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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

ohh dear...
get well soon..
em sick tooo...😔
fractured my hand.. cant type much

-fuii-



Oh dear!! I'm better now, I hope you feel better soon too! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meezishu

This is seriously the best FF I've read on here so far, I've been quietly stalking it for a while now 😊 Seriously the whole 'office dynamic' between Asya was something I wished had been shown on the actual show when the whole 'visa-expiry' drama was going on.

You wrote the entire story brilliantly so far.
Take care & I hope you get well soon!



Aw thank you! Yes it was something I had hoped to see too, and since they didn't give it to us, I decided to imagine it up myself hahaha. Glad you like it, and yes I am better now! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Ek jaadu ki jhappi meri taraf se!!! 🤗



Aw Narges ji! Thanks for the jadoo ki jhappi, it brought my health right back to normal (: I'm gonna reply all your comments now hahaha.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sadafchoudhury

I am back and this is the first story i read. Its great im loving it



Where have you been anyway!! Glad to see you here and glad you're enjoying it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Phew...finally, here I am again. Fighting against all odds 😆 So without wasting any time (which I have done a lot) lets start with the next part...


Part 15
The whole trip back you were busy yakking on the phone with Miss Narges (Yakking?! Hello, excuse me Miss Farooqui but we were discussing some serious business okay. Aur waise bhi, aapko koi problem hai?!)

"I'm not jealous of Miss Narges alright?!" (Darling...admit it. Makes life so much easier and simple)

"Ji Najma, it is that nice lady! (Dilshaad khala, aap bahot achi ho)

"Wow, she's such a loving daughter! (RK mom, are you listening??? Yahan meri tareef ho rahi hain)

with the discussion in your room (I like the idea of discussing things in his room. However: what happens in his bedroom, stays in his bedroom...)

And she's such a kind and successful young woman too (This is seriously something I would like to aspire; being a successful young woman)

mujhe lagta hai woh bichara shayad baat karne ki bohut kosish karta hoga, but you most likely never leave him any opportunity to! So mera suggestion yeh hai, that on Monday, you try to stay quiet for at least two minutes, and then maybe you'll be able to hear him speak. How's the poor guy going to be heard over the commotion you're constantly making? (WHAT?!! 🤣 This one is hilarious! I can totally imagine Mr. Khan saying this to he and then her expression)

And to think the people at work thought she was in a relationship with this highly infuriating man. Never! (Never say never, my dear Zoya... Love bas ho jata hain. BTW, you do not need to worry when I am here) 😳


Woohoo, yet another comment done! I am on a roll 😎 Okay enough of the narcissism. Waise bhi, half of the update was about me being so nice and all. Kitna acha lagta hain na jab log aap ke tareef kare...😳 You just know me too well, Green! 😉
You must have already figured out...modesty is definitely NOT my middle name. Jokes apart, I am a very well behaved and mannered young woman (ask my RK mom)...but discussing work in a bedroom might lead to some other issues unrelated to work..

I totally enjoyed this update! Loved the way Zoya was (a bit) jealous of Miss Narges. I hope I can meet Dilshaad and Najma soon to have some chit chat and fun times.

He just slammed the door shut?! Hahaha, that man needs his rest... but Zoya being Zoya, how can she sleep without talking to him...

Thank you!!! 🤗



Hahaha I realize looking for your posts now is more difficult that it seems. But I will persevere! I do hope you become a successful young woman then (: Aap acchi hi ho, is liye itne tareef kiye maine (: Hahaha the project is pretty long, there's plenty of opportunity to meet Dilshaad and Najma still haha let's see! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

A new day, a new chance to comment...

Hi Green ji, how are you? All well??? Chalo kuch kaam ke baat karte hain.

Part 16
And to think Asad kept calling her childish (Zoya ke saath saath, Mr. Khan has also become childish) 😆

Asad stood shirtless in front of his bed, tying the string of his pajama (...oh...my...God...can't...talk) ☺️

Zoya thanked her lucky stars for not coming any earlier than that (This girl is not normal. I would have cursed my unlucky stars for not coming earlier)

He was having the time of his life annoying her, so now it was payback time! (Oh no...what is she up to?!)

