ASYA SS: 3 years later. Completed - Page 32

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

nice update
loved description of every function with reliving of past...
thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: angel2930

amazing part...loved it again...👏👏👏

baby boys...gr8...and the names...wow...loved them...
Nikah at Mazaar...wow...lovely..😊

Yash-Chopra wedding...Zoya..she is super adorable...😳
and Nuzhat...wrong timing gal...Zoya in Asad's lap...😆
this is the fav...Asad blushing & Zoya running...😆😆😆

poor Rehaan...5 yrs...😉 and NK reminds me of IPKKND's NK..😆

and Jashn-e-Saugat ws so lovely...Rehaan ko bhi gift chahiye...ha ha...he is so cute...😃

hawww...my poor Zoya...still scared..😭
but Asad Miyaan...he is just awesome...2 mins me sab thik...😃
and Kiss & Dilshad...again they are caught...bechaare AsYa..😆

and this statement:
"I like my hair down and so does Mr. Khan"
i loved it... i thought they will tease Zoya at this stmnt...
Jashn-e-Bahar ws beautiful...specially Asad kissing Zoya's hairs to make her smile..😳

and the Bench scene...wow...beautifully pictured...Ayaan's future...thn Humeira's marriage...AsYa are perfect Bhaijaan-Bhabhi & Aapi-Jeeju...👏👏👏
and the beard scene...so so cute...😳
the kiss...the forehead touch...the I LOVE YOU...wow..😳
ropes kharidi hai...ha ha...😆
and ab sachchi me KUCH GALAT NAHI HO SAKTA...😃

and SarAan finally...wow...tht scene ws just eternal...understanding each others...and lucky Zoya..she witnessed it...😃
and Zoya pinching Ayaan's cheeks...typical Bhabhi...sho cute...😃

and Asad gt scared by Major...😆
and Ayaan's reaction at YOU HAVE KILLED PEOPLE...ha ha...😆
and the sentimental-emotional AsYa scene ws sho nice..😃

and Asad...he is the sweetest & the most caring Husband...😳

and the last scene ws the best...so so cute...the way Zoya said about her heart racing...😳
Asad keeping her hand on his heart...😳
the famous Zoya's line...DIL ME SEENA HAI PATTHAR NAHI...
and Asad correcting her...😃
rubbing the noses...and then the kiss...so so romantic..😳

waiting fr the last part...😊
thnks fr pm.😃

Originally posted by: atif4ever

i was really sad with KSG's replacement...this update make me feel better...!

Here's the final part! Hope you've enjoyed this Short Story, I'd like to thank you all for the immense amount of love and support this piece has received.

I know the news of KSG has made people stop their SS/FF but I think we should continue our works for the sake of the readers. I was more heartbroken when I read that my favourite writers have stopped most of my favourite works. Please continue your works!

As promised, there will be an Epilogue uploaded soon, but as I'm travelling tomorrow; it'll be uploaded in a few days time. Thank you all!

