ASYA FF:A LOVE TO REMEMBER UPDATED CHA1(B)

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Hey friends I have already posted a topic in this title , but due to mobile updates I can't update it regularly. But now I bought a laptop I will give long updates from now on . so please comment.
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INDEX

prologue 1 N 2 :page 1
chapter 1(a) :page 2
CHAPTER1(B) :PAGE3
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prologue 1

Asad's p.o.v
I am Asad Ahmed Khan . A successful business tycoon to the world , but a broken man who is beyond repair from inside . how will u feel if ur life is full of betrayals and heartbreaks;when ur father whom u loved the most leaves u and ur family for an another women ; when ur beloved sister leaves u and ur family to face shame and insults for her new found love; when ur soulmate called wife leaves u and ur symbol of love for her late love ; I don't know how will u feel . but I know exactly how will it feel . It will break ur hear beyond repair . it will make ur each second of existence impossible . it will make u to regret ur each beat of the heart .some make think I should end my life ; believe me I too want to end this misery called life but my important responsibilities keeping me away from this decision the responsibility as a son , elder brother and moreover a father to my son who is the only light in my darkness ,. Many of u may think that I should move on in my life ;but I don't have strength even thinking of moving on . coz every stuggle I went through my life is coz of women . I will not say that every women apart from my mom is bad, but I am saying that I didn't know a good women apart from my mom. I don't hate women but I can't trust them too . my thinking may be wrong but this is what life and women taught me. And most of u will say it's my destiny but I am sorry them coz I am not even ready to listen them coz I am not one who belives in destiny.
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prologue 2

zoya's P.O.V
Hi this is zoya farooqui. A doctor by profession. friends call me zoe. but only one person calls me zee . hey don't u guys dare to call me zee it's only his copyright . I just love my life a lot . I too have problems in my life . but I don't waste my time in thinking and wasting for the passing clouds called misery and tears . I use too enjoy the permanent sky called happiness and similes. I will not ask u guys how will u feel when u say ur mom dying in front of ur eyes by fire; when u came too it's ur father is the soul cause for ur mothers death or clearly murder;when u came to know ur lovely uncle also joined hands in this for property; when u came to know that ur own brother is trying to kill u for the same property which killed ur mom . I don't even want my enemy to feel this pain coz I know how exactly it will feel .it wil hurt even break u but not beyond repair coz if u love urself none can break u beyond repair . as I said I don't hate my life for this coz these all made mewhat I am now . A strong and bubbly zoya who