ASYA FF:A LOVE TO REMEMBER UPDATED CHA1(B) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
aarav nice name, it remind me of arshi
cont soon
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Very nice part 😊
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wow sounds interesting
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waiting for part b ..plz pm me also..i'll send u buddy req
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Hey friends thanks a lot for ur support . I will replay all individually later. so now I am giving the par B . Character sketch will be next. so here goes the part B

chapter 1(b) At the dining table Aarav and dilshad are waiting for asad .sad arrived and greeted dilshad ASAD:good morning ammi. DIL: good morning beta . u have ur seat I wll bring ur coffee dilshad served coffee to asad and breakfast to aarav and she served herself.then asad spoke ASAD: Ammi I think we should go to our dehradoon guest house for a week ,as aarav's summer vacation also started I think I wil be a change for all of us . so ammi can we ? dilshad just smiled and said DIL: sure beta . there is no need of asking permission from me . I am glad that u r relaxing urself from the work for a week. dilshad was really happy that his son decided to spend some time with them . it's really a rare subject which she used to hear from him ASAD:ok ammi. so please make aarav and ayaan be ready at 8 tonight . then we can start our journey. DIL: sure beta . we wil be ready at 8. ASAD: by the way ammi where is ayaan I didn't see him since early morning. DIL:woh beta ... but dil was interpreted by a voice which made everyone to turn in the direction
'looks like my bhaijaan is missing me a lot today . isn't it bhaijaan?'said a boy in his early twenties wuth curl hair and a with naughty smile playing on his lips but not only smile on his but with a dust covered face and clothes
DIL:ya allah .ayaan what have u done to urself?
AYAAN:woh ammi me and Rahul had a bet an...
but he was interpreted by asad
ASAD:what kind of bet ayaan ? asked asad whith his usual tone.
AYAAN:woh...bhai...jaan kabadi .said ayaan hesitantly knowing his brother's slight anger
''wow but who the bet CA?''asked a excited aarav . asad just pressed his temples by their stupidity
AYAAN: what is this aarav .u r asking who won when I am in it . u don't know about ur CA . of course I won it.
AARAV: wow CA I know u must have won.my CA is the best said aarav hi5ing ayaan
ATAAN: come on champ u know I don't like popularity . but anyways thanks champ and...
but one glare from asad is enough to shut his mouth.
ASAD: ayaan be ready tonight by 8 we r going to dehradoon guest house for a week.sais asad getting up from his chair.
AYAAN:wow bhaijaan even iwas to planning of outing . don't worry bhaijaan I will be ready .really bhai I love a lot.saying this ayaan went to hug asad . but asad stopped him from hugging
ayaan said with a puppy face
AYAAN : This is not at all fair bhai. here ur beloved brother is showing his unconditional love to u and ur are not at all valuing it .said ayaan dramatically.
asad just smiled at his brothers drama.
ASAD:just stop ur drama my drama king. first fresh up and show ur love. I am going to an important meeting and I don't want to present myself with ur love of dust and mud . now stop ur drama ang have ur break fast after freshing up
said asad ruffling his brothers hair lovingly.
AYAAN:ok bhai .but be here at 8 sharply
ASAD:ok mr. punctual I will now go
AARAV:hey CA wait I am also coming
aarav kissed asad and said bye to him
ASAD:bye beta.
AYAN:come on champ lets go
ayaan took his champ in his hands and went towards his room
asad hugged dil for few seconds and parted the hug and said
ASAD:ok ammi I will leave for the work now .
asad turned and started walking when dil called
DIL: beta ek min
ASAD: haan ammi kya baath hai?
DIL:beta yester night sahana be called me and they wanted their daughter to get married to u . I said them that I will consult with u and give my asnswer. so beta what do uthink about it.she said with hesitation
Dilshad know that his son will not like this topic.but as a mom and a grandmom she can't see his son and grandson living without the care and love of a wife and mom.
ASAD: ammi u know very well what my answer is.
DIL:but beta how long will u be like this . asad u should move on atleast for aarav beta .it's his right to get a mothers love and care we can't snach it from him beta
ASAD:no ammi we r not snaching anything from him . he has my love and care . and more over he is having ur and ayaan's love too ,then what is the need for an outsiders care ammi . ammi till now I m giving him both mom and dad's care. did I failed I showing my love and care ammi? asked asad with hate visible in his eyes and voice.