PART 15

At the breakfast table, Asad looked agitated while he was drinking his regular coffee, Dilshad bi was worried as she didn't understand what was wrong. She served Rashid and everyone else their breakfast. Everyone started eating, Zoya hadn't arrived yet; Asad kept glancing at the door. "Wo raat ko der se soyi thi, toh ussey uthaya nahin hai abhi tak," Rehaan informed Asad about her whereabouts as he noticed him staring at the door. Asad nodded, he looked at his mom and said, "Ammi mujhe lagta hai ye mehendi nahin rakhni chahiye, I mean sirf Suhana ke liye rakhengey," "Kyun Asad beta? Zoya ka bhi toh nikkah hai," Dilshad replied, "Ji, lekin aapko yaad hai na unhein mehendi se allergy hai? Pichli baar kitni buri tarah jali thi.." he remembered her burnt hands, "Allergy? Princess ko koi allergy nahin hai, in fact she loves henna," Rehaan replied confused. "Kya? Lekin unhone hi ye baat batayi thi humein," Asad replied, this conversation was interuppted by Zoya's good morning wishes. Asad looked at Rehaan who looked at Zoya and asked, "Princess tumhe henna se allergy hai?" Zoya replied, "Nahin toh, kisne kaha?" while she was busy applying jam on her toast. "Miss Farooqui, aapne hi to pichli baar kaha tha ki aapko..allergy hai?" "Oh wo toh Tanveer ne.." she realized what she said by accident and looked up. "Tanveer? Tanveer ne kya Miss Farooqui?" Asad didn't like where this was going, had Tanveer hurt her more than he thought she did? "..Wo rehne dijiye Mr. Khan, puraani baaton ko yaad karke kya faida," Zoya tried to divert the topic as she knew it would just add to his guilt. "Miss Farooqui, please," Asad wanted to know, she took a deep breath and said, "Tanveer ne us mehendi mein acid milaya tha.." Everyone was shocked, Asad dropped his fork and was mad. "Kya?!" Zoya just nodded and then continued, "Lekin ab rehne dijiye, is baar aisa kuch nahin hoga, so don't worry and Mr. Khan aapko is baat ka bura manney ki koi zaroorat nahin hai," she smiled at him, and held his hand. He nodded, but he still couldn't help but feel guilty. How much had she suffered, and I never saw it.

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Mehendi

Suhana and Zoya had chosen to wear shades of green and black, the boys had worn black sherwanis to match with them. Both the girls had applied henna on their hands and had their grooms' names written on them. The lady couldn't write Asad's name anywhere else because her hands still had the outline of an A on her right hand by the thumb, so she rewrote it at the same spot.

Rehaan had been asked to step up and find his name in Suhana's hand, "Yuck, this stinks.." he said, "Uffo, Rehaan, naam dhundo!" Suhana replied, "okay okay meri jaan, itni be sabr kabse ho gayi?" he teased her. "Rehaan miya, agar tum apna naam nahin dhoond paye toh Suhana ko apni mooh mangi gift milegi," "AUR GIFTS?!" Rehaan screamed, Suhana grinned and pointed towards her hands. "Wait..agar dhoondliya toh? Suhana mujhe gift degi?!" Rehaan asked excitedly, Suhana saw how excited he was and said, "Of course, agar aapne dhoond liya toh aapko gift milega" she assured him with a smile. He was excited so he found his name quick, "kya milega Suhana begum?" Suhana blushed, leaned in and kissed Rehaan's cheek. He smiled and everyone aww'd making him cringe.

It was Asad's turn, but instead of concentrating on the hands, he was staring at Zoya. "Uh, Bhaijaan aapka naam Mona ke haathon mein likha hai, uske face pe nahin," Ayaan commented while giggling at his lovestruck brother. Asad glared at Ayaan and blushed that he was caught staring at her, Zoya laughed as well. Asad tried to concentrate on the task at hand and he found the A to be darker than the rest and pointed at it. Sarah looked at Zoya's palm as she noticed something and said, "Arrey, Zee why is the A darker than the rest of the henna?" The henna lady replied saying, "Mujhe lagta hai ki unke haathon mein pehle se hi inke naam ki mehendi lagi huwi thi, isiliye meine wahaan par hi likh diya." "Pehle se?" "wo..pichli baar ke baad mere haath mein wo henna ki outline abhi tak hai.." Zoya answered Asad's question, he understood that she was scarred from the acid henna. He fisted his hands again, but then felt Zoya open his fist, he looked up at her and she smiled. She opened the palm that had the Z scar and said, "Aapke haath mein mera naam hai, aur mere haath mein aapka," while carressing the scar on his hand. He smiled at her gesture and nodded.

