A memorable b'day......TS last part updated 13/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its beautiful
continue soon
plzzz pm me for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
its nice beautiful
continue soon
plzzz pm me for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: penfriend28


i imagined a cheek kiss...
what did u imagine???😳

i didnt imagine anythng more than it as v knw asad na😆
u only left the viewers with ques mark so wat ppl v thnk tel me😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Aww Asad gift her saree for her birthday.
It was awesome but would love to read more
P.s.if u don't mind I like to tell u that the story will attracts more reader and will easy to read if u break the story into multiple paragraphs instead of one long paragraph.

Keep up the good work :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Liya123

Aww Asad gift her saree for her birthday.

It was awesome but would love to read more
P.s.if u don't mind I like to tell u that the story will attracts more reader and will easy to read if u break the story into multiple paragraphs instead of one long paragraph.

Keep up the good work :-)


thank u so much...

thanks for suggestion...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana...

Nice one Lak..😊


thnaks a lot chandana...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asad bent his head and gave a peck on zoya's cheek...zoya flustered red and hide her face on to his chest...mr khan...can I ask you one more gift??

just command me..i am at your service...zoya hit him playfully ..i want to spend this night with you mr khan...can I stay in your room...looking at him for his answer...asad blinked his eyes in response.they sat on the bed leaning onto headboard...

mr khan...this is my most memorable b'day till date and its just because of you...i never expected you playing guitar for me just like salman khan...asad rolled his eyes...and i know you arranged this party at night so that aapi and jeeju can share our happiness...

I know zoya how much you miss them. zoya rested her head on asad and he kissed her forehead...mr khan..how can I thank you. how can you love me and understand me to this extent?

zoya ..this is nothing compared to the pain I gave you...zoya closed his mouth...don't say that mr khan...you can never hurt me...it just happened and we know both of us are part of that mistake and how much pain we went through...I want to erase those memories mr khan...and please never blame yourselves again...asad wiped her tears...I don't want to see tears in your eyes again...

mr khan...when did you arrange all these?i am with you all the time...and I doubt mr jahapana sixpacks can get such brilliant ideas...

ms farooqui...all this was according to my idea..but executed by ayaan...what to do...I have to think these ways for my mad girl...

allahmiya mr khan..u are calling me mad...ok then bye...I am going to my room...zoya got up only to be pulled back by asad.

ok..sorry my angel...

i've told you already..romance doesn't suit you mr khan...I love akdu ahmad khan...but I don't want our kids like you..they should be happening like me and cute like phuphi.....zoya noticed asad laughing and shouted at him...why are you laughing at me? do I look funny...

zoya..just remember what you've said...our kids ??asad spoke raishing his brow.zoya blushed listening...woh...mr khan...I ...you...what...come on say...shut up mr khan...i've already planned upto their marriage...

ms farooqui...first we should get married for that to happen.i know mr khan...now will you please leave this here...asad sighed out loud.

Mr khan you've said the idea of this surprise b'day party is yours that means even the act played by ayaan and humeira ?? no zoya..that was his idea...

Its was cute mr khan...but that rabert potrayed u as a gentleman...he don't know how my jahapana used to irritate me...

Oh..i used to irritate you..then what about you ms farooqui??at least once did you follow what I've said?? or atleast thought of thinking what my point is??

Oh..mr khan...you never change...you still have problem with me...

Their night continued ...


thanks for reading this piece of crap...😆i am bored today and now i am making you suffer...😆

i love the idea of arya enacting asya...thanks ankie for sharing the pic...

my index

lakshmi...

Edited by penfriend28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i am the first posting the comment here
yipeee
lovely update
need next update quickly
otherwise vl eat ur mind daily
wat happens next after zoya says u have a prblem vth me??
update soon😆

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