AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 104

Originally posted by: shee6_sarya

Firstly being a silent reader lng bk Bt here I flt d need to cmmnt dt wht a storyline maahnnn!!!!srsly amazing plot n amazin dscrptn of pain love anguish intensity!!!wht a fab writer ur I MST say!!!!each chpter is a gripping n nailbitting one!!!!classy!!!!plzzz update soon!!!!!!! A die hard fan of ur fiction!!!!

Originally posted by: kals82

Hmmm
Tuesday. ..cannot update by Monday. ...by the heard the song in the morning itself as stalking ur thread. ...
This fight of asya..reminded me my big one. ...butmy hubby said we had two. ...
Hehehe. ...street fight. .
Love u..

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

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Hey Kalyani,

How beautiful and heart breaking is that song. I have listened to it a million times. I plan to listen to it when I update too to get into Asad's mood.😉

OH street fight. I am telling you again, you need an FF on your love story and you can add me as a character who makes the dumb heroine understand the meeting of true love she has for her hubby.😛

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hi Shee6_sarya

Glad you choose to post a comment because I love reading them.

Thank you so much for all your praises about my writing. So happy you liked it.

Classy ! ☺️ Now on one has called me that. I will take it very fashionably.

A die Hard FAN! - WOW! I am thrilled.

Yes will update soon.😃

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

HI Simi,

Yeah Poor Asad. What can I say, things will look up and get better soon.

No I don't like angst myself but there is one more chapter of sad lurking.

Recreating a love story will happen after the next update. You know when you reach a point of broken so strong that you are not afraid to lose anything at all. I just hope I can create that.

Rashid is Mr. No balls. I will darling make it better soon. But it has to complete the circle.

Thanks for reading my story and your ever motivating and insightful comment.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hi FaRz,

Such a wonderful thing to write for me. Oh I feel like dancing now. You made me smile.

I might take you on your offer of cupcakes and chocolates after I post the next update.

The butterflies are mainly Zoya's subconscious self. About Asad being a lover she deserves, Zoya behaved the same way with Tanveer as Asad did with Zafar. How was it any different. Zoya has all shades of territorial, controlling, predatory.

The truth is when one is vulnerable and insecure, challenged that your love is slipping away, It bring out the worst in you. Zoya hitting Tanveer was just to show how Zoya becomes a shade of Asad himself. Of that violent Asad that she so complained and hated.

But a writer and reader think differently. According to me if Asad lacks faith or has trust issues Zoya did nothing to fix them till now.

Thank you for your beautiful comment. Truly made my day. I do hope to read your insight after I post the next chapter. Hope the cupcakes still last.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hi Aashna,

I read both your comments.

All I have to say is, you are on holidays and you still take the time to encourage and motivate me with the same valor. I have no words for you.

You are just too nice to me for some reason.

How can I ever say you hate me. Yeah thank god you read the balance of your question on Sadie's thread. I would have kept emailing you otherwise.

Still not well completely but yes better it is getting.

How are you doing? Eat pani puris for me. Are you in Punjab or Gujrat! Or someplace else right now.

Have Fun Girl! Talk soon.

MUaahhh! Love and hugs.