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All the guest had left and Dilshad informed the grooms that they weren't allowed to see their brides til the Nikaah. The grooms groaned and agreed. Asad was eager to meet Zoya, even though it was just one night apart, he couldn't stop himself. He entered Zoya's room through the window, he saw three girls in the bed, and was shocked. Where's Miss Farooqui? And why are there so many girls in this bed? He was about to go near the bed when he heard a low thump, he turned around to find Rehaan who was equally shocked to see Asad there. They both signalled each other to stay quiet. Before they could do anything they heard some shuffling, they turned to see Ayaan who was already in the room going closer to the bed. "Sarah," he whispered, Asad and Rehaan looked at each other shocked. "Sarah," he whispered while trying to peek at where she was. He was about to see whether it was Sarah when Rehaan tripped and fell making a loud noise. All the girls woke up screaming. "SHHH ITS JUST US! CALM DOWN" Rehaan screamed, "US?! KAUN HAI AAP? OMG ZOYA" Sarah screamed, Zoya stood up and had twisted Asad's elbow with her hand immediately while Ayaan ran frantically to find the light switch. Asad screamed in pain, Zoya said, "aur chillao, abhi maza chakha ti hoon" she twisted it harder, just before she could break his arm Ayaan had turned the lights on. All the girls gasped to see it was Ayaan, Rehaan and Asad. Zoya immediately let go of Asad's arm and screamed. "Allah Miyah what's wrong with me? I'm so sorry Mr. Khan," she exclaimed while trying to grab the blanket and hid herself. She realized she didn't do anything wrong and corrected herself by saying, "Allah Miyah what's wrong with YOU Mr. Khan?! Nikaah se pehle aap mujhe nahin dekh sakte! Aur Rabart?! Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?" She then saw Rehaan walking towards the window, she looked at the girls and they all screamed, "FAROOQUI!" Rehaan stopped immediately. All this commotion caused everyone to come to their room and found all six of them in a state of shock staring at each other. The girls were staring at the boys angrily while the guys were staring at the floor. Dilshad, Zeenat and Anwar saw this and started laughing at the boys, Dilshad ushered the boys to leave the room.

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A few hours passed, and Zoya became anxious, she wanted to meet Mr. Khan once before the Nikaah, for no real reason other than the fact that it seemed cute at that time. She walked to the balcony and knocked on the his room window; she had a veil on to avoid him from seeing her face. Asad woke up, and in a sleepy state walked upto the window to see a veiled woman standing out there. He found it weird so he walked to the balcony and asked, "Ji, aap kaun?" Zoya giggled in her mind and decided to prank him, she changed her voice and said, "Aap humein itni jaldi bhool gaye?" in a seductive tone. Asad was a little scared, "Ji? Me..mein? Aap hai kaun?" "Aapne humare awaaz nahin pehchani, jaan?" Jaan? What the hell? Who is this? "N..nahin to, aur ye aap mujhe kis naam se bula rahin hai?" he was a little angry, she sensed his tone, she peeked to see his expression and couldn't hold her laughter in any longer. She laughed out loud making him realize that it was Zoya. He sighed with relief and hugged her, "Mr. Khan! Ye aap kya kar rahein hai?!" "Aapko nahin pata?" he teased while hugging her, "Aap nikaah se pehle ye sab, chodiye..chodiye Mr. Khan!" He left her, and tried to reach for the veil, she slapped his hand and said, "nahin, is baar hum nikaah se pehle ek doosre ko hargiz nahin dekhengey, yaad hai pichli teeno baar dekha tha toh kya huwa tha?" she scolded him. He understood and walked away. Zoya was shocked, "hain, meine toh nahin dekhne ko kaha tha, yeh toh chale gaye," she muttered to herself when she heard him returning, she saw a coffee mug held under her veil, "Coffee, with milk and sugar," he offered, he left and returned with a partition from the garden. He set it up so she could drink her coffee without worrying about the veil. She smiled at his gesture and sat on one side while he sat on the other. They both sighed and looked at the sky while drinking coffee. They didn't need to talk, they just needed to be there for one another, which they did. They drank their coffees, muttered goodnights, and went to their respective rooms.