Zoya dove for the bed, hiding under the covers (Yeah, great place to hide!!!)

his sleep-ridden voice sounding even sexier than usual (Ehum...excuse me, what did you say? I heard only a sexy voice...) 😳

She punched his back in irritation (This is totally something I would have done as well) 😆

she'd just have to think of something herself (Oh no...Zoya Farooqui and her ideas...)


Whahaha, very nice update! How she ended up in his bed next to him... Okay, chalo will forgive you that this time nothing as such happened lekin if this happens again, I want some romance! 😳 Mr. Khan was not affected by those rumors at all??? Does he not want to get affected ya phir, is he scared that some day it might turn out to be true 😉
What the hell is Zoya going to do now... yeh ladki bhi nah, with her unusual ideas 😆

Next comment, coming up!



HAHA I love how affected you are just by the tying of his pajama string hahahaha. Romance agle parts mein diye the na maine?? (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

I am on a roll...two comments, in one day! Did I had a choice? I don't think so.

Before you give us another update, I have to make sure to unres all of it!

Here we go again...

Part 17
Ah, who was he kidding? She looked hot (Good, very good Mr. Khan. This is were it all begins: confession to yourself) 😉

Zoya pulled out a sparkling white bicycle from behind the car (What the?! For real?!)

I've decided that I want to travel to work in a more environmentally-friendly manner (WHAT?! 🤣)

You spend half your time littering the ground with your rubbish (Hahahaha, Mr. Khan, aap bhi nah!)

he'd just take a cab till the building before Dilshaad Constructions, and then ride the bicycle for the remainder of the journey (Yeh ladki nahin sudhrenge) 😆

Your efforts to go green (Is this update dedicated to yourself?) 😛😆

the tiniest of smiles forming on his face (It all begins with that one tiny smile) 😳

Asad whispered into Zoya's ear as he leaned his face into hers, tickling her cheek with his breath (Even my cheek got tickled with his breath) 😳😛

Both Asad and Zoya found themselves holding their breaths a little. It was going to be a long ride indeed (I can very well imagine both of them on the bike, how romantic!)



Okay...so this is how Zoya wants to put and end to all those rumors? HA, what a joke! She going to work on a bicycle was already a flop plan, but now this... she and Mr. Khan on a bike, woh bhi in that position is definitely NOT gonna make things better.
Zoya's idea of wanting to go green, has to be one of the MOST hilarious idea's of hers ever! 😆 And never ever had I thought that Mr. Khan would 'support' her on this one.
A bike ride...wow, what a scene yaar! Would love to see that on the show once. This Mr. Khan is different and I just love him for that! 😳

You know what I love even more??? The fact that I can go and unres my other comment, since the update is already there! 😆😆




Hahaha actually I just wanted to get them on one bicycle somehow, that's why the premise is a little lame :p But I'm glad it worked for you anyway hahaha (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Almost there! Yes, bahot mehnat ke baad, I have reached it till part 18. It was a tough ride but I am not the one who gives up very easily! Still some energy left.



Part 18
He proceeded to brush Zoya's wind-tossed hair backwards a little, trying to bring some semblance of order to it, while Zoya reached forward to straighten Asad's collar and coat (How cute, already behaving like a typical hubby-wife. Nice start) 😊😳

thoughts of Zoya's body pressing against his throughout the bicycle ride running through his mind unabashedly (A ride to remember) 😳😉

The mess had become even bigger now (Oh really? Damn, did not see that one coming...)

"That's Mr Vinod Mehta, the vice president," (Aap yeh saala Vinod kaun hain?!) 😕

What's the deal with that? (Detective Farooqui???)


Okay, first let me tell you that usually I read the updates but but but, this time I did not. I wanted to keep it a surprise for myself. Usually, I know whats gonna happen in the next part but not this time. So, you said speculate away... Who the hell is this new character??? My first feeling: he is behaving way too friendly with Mr. Khan. Okay, both might have high positions lekin phir bhi, I do not get a good feeling about him. He does not do any work, but still Mr. Khan gives him that much importance and all... What the deal?
Your genre is rom-com so a negative character/villain would not really fit into the story, but I would not be surprises if this Vinod turns out to be a backstabber...

One more part to go...I am sooo excited because I really want to know whats gonna happen next!



Hahaha I have lots of energy left to read the comments too :p I'm really glad that you chose to keep yourself in suspense even though I already updated haha that's ridiculously sweet (: Let's see if Vinod is a bad guy, or just a misunderstood guy! All in good time (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Just when I thought, I had made it...you come and give us another update. I hoped to stand still but no, I have to keep running now...Chalo koi baat nahin, progression is the key to success


Part 19
Satay chicken! (I love that!!!) 😃

for two reasons (I would like to add a third, and most important reason, she likes to spend time with Mr. Khan whether she admits or not)

and he really needed to loosen up (Let the man wash his hands! Aur waise bhi, he needs to loosen up with other things...you know) 😉

He'd have to thank Monica on the way out later (Oh ho, Miss Monica would be more than happy to hear a thank you from her boss)

while Zoya fed him (So cute!) 😊😳

Was he... jealous? (YES, he IS!!! Clearly!)

to wipe her slightly oily hands (Eww...typical Zoya. Thank God, Mr. Khan stopped her at the right moment)

Right, just to get Vinod's number, she was even willing to wash her hands? (I am loving this Mr. Jealous Ahmed Khan) 😛

GET YOUR FACTS RIGHT BEFORE ACCUSING ME! (Go Zoya go! Uske itne himmat to accuse you!) 😡👍🏼

What the hell! First Vinod, then Vijay, how many guys did this girl want?! (*doing a happy dance with a huge big smile*) 😃

"Then go back to work and impress the pants off of Vijay why don't you!" Asad roared (Whoa dude, don't roar just like that. Control, control...)

the model slid off the wobbly table, pieces of white foam flying across the cabin as it crashed onto the ground in a pool of crumpled mess (OH...MY...GOD!!! NOOO) 😡



WHAT?! The model crashed into pieces? What did you do! Both, RK mom and me, are not going to like this. Especially me. RK mom is more sweet but I can be quite bitchy and bossy when things are not going the way I want (Oops, am I really like that?!) Maybe not, lekin yeh acha nahin hua. Now pay for it!
This Vijay...glad that Zoya gave it back at him but not sure if the whole situation got better. I am sure, rumors will get even worse now. Sorry dear, your outburst did not help actually...
The best part: a jealous Mr. Khan! I am just loving this! I always wanted to see him getting jealous. I really wonder what his other reactions will be. Just continue with this one and bring in some jealous wala romance 😳😉

I am in love with this Mr. Khan. There, I said it...
But they really need to worry about that model...good luck to them! Oh btw, I have not read the update yet, so its all new and exciting for me!


Thank you!!!



I love satay chicken too (: Hahaha now don't you and your mom be too harsh on them! The model fell because of muqaddar, ab kya kar sakte hai :p

And I reached your final unres-ed comment!! I did it!! Hahaha. Waise, re-reading all your comments made me re-live those chapters, and I love it (: It's really, really, really nice of you to bother to un-res your comments despite the fact that I put up the next update, not many people bother to do that!

And of course your comments themselves are always a pleasure to read. Thank you Narges ji (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Aw Narges ji! Thanks for the jadoo ki jhappi, it brought my health right back to normal (: I'm gonna reply all your comments now hahaha.


Woohoo, you replied to all of my comments!!! Thank you sooo much! 🤗
I am glad you are feeling better now. That jaadu ki jhappi did it 😆 You are one of my fav writers means I will always unres my comments even if you have updated the next chapter. Reading your stories makes me feel good matlab mein tumhari peecha nahin chor ne waali 😉
Ek baat ke liye mein aapse naraaz hoon...'Narges ji'? Phir se wohi ji... kya yaar 😡😛

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