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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Comment edited on page 4 😃

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

That was so so adorable, Ankie.

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

SUCH A CUTE LITTLE OS! WE GET NO

SCENES OF ASYA. IT IS DEPRESSING . YUR

STORY WAS A NICE CHANGE. KEEP IT UP

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
OMG that was beautiful, what would I not do to see such a scene in QH. Zoya was so cute, and so endearing how she understood Asad and his emotions without him even expressing them. She was able to make him smile and that is what I'd love to see in QH as well. Please write more Ankie 😳

Thank you SO MUCH Anku 🤗

I always wish that Zoya understands Asad without him expressing even a single word like he does for her. And poor guy must be still feeling bad as she called him a Heartless creature not the person whom she fell in love with. 😆

Me and My Muse 😭 We are rarely on a talking term basis 😆

But sure i will write as QH and encouraging readers like you continue to inspire me ⭐️

Hope you truly liked it. 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

brilliant one-shot..simply loved it...👍🏼

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KJSGforever

@KJSGforever

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I really wishd u were the writer of the show Instead of tht jerk GUL

UGHHH I HATE HER :/

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
RES!!

Haven't read it yet but I still pressed the like button.. I'm sure it won't disappoint 😃.. I'm heading off to work.. I'll read it when I get there 😆

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That was so cute!

ANNIIEEE 🤗

Firstly, I love an angry Asad 😆 he's just overly sexy when he's fuming 😆

Muawaaha AWEFREAKINGSOME HE is when he is FUMING AND ERUPTING RAGE 👏 😆

Everything was perfectly described and I loved the dialogues. It sounded much better in Hindi than in English 😃 and all the words were chosen with great care 👏

THANK YOU SO MUCH for the little grace you took over the language 😳

I couldnt stop laughing at their whole bathroom fiasco starting from when Asad asked her if she would like to follow him there as well to when Zoya commented about his six pack 😆 .. Very nice little comical scene after a stressful one 👍🏼

😆 Something which QH tries to provide all the time, but then people start to label it as CHEESY ROMANCE 😭 😆

Poor Asad crying 😭 but the ending was great.. The usual Asad-Zoya quarreling.. Like they can never get through the day without a little argument 😆

😆 Cause if they dont fight their day will not go fine 🤣 They need to fight for digesting their food 🤣

I literally laughed out loud at the Eagle and Hawk sentence.. Perfect! 🤣 🤣

THANK YOU. 😃

Wonderfully written 😃

Thank you once again! 🤗 I hope you enjoyed and it was worth all the time you spend on this rather than working 😆

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart
I can totally imagine something like this happening on the show! So apt! Loved it loads!

Thank you RAZ 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Originally posted by: Npdeepa
Wonderful yaar...👏
but we won't see them share the same room😭

how i wish it to become real in reel...😳😆

Thank you Deepa Dii 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Originally posted by: _Mamai_
🤗

Thank you 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik
Asad...
Aww Zoya's hug was sweet when she told him that he may cry 🤗
I LOVED IT!!!!!!! 😃 😳

Thank you 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Originally posted by: NidoNimami
👍🏼

Thank you 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mochhug
Ankie why don't you start an FF or an SS again!?!?! Please???
I loved this. How Zoya refused to leave him alone, but saw through his anger, and how he really did want Rashid to be okay

Even though that man doesn't deserve the concern 🤬

But your OS was lovely

I DID START. 😡

U DIDNT BOTHER TO READ EVEN 😡

HERE IS THE LINK > [The Nib & The Ink]

READ AND LET ME KNOW 😡 😆

Thank you my sweety 🤗 Asad loves his father, moreover he is feeling guilty, 😳 😆 And Zoya is his strength, if she doesn't understands him,who else will? 😳