DIL: no beta don't even think like that . u r the best dad and love towards aarav is unconditional. but beta what iam saying is no one can replace a mom's place in one's life .and as a mother I want u to move on in ur life and I want use u happy asad.i can't see ur life getting destroyed like this . said dil hiding his tears as she know her tears will break his sons heart.
ASAD: ammi please try to understand . I am already a broken man if iam marrying a girl she may accept me without caring about my past . but what about aarav and ayaan ammi will she accept them as her own son and brother .I don't want history to repeat again and I can't see ayaan broken again . ammi every girl wants her to be the first love of her husband . I can't break a girls heart for my selfishness ammi.
DIL:ok beta I will not talk about this again , but beta if u meet a girl who will love us all as her own will u marry her ?
ASAD:let me first meet a girl like that ammi .
DIL:no asad . I just want to know YES or NO.
asad:ok amm I will.
DIL: ok beta it's enough . now u get going to work . be safe beta.said dil kissing is son's forehead .
ASAD:ok ammi I wil have ur leave
After asad left dilshad just sank into the sofa with silent tears flowing down her eyes
'Ammi 'came a voice . ther stood ayaan with tears in his eyes too. this is the story of this house for the last 1/2 years. he can't see his bro or mom like this . asad is his father after their abbu left them . it is his daily prayer to allah that his bhaijaan should get a love of his life but his prayers r still unanswered
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Ayaan came and sat beside dil and took her hands in his and wiped her tears with 0ther hand and said
AYAAN : ammi I am the one responsible for all this isn't ?said ayaan disgust in his voice .
DIL:no beta u r not resp[onsible for anything for what she did with us .u r not responsible for anything.so stop blaming urself.
AYAAN:no ammi I am the major cause for bhaijaan's sufferings. I can't never forgive for this .
DIL:no ayaan stop talking like this u know how it will hurt asad if he hears it .
AYAAN:but ammi I want my bhaijaan to be happy . I can't him like this . how long we r going to see his sufferings ammi.
DIL:don't worry beta everything will be fine soon . have faith in allah beta . he will make everthing fine soon .
AYAAN: I too have faith in allah ammi . I just want my bhai to be happy .I will do anything to see my bhai happy evenit costs my life .
dilshad just hugged her son and said
DIL: no bte don't even think of taking like this I can't see anyone of u three getting hurt I just can't said dilshad with a sob escaping her lips
AYAAN:ok ammi I won't . but if we r sitting like this I will surely die of hunger said ayaan giggling to lighten the mood
DIL:ok beta come I will heatup the break fast said dil smiling at his son and they both headed towards the kitchen
ASAD'S OFFICE
asad was sitting in his cabin and thinking about his conversation with his mom this morning.
ASAD'S P.O.V
Ya allah I know I hurt my ammi this morning. please forgive for that . but please make her understand my inner turmoil . I can't again allow a girl to enter in my life and hurt my family . please give me strength to keep my family happy .
IN KHAN VILLA
AYAAN'S ROOM
ayaan was sitting in his balcony with guitar and playing a melodic tune with tears in his eyes
AYAAN'S P.O.V
ya allah why r u punishing my bhai for my mistakes . I want him to be happy forever, if u want to hurt him please hurt me not him . please allah please keep him happy this is only what I want .
DILSHAD'S ROOM
dil was sitting in his room and thinking about this morning
DIL P.O.V
Ya allah please bless my children with happiness please don't hurt them more . they have went through a lot in their life. please allah give them the happiness they deserve
life is like a novel . it is always filled with suspense. u know what happens next until u turn the next page . it will always contain both happiness and tears. we can't avoid it from turning coz of tears as we will struck still. and we can't skip the pages too as it will be meaningless .so we must learn to face the tears with a smile. every story may not be with a happily ever after ending ,but it we know how to face the tears will smile . we can write our own happily ever after NOT ENDING but a NEW BEGINING
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago
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very nice do continue
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Continue soon. Want asya to meet... pleaseee
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Nice update
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Superb
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thank u🤗

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