AsYa TS: The Perks of Coffee Breaks *COMPLETE*

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

that was just awesome loved it

keep doing

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Awesome!!
Zoya tortured him!!!
Finally dey confessed!!
I loved it!!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

hey tis is amazing...

beautifully written...

luv it...

fabulous...

thx fr the pm...

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Awww this was such a sweet TS !

Completely in love with it <3

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Hey Raz,

Finally I got to read the 2nd & 3rd parts together. I had been wanting to read the 2nd part for so long but due to it being a members post couldn't but I guess it was more nice & interesting to read them in one go.

Well what to say about this TS, as always you've put words in such a beautiful manner to portray tis interesting plot. I just loved it.

I had thought that only Zoe was attracted towards Asad to no point of return but I was wrong. Mr. Silky Locks was in the same boat. Their interactions were so powerful. I just loved the teasing smile that crept on Asad's face seeing Zoe blush & his witty comments. their first kiss was just too good but the convo after that had me rolling.

What took my heart away was Asad's confession, because despite being a renown Businessman, his nervousness & fear was just too adorable to see. How he accepted his feelings & told her how much he wanted to be hers.

Zoe's confession at the coffee house seemed just apt. I mean their relationship should move forward to a new level from where it all began. I couldn't help but feel bad for Asad yet smile at how he was getting jealous on mention of some guy. & his possessiveness when he heard Zoe had seen him without a shirt. it was all too nice & sweet to read. I could just visualize everything, his face expressions & all.

Now this was another one of your piece that I've enjoyed thoroughly. Keep it up.

Lots of Love..