ASYA SS: Arranged Kum, Love Marriage Zyada (UPDATED Pg. 32) April 9 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow...Wow...Wow...what an amazing chapter...I love the chapter as well as the title...most of all I love your way of story writing.


Who knew love contributed to greenhouse gas emissions too?


that was hilarious buddy...🤣
and Please Pm me when you update.

Lots of love
Swapno



Thanks! True isn't it though? Think of the packaging of all the gifts, flowers--pesticides for those roses, and paper for all the cards. Love can be pretty environmentally unfriendly!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I absolutely love your story Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil!!! And you have no idea how happy I was when I stumbled upon it on myeduniya. I have been following it. It has come far along.

And now THIS?? This is simply a love song. That you never get tired of listening to. You are a very very talented writer. You keep your readers captivated up to the very last word. And when you name a chapter after a song, or line of a song, I feel so blessed to be aware of the real depth of the chapter.


Your stories are amazing. I love how you keep the characters true to its original form. Like I can actually picture Asad and Zoya doing and saying and actually are THE VERY Asad and Zoya of this story. And I love the pace at which the story is moving. The progress in their relationship mustbe natural and not forced and rushed! You're one amazing writer.


Am looking forward for many, many more updates. I know you don't disappoint.


All the best, am sending loads and loads of love and support!!

⭐️FaRz

p/s I may not be able to post comments, since I'm always on this forum using my phone, and for some reason I simply cannot post a comment. I have to always make do with 'like'. I hope you know how much I enjoy your work, and if you don't see me posting a comment, it's not that I don't want to. I really can't, unless am on my pc. Toodles for now!!!



I so appreciate your detailed comments on both my SS and FF. I don't know if you'd had a chance to check out the 2 OSes-a bit racy!
But the FF is really close to my heart which is why it is getting more and more epic. Am working on ch. 64! Should be updating this weekend.
Thanks again, Farz. I lived reading your comment. Made my day.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nnn

this is super cute !!

jealous zoya and pacifying asad !! 😳😳

zoya-it's impossible to be mad at me -- reallyy ?? 😆😆😆

just loved it

could u please pm me next time ?? 😊

continue sooonnn 😃😃



Yeah, I can't imagine anyone being mad at Zoya for too long!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Work!
Didn't get to catch up on all the chapters but just read your last update and so loved it.
But I usually do love what ever you pen.
Think you already know that.
Love
Juliet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late comment !!!
This was an awesome chapter ... What happened to Asad ??? 😉
Pls. Continue soon ..., can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dixeij



Thanks! True isn't it though? Think of the packaging of all the gifts, flowers--pesticides for those roses, and paper for all the cards. Love can be pretty environmentally unfriendly!

yeah...this is absolute truth...😆
but it is human friendly though...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I luvd the update! I'm so waiting for the confession! Plz do updt soon! :)
Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4

Aw, this was ADORABLE!
Asad and Zoya are both jealous, longing little things. Poor them. Suck it up and confess already! God. 🤔😆
Rehan was so cute. 😳 I loved how he played cupid. 😆 And Ayaan was hilarious at the beginning, teasing and laughing at them.😆 Dilshad was really funny too, I just love her character. Her little thoughts were hilarious. 😆
Ahhh, motorcycle ride. ☺️ Classic. 😆 And I loved it! 😳 Asad and Zoya are just the most ADORABLE things in the whole wide world! 😃
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
*Scroll down for part 5!*
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Asad glanced at him, suitably impressed. "You know about "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea"? Wow, must be a child prodigy, this kid.

^🤣
Anyways, super-fab-awesome-tastic update! 👏 👏 👏 Even better than the last. 😉
I LOVE NEMO! 😃😆
But poor Asad getting so jealous of a little kid. 😆😆 Gotta love a jelly Mr. Khan! 😉
Aw, he kissed her head! *squeal* 😃 HOW SWEET! ❤️ *gush*
The conversation at the end was the best part. 😉 Zoya getting jealous of Mehnaz, Asad being bolder, and all that. *swoon* I was literally grinning at my computer screen like an idiot. 🤔😆
CONTINUE SOON, PWETTY PWEASE? *Puppy face* 😛
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luved every bit of it

Keep writing

😉

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