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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

such a amazing wrk ankie...

plz pen down ur wrk very oftenly..

i love to read stuffs frm ur side

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ziya117

@ziya117

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

cute wala scene!! 😳

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

RES!!

Haven't read it yet but I still pressed the like button.. I'm sure it won't disappoint 😃.. I'm heading off to work.. I'll read it when I get there 😆

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That was so cute!

Firstly, I love an angry Asad 😆 he's just overly sexy when he's fuming 😆

Everything was perfectly described and I loved the dialogues. It sounded much better in Hindi than in English 😃 and all the words were chosen with great care 👏

I couldnt stop laughing at their whole bathroom fiasco starting from when Asad asked her if she would like to follow him there as well to when Zoya commented about his six pack 😆 .. Very nice little comical scene after a stressful one 👍🏼

Poor Asad crying 😭 but the ending was great.. The usual Asad-Zoya quarreling.. Like they can never get through the day without a little argument 😆

I literally laughed out loud at the Eagle and Hawk sentence.. Perfect! 🤣 🤣

Wonderfully written 😃

Edited by x_Mishti_x - 11 years ago

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

THAT WAS SO CUTE !

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shonajain

@shonajain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

superawsume
supercuteee
tooo amazing
bole to PERFECT 😛😳

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ankiee!!!!!!

You made me sooo happy! The only thing that I was focusing on/ looking forward to were the sleeping arrangements in SM, alas Zoya is bunking with the girls!😭👎🏼

But THIS!

THANK YOU!🤗

😆

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

lovely 1!!

but y would dilshad agree to them sharing a room??

sorry if i missed this bit😳

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

haww!!!itni acchi OS likhi hai tune aja jhappi pale🤗
i so so wanted dem 2 stay in da same room at SM bt phuti kismat hamari...lekin fir bhi shayad is type scene ka show mein dekhne ko mil jae as zoya says naummeedi gunaah hai😆
arre yar tu bhi how mean bathroom jane dete ek sath dono ko☺️...oh!dis makes me remember i miss AsYa bathroom scenes😳
luvd da way zoya tried 2 console da angry lion❤️
& i adored their bed-couch bickering...aww...arre koi couch hatao wahase fir toh no choice rather dan sharing da bed🤣