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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Awesome ending
Im happy Asad was there for Zoya and that Zoya was their for Humeira
Eeeks finally they were caught
I loved the last AsYa conversation

I'm so glad you liked it. i hope it was not too rushed?

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: cutiesanya
So sad, the beautiful journey is over. The last part
Was a bunch of beautiful moments. Happy that game
Of raziya end. Zoya asad grave scene was the most
Emotional one. Asad promising to be there even for
Toothless zoe and zoe confused of being there of a
Six pack devoid asad is so cute.
Happy endings are always awesome.

the journey is not over. it is the beginning of a beautiful journey for AsYa

i have always imagined the grave scene to be something like that and honestly i had written the grave scene before all other chapters. after writing the grave scene i thought ill write an SS and then i made the plot revolving around the grave scene 😃😃

thanks for the wonderful comment 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
I just loved it! it was beautifully written and heart wrenching and emotional. although its gonna be a while until Zoya finds out the truth about her parents you've described exactly how she would react. amazing ending to a wonderful story!

im so glad you liked it. i hope it was not too much of an emotional rollercoaster and i really hope i did full justice to the scene!

thanks for the comment 😃