Asya SS ~ Tu Jahan Main Wahan!l LAST PART ON PAGE 13 - Page 11

Perfect story wid perfect ending..

I'm one of those silent readers and since this is the final update to this very intriguing FF, I thought it'd be nice to say something.

I have from the very start been following this story of yours (even before I finally made up my mind to be a member) and needless to say it has come a long way (quite literally), and every update had been a great read. My favourite part remains when Zoya massages Asad's back. Tugged a few chords of this heart of mine! It wasn't just the contact, it was just the need for Zoya to do something and subsequently Asad's quiet acceptance was what made it memorable. And meaningfully special.

Like they say, all good things must come to an end, this story too has! And I'd like to congratulate you and express my heartiest thanks for sharing with us readers what is to me a great piece of art.

Much love and support,
FaRz

p/s would love to read more from you!

That was a beautiful ending Sadie !! I loved the whole part but last scene made me smile all the time !! It was sooo cute Loved the way he confessed his feelings not opening up too much and she asking him that will he be there even if she is toothless 😆 and taking time to think if she will love him when he is not having six packs anymore !! I seriously loved it !! And read the last scene three times and I guess I will read again tooo 😉 I hate 'The End' but understand as each story has to end one day but what about epilogue ?? 😆 Do think about it !!

wow the end
so cute the six packs will be gone
haha

Good ending :)

Hey Sadie,

oh my god

i am so happy u finished this...

u know why... that u will start start updating woh actually... if it is even after christmas...

i like this too... but i am in love withth other one...

happy x-mas... enjoy... update the other one...

i think u rushed the whole thing into one update... but loved it...

nice to see rashid and asad patch up...