AsYa TS: The Perks of Coffee Breaks *COMPLETE*

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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Yay! A new story! This was a great start...loving it already...looking forward to what happens next now that Zoya's working for Mr. Silky Locks! 😆 😳

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RAJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

What a beautiful story. Very interesting.Love it. Waiting to see what happend next. Thanks for pm and update soon

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-.-Mariam-.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

That was SUPERBLY AMAZING...

Loved reading it..

Continie soon..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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linta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Update soon please

😭😭😭

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
Mine.

*Edited*

Oh my god! This was so amazing , Raz.
Such a different and unique concept. Fabulous job! 👍🏼

Can you please please please update soon ?

The part where asad says 'not interested' even before Zoya could complete her 'hello'.. haha it was hilarious 😆 Poor Zoe!

And he's her boss! Aww!
I swear I will spam too much If you dont update soon!

Lots of love!

P.S.- First to comment. Yippeee!
🥳

Thank you! Will update as soon as I can!

Spam away m'dear 😆

Congrats on being first to comment! 😃

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Obviously continue...! that's hardly a question to ask that too from u...! so plz plz update sooonish...! eagerly w8in..!

Thanks! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: maha2012
OMG plzzz continue😃😳
the way u just described asad was amazing😉
but that idiot said "not interested" to zoya😡
now i want him to go crazy after her😛
just loved it!! plz update soon😃

I described Asad the way he is, 😛. Idiot, huh? Hopefully I'll be able to change that with the next update.

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Beautifully written...u really have an amazing talent
Thank u for the PM

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: manognasai
This was just awesome!👏
Zoya drooling over her Mr.Silky locks for three months now!
When she tried to talk,he without seeing her said not interested!Thats the attitude man...[8-]
When Humeira is praising Asad Ahmed Khan,Zoya shook her head refusing to beleive that anyother man besides Mr.Silky locks have the capability of making a woman stop her breath...
And it was him.Waiting for the next part.Update soon.Cant wait to see their reactions...😃

Who wouldn't drool over Mr. Silky Locks? 😆

He's got attitude...or does he??

Well, hey, she has to defend him doesn't she?

WIl update soon!

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Wow, this is so intriguing! 👏
And I kinda have a thing for coffee shop stories. 😳 I love 'em!

Do continue soon, it's really interesting! 😃

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Thanks Fari!

Hopefully you'll like the next update too!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes
u have to continue Raz...it's not even a question👏

Lol, okay. Thanks!

Originally posted by: madina12
Yes pls continue

Will do!

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

No problemo! Glad you liked it! Will PM you soon!

Originally posted by: MsTiara
Very nice! 👏
Please continue.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
is there even the need to ask?? obviously u should continue!!!
that was mindblowing!!!👏
Mr silky locks was so rude to zoya in the coffee shop!!
eager to know wat happens next!!!!
continue soon!

Yes there is a need to ask, who knows? Maybe you might not like it 😆

Alright, will continue it then!

He was rude but that's Mr. Silky Locks for you.

Originally posted by: Linnet

Please continue

Please...

It was amazing

😛

Will continue it then!

Originally posted by: laks_vish
are you kidding buddy..you are asking to continue or not Kuch bhi(Zoya style)..Please do continue dear...waiting

Lol, next update will be up soon!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
mindblowing
eager for the rest

Thanks!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
its awesome yaar

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs
Awesum..intrstng...plz continue esoon n pm..

Thanks and will do!

Originally posted by: Applef
awesome...

wow!! asad was so ...😲

not interested.. that was showing attitude..

poor zoya, was admiring him and then now cursing..😆

was that her bad luck or good luck that she is his secretary now??

update soon..

Thank you! Attitude man strikes back, eh? See if it were me, I would consider it a blessing to be his secretary, but that's just me. 😆

Originally posted by: rads73937
OMG!!!!
What a start!!!
Mr. Silky Locks??
Nice.
Continue super soon.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

Yup, Mr. Silky Locks. Karan did say that his hair was silky so I derived it from that 😆

Thanks will continue soon and will let you know!

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Unresed on page one! ❤️

Read and replied! Thankuus!

Originally posted by: life4me
Beautiful start. Please continue soon.

Thanks, will do!

Originally posted by: snehasya
hey it was such a wonderful story and to continue or not to continue isn't the question but when to continue and when to update should be the questions rather I guess if you are writing such a wonderfull story would really love to read next part
please update soon and if you can turn it into ss or ff it would be great no it would be awesome
thanks for pm

Lol, it is indeed the question. Appreciate your suggestion on turning it into a SS or a FF but I think I will keep it to a TS. Thanks and will continue soon!

Originally posted by: friendsall
Is thr any doubt u shud continue !! don ask such silly questions.. u being one of my fav writers here.. wud suggest u make it a SS or FF.. please ..

Thank you! Aww, thanks again. I've gotten that suggestion but I think I will stick to it being a TS with extremely looonnggg updates. Hope you don't mind.

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: VeronicaWest
omg
i hope asad feels the same way as zoya
i love the ts
please continue

Thanks! Let's see what happens.

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Have to continue. A talented writer like yourself is not supposed to ask such a question, but should in fact shower us readers with updates only..

Am not? Oh well, no worries. Will try to shower you with updates.

Originally posted by: --Radhika--
Continue soon I love it!
Please PM me.

Thanks! Will do!

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Amazing dear. .plZ update asad

Thanks!

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
wow..its a well written part... continue soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Kyara.95
I've read many AsYa stories in which Zoya is Asad's PA but still I enjoyed reading it. 😛
The concept is not a new one but the way you presented/wrote it, it gave a whole new frame to the idea.
So, here's a round of applause for you 👏

For me, the best scene in this part was..

Here he was, coming slowly towards her, she would say hello to him.

5.

4.

3.

2.

1.

0.

"He-."

"Not interested," he said as he brushed passed her without sparing her a glance. Zoya stood there, dumbfounded.

This part was just Amazing! 😃
Great job, Raz! 😊
Update ASAP.

Hehe, me and my gutter mind. But really glad you liked it so much!

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
Nice
will b waiting 4r nxt

Thanks!

Originally posted by: princess101
This is very good I love it thanx for the pm and update soon pleaseee😃

Thank you dear!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
OMG! This is just sooo romanticcc :D
I'm mush.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: vinita459
Are u kidding please continue. Update soon please...can't wait to read more.

Will do! Thanks!

Originally posted by: zola007
That was freaking awesome !!
Zoya's routine has been up to 3 months !
and she gets a " not interested " !!😡
The way you described Mr Silky Locks was just wow !
cant wait to read more
continue soon
and do pm me if possible 😊

Three months of shameless staring and drooling. I only described what I pictured in my head, I guess. Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Raz,

Good to see you back. the TS is absolutely awesome. You must have got that by now, seeing the number of response to it.
I just loved it, the name Mr. Silky Locks; suits him so much.
Oh god it was so cute of Zoe to narrow her eyes at the other women staring at Asad, while she ding just the same & only because she saw him FIRST. She is absolutely adorable. Aww she has been watching for 3 months now. Ayan & Humi are really nice to be handling her job so well.
I can't believe Asad said "not Interested" without hearing a complete word from her. I guess he's used to women throwing them at him so he thought its another one.
But like really Zoe has got bad for him. She only keeps thinking of him & believes no one can be as sexy as him. Well this only gets better with Zoe being his PA.
Gosh it's gonna be hell exciting to see them work together, that is if Asad doesn't throw her out for dropping the files.
Please continue a bit soon.

Love..

Thanks! Doesn't matter about the number of responses, it's all in the response itself. It does, doesn't it! I remember Karan talking about how silky his hair is so I was like "Well Mr. Silky Locks...THAT'S IT! THAT'S THE NAME!"

Zoya's all about finders keepers, losers weepers.

That's Asad for you I guess.

Let's see what happens next.

Originally posted by: mochhug
RES

😆 Res kiya iss page pe, comment diya doosre page pe. 😆

Originally posted by: anopama
omg awesome
zoya is a stalker
she have been ogling the guy for 3 mth
not interested... really
wonder for how long?
do continue

Thanks! She is isn't she? Good question, wonder for how long.