wish you many more.</font>

thanx :)
initially i was trying to write sumthing happy bt pata nhi kya se kya ho gaya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

nice

plzzz pm me for your next work

thanx :)
yes i'll do pm u:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!

Prizi!!

it was hell emotional ps beautiful...
have you someother work too? if yes? then i need yo index...
keep writing n rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
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https://peaceartsite.com/images/i-loved-it-lots.gif
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww tht really cute but sad too.
Nyc start do ryt more but in tht stories asya shld be alive.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asad ko maar diya aur Zoya ko bhi😭
well written...

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