AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!'

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

What an awesome, cute and sexy update

The bathroom scene was hot and fun...Poor Humeira😆

Everything was going great and then the message came...

I bet it's that Zafar the duffer😔

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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: NAVI55
What an awesome, cute and sexy update

The bathroom scene was hot and fun...Poor Humeira😆

Everything was going great and then the message came...

I bet it's that Zafar the duffer😔

OMG NAVI55,

Your reading speed is like speed of light.

You read it so quick,.Haha! I knew we would love the bathtub collectively.

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

AWESOME PART

hope no rifts bt asya

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lasya13

@lasya13

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Oh no... misunderstanding again...
is that idiot zafar who was on zoya's chat..???
but the whole update was awesome.. specially zoya's pov...
u r an amazing writer...

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow!! super long update!!🥳🥳

and I love it!!

asad teasing zoya..😳

she is getting all embarrassed...

zoya's level of comfort with asad..

and getting hot and need with those naughty tease of asad was so cute..😳

she is trying to get him jealous..😉

humeira showing the photo part was so hilarious...🤣

car jalebi romance and bathroom romance was so hot and cute..

love the possessive side of asad..

he is trying to fulfill zoya's crazy fantasies...

and the last few lines were scary..😲

is someone trying to play in between?? (the guy in the shop??)

update soon..

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Hi Juliet,

Lovely update as usual 😳

Why did u have to ruin it 😡

I was enjoying myself and at the end you just ruined my mood why, why, Why

I simply loved the bathroom scene...by the way nice way of someone getting in the bath tub. It was really hot 😳 every time she tries to make him jealous, he turns the table on her. I hope she is not playing another one of her stupid games.

It's time for confession...please make her do it soon. 😊

It's always a pleasure to read your updates, so update the next part soon.

Love,

Vinita

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

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943154

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Finally 🥱😆kidding
'"I am her king, in the real world" Asad remarked cutting in, "She lives with me now, my Queen for life. Forever Happily ever after." He said this wsss bst
"OH MY GOD! At least close your bedroom door!" screamed Humeira as she covered her eyes and stormed out of the bathroom.
Y??????😡y humiii??? y u always ruin their romance

Something ran down the stairs, he turned. She stood bare feet in front of him panting while he gazed her with his questioning looks.

She moved quickly to pant a kiss one his cheek, " Come Soon! I will wait for you."

Zoya smiled. His stubborn frown vanished and he smiled back. " I will miss you." She said again before turning around to climb back the stairs. She stopped at the entrance door. Now Go! So that you can come back soon! Zoya smiled shy.

awww😳

n regarding end

that AOL msg ws may b from asad😕

let c 😃

in short Dair aye Drust aye 😉🤗

👍🏼

Edited by ..NIDA... - 12 years ago