The Mark of Innocence: Chapter 9 Pg 108 - Page 69

However else you would have wanted it, this is really good too!

The new lines hit a chord! At least you got Leo to call them amazing, coz it really is! Hee!

So what if my love is not with me, my belief in love would always remain. I've waited so long, and still there wasn't any doubt that my love would come, and now it has come..

There I go (again) trying to sound really smart. The Einstein bone is at work here. The science of literature. Hah!

I'm in love with Zoya. Get her to where something really nice for the dance. Hehe.

Kay. Mwah. Love you like er, Shakespeare loves English?


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loved it.

wow super

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome
Hope both recognise each other soon
Thanks for PM
Continue soon

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

Really Humeira you couldn't connect the dots... her name is Zoya and she is waiting for her childhood love.

Originally posted by: madina12

Awesome update..
Love the growing bond of asad & zoya 😛
Ermmm...lets not talk bout tanveer 😡
True love & i believe in true love 😳
N i noe it will still be awhile for them to noe that they were soulmates
Look forward to next update

Originally posted by: aashiqua

Wow Saima... That was an
Awesome Update

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Awesome update Saima. It was beautifully written. The bond between Asad n Zoya is strong. They don't realize it but it's there. Like this small gesture of a hi five where he holds onto her hand subconsciously but if it would have been any other girl he would not have even bothered to hi five.

Why are u not sure of your story. Believe me it's shaping up perfectly. I'm I'm love with this story. Keep writing dear. You know ur a good writer. Thanks for the pm.