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Nikaah

Asad, and Rehaan were driven by Major to the Mazaar. Both the girls had worn Red lehengas, with gold jewellery and the guys had worn Gold sherwanis with black dhoti pants and red pocket hankies. The ceremony was simple yet elegant. Both the brides and grooms were seperated by a thin curtain and asked to place their vows. Rehaan and Suhana had completed their vows and were officiall announced Mr. and Mrs. Rehaan Iqbal Farooqui. Asad and Zoya were going through the same emotions, overwhelmed by the fact that after three years they would finally be together. This was their fourth, and inshaAllah their last try at this wedding, nothing had gone wrong so far. They couldn't be happier. Asad had asked the Qazi to call Zoya, Zoya Farooqui bint Anwar Farooqui, and not Siddique, the Qazi respected his request and agreed to do so. When the Qazi asked Zoya if she would accept this nikaah. At first, Zoya was surprised to hear her name, but then she smiled as she understood that Asad had done this to make sure she was happy. She smiled and said "Qubool hai," three times really softly. Asad was on cloud nine, he couldn't believe that his loud and messy Miss Farooqui, was shy at this moment, and that she was officially Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan. He was removed from his fantasy when the Qazi asked him the second time if he would accept this nikaah, Asad immediately replied "Qubool hai," three times, loudly and quickly; trying to make sure that Zoya heard him. She sighed with relief as she thought he had second thoughts as the Qazi had to repeat the question twice. She pushed those thoughts away while making a mental note to ask Asad about it later. At that moment their happiness knew no bounds, they were officially Mr. and Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan. They smiled widely at each other.

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Asad Ahmed Khan woke up to see his newly wedded wife dragging an open suitcase into his room, our room you idiot not yours he corrected himself as he saw the suitcase, it with all her clothes messily dumping into it, and there was a pizza box on top of all the clothes. He looked at Zoya and saw that she had a half eaten pizza slice in her mouth, she was holding it in her mouth while trying to drag the open suitcase in. Since the suitcase was open, she couldn't pull it through the door, yet she kept trying to pull at it. Ya Allah ye larki mujhe pagal karke hi rehegi, he shook his head and then smiled at his wife, she was his. He couldn't believe that this was the girl who he did it with last night, he smirked as he remembered what took place between them. He shook his head to take those thoughts out, Zoya heard the noise on the bed and looked up to see Mr. Khan awake. "Ahm hmm whh whh wi uu?" She screamed, well she still had the pizza in her mouth so she made no sense, Asad looked at her confused, "Ji?" She looked at him and gestured at the bag. He sighed and walked upto her, he then realized that he didn't wear his kurta. He walked around the room to find it while his wife was staring at him in disbelief, the pizza was about to fall off her mouth when Asad caught it and started eating it. He smirked at her face and then gestured her to move, she followed his orders and moved away. He shut the bag, picked it up and set it on the bed. "Ye lijiye, aapko agar samaan lana hi tha toh mujhe utha deti, mein lade ta," he told her, she was about to reply when he cut her off and said, "anyway I'm going to shower, please mere room ko tabah mat kijiye ga" "HUMARAH ROOM!" she screamed at the bathroom door as he had shut it. He smiled, he loved teasing her.

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Dilshad couldn't believe that it had been one night to their wedding and they had fought. She watched as Zoya kept muttering insults to Asad, while Asad quietly read the newspaper. "Asad," "Ji Ammi?" he looked up from his paper, "is baar tumne kya kiya, jisse Zoya is tarah mooh bana kar bethi hain?" "meine toh bas unhe apna samaan mere kamre mein laney mein help ki thi," Zoya was shocked, not because he called it his room again, but because Phoopi just nodded and went back to eating. "Allah Miyah what's wrong with you Mr. Khan?! Aap baar baar mera kamra mera kamra kyun bol rahe hain? Ab who HUMARAH kamra hai! Aur Phoopi aap bhi Mr. Khan ko tokney ki wajah agree kar rahi hain?!" She pouted, making Dilshad smile. "Phoopi, aap ek typical saas toh nahin banengi nah?" Zoya asked sheepishly, making Dilshad laugh, she caressed Zoya's hair and shook her head, "mein tumhari Phoopi pehle, baad mein saas; tumhe pata hai nah, ki tum mein meri jaan basti hai?" Zoya nodded, "bas to phir, aur Asad, meri bahu ko tang karna band karo. Aur ye Mr. Khan kya hai Zoya? Asad bulao," she scolded them both, "Hai nah Asad? Ab Zoya ko tumhe Asad bulana chahiye nah?" Asad remembered how she screamed his name in pleasure last night and said, "Ammi wo mujhe Asad hi bulati hain, lekin akele mein," he winked at Zoya making her choke on her coffee. Dilshad smiled as she understood that it was an inside joke and patted Zoya's back to calm her down. Zoya was shocked to see this face of her Mr. Khan..no her Asad.

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Dilshad couldn't be happier, all these years she always regretted leaving Asad, and then witnessing Zoya's and Asad's separation had taken a toll on her. She had always blamed herself for all the family's unhappiness, Shireen and Razia would add to her pain by taunting her constantly. Her pillar of faith, her Zoya and Asad had gone away, far from her. She didn't know how to live, but she did in hope that they would return. And when they did, she was happy, but she felt worse when she heard about Zoya's suicide attempt, but she hoped and prayed that Allah would set everything straight. And today He had, she was happy that her Akdu son was finally happily married to the woman he was madly in love with, after all the pain he has been through he deserved all the happiness in the world. She thanked her lucky stars for bringing Zoya into their lives. She couldn't have asked for a better life partner for her son; finally her son and daughter-in-law were complete.

Asad watched his wife with love while thanking Allah for sending her in his life like a storm. He never knew he'd fall in love, and that too with a girl like her. He loved teasing her, fighting with her, smiling with her, and living his life with her. He loved everything about her, her eyes, her smile, her dimple, her giggles, her shayaris, her shamelessness, basically, he loved her inside and out. He remembered his talk about love with his Ammi years ago, and how his mother had explained that to be in love means to feel complete. And that's exactly how he felt, complete.

Zoya was cleaning everything up, she could feel his gaze on her, but she tried to avoid looking up because she knew that she would drop her plate as soon as she would look up. She couldn't believe after all these years she was finally here, with him. She was glad that she left Akram at the altar and ended up living here in this house. She couldn't believe how she eventually fell in love with a man who didn't fit into any of the things she imagined her Prince Charming's description; yet he was so much more. He wasn't romantic, or emotionally apt but for her, he could do anything. Hell, he had written 1100 letters to her! He had completed all of her five wishes from her wishlist, he had gone over and beyond to make her happy. And she couldn't have been happier with her life at the moment, she was always doubtful about her past, she always felt a little incomplete due to her lack of knowledge about her past. But, today she didn't know what the future held in store for them, yet she knew she had nothing to fear as long as Mr. Khan was with her. She finally, felt complete.

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Hey thanks for updating so soon. The chapter was good as all the others have been always. You are a good writer dear.

Thanks for pmsing me always and do pm me for any more works that you update.

I know it may be some time before you update as theres no motivation due to KSG's exit from the show.😭

Will miss your writing.

gr8 part

That was awsome.. Loved the ways guys entered the girls room and shock in all the 3 girls face 😊...Also loved the late night Zoya teasing Asad in the balcony... This part was apt...

yaay:)
finally married!:)
superb update!
sad it ends..but will.be waiting for the epilogue...

superb
loved it
thanks 4 pm
waiting for epilogue