FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED*

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

I LOVED THIS SOOO MUCH THANX FOR THE PM AND CANT WAIT FOR U TO UPDATE 😃

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Ok Liked the chapter definitely.

Also loved Asad's apology, as it began with placing his head to ask for forgiveness in her lap.

I know exactly how that goes cos My mum usually bears my worse blunt and it is her whom I probably love the most. That part was very well done. Silent Apology which just unveils so much untold turmoil from both Dilshad and Asad.

One thing I would have done differently - but hey it is your story and I am no critic, I am just here to enjoy a free pass.

Ammi...you are more important to me if not as imporatant as Zoya...You both mean a lot to me...and I cant live without either of you...You are the one that gave me life took care of me and made me a man...and ...Zoya she showed me love, made me a better man...she is the one that sustains my life...

I wouldn't compare the two. I think one never can. And I can tell from my own personal experience. A MIL will never like it if her son say you are very imp if not as imp as your DIL. 😃Indian saas - bahu serials dekh thoda. But enough said. 😆

Keep up the good work.

Love

Juliet

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#713

awww beautiful dilu mom and asad conversation

so tender heartfelt :)

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Dear Aashna,

Thanks for the writers thought process. I loved to reading your thoughts.

Mainly this is just to say I can be a giant pain in the wrong place. So don't mind me and my apologies for stirring things up.

You know I love your work.🤗

Love

Juliet

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Ramlath

@Ramlath

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#715

wow i just loved it... Thnks fr d pm...
😃

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madina12

@madina12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#716

Yippee...super love the update...
So much emotions & juz love the bonding between mother & son...
At times wen we angry,we say things we dont meant & regret it later.
But a mother would always forgive the son...
N lastly love the 2 varzy in love couple 😛

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#717

awesome ...good that both realized their mistakes!!! asad and dilshad cleared their minds!!! yeah...:):)
zoya is zoya...wants asad but is too stubborn...lol!!!
but finally they are together...n will deal what may come!!!
continue soon

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

great job... u describe both asad n zoya's emotions beautifully...

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#719

One gave him life..and the other sustains him..

Aptly put ..

Each has made a place of its own..and he has to uphold it..

Dilshad is the bridge between zoya and asad..and she has become stronger..

They have to overcome the past to be ib the present..

Awesome update...

Thanks for the pm..

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#720

awesome update
did not need to clarify the
outburst it was understandable
glad asad apologize
and so glad he came to zoya and
she got to apologize.
love tht he will use her smart mouth for
other things
continue soon