AsYa TS: The Perks of Coffee Breaks *COMPLETE* - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww i love how she told him about how it was love at first sight for her. And jealous Asad as a treat to watch! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was awsome.. 😊.. Lovely TS.. Please do write few more.. 😊
Asad's reaction when she was telling about Mr. Silky locks. was a treat to read.. Finally..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do u have anymorr stories? If so pleaseee pm me the links. I want to read so badly. Oh my GOSH u are such an amazing writer dear 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really very sweet.
The way zoya described him and asad got jealous on Mr.Silky Locks.
Loved it.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
so long updates & that too so many. u shld hv converted into a SS... a modern fairy tale.. so perfect. especially those floating cups of coffee... continue soon with ur other work. ...& plz do pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey... beautiful writer..
like i promised here is my appreciation comment and like i had hoped it to be... this was a really beautiful, fascinating and an enriching update... really i had never thought of the perks of the coffee breaks until i read these posts... must confess that ive started loving coffee even more... and i hope to find someone over a cup of hot coffee ... well v never know how interesting it can get cozur characters made it look quite beautiful...
well to sum it up... this has been a joy to read and youve been a wonderful writer... thanks for the update and for bearing with me over the weekdays...
until next time...
keep writing and updating..
a.sharma 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my god!
The best ever so far on Asya.
I feel terrible because not only Zoya was feeling it but me too. The office kiss just blew my senses. Girl, hats off.
Such elusive and incredible writing.
And thr way story unfolded to the last bits in the cafe was just Grawsome.

And last suprise. You made tanveer a waitress 😆


Very well written. Thank you for the pms and sorry for the delay to respond back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
After reading the update I spent 5 minutes looking at your siggie... Ariya ❤️
I loved this last part a lot

so beautifully written

The confession of Zoya's was the best

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Posted: 11 years ago
I just love this TS
All emotions blended into one beautifully written story
Loved every single part
from Zoya's blush to Asad's Naughtiness
Zoya's narration and Asad's confession were absolutely Amazing
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story Raz. ⭐️👏👏
Mr. Silky Locks seems yum!
Brilliantly written! Way to go! 👍🏼

Love
Mrina
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