AsYa Drabble - A Perfect Dinner!

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Simi

@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Can this happen for real? Pwetty pwease, with a chewwy on the top? *pouts*

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Sonam

@angel2930

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

so so so so nice...just loved it...🤗

as when Zoya shouted "Stop..." I guessed it peanuts...and it was...wowww...that ws so lovely...

hayee...such A Perfect Dinner...

thnks fr the pm...😊

and ur essay results will be good...😃

awaiting fr the other updates...do update soon...

specially TJMW...eagerly waiting...😊

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice one...can so imagine dis goin on in SM...
"Jahaanpanah clean"... 😆 😆

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

this was really cute, but looking at Asad right now, i doubt he even drink water of that house...😉

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madina12

@madina12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awww...tis is so cute...
Zoya will surely be someone that asad will always rely on. 😛
Love the OS 😉

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Perfect drabble...
loved it
thanks for the pm...

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

res.

unres
first of all im sorry i took forever. life gets in the way of IF sometimes 😆

anyways it was a beautifully written drabble! even in such few dialogues between AsYa I could clearly see their love for each other and i could actually imagine this scene taking place in my head! you didn't have to add any mitwa moments because those few simple actions said it all. amazing work!

Edited by Love-AsYa-4ever - 11 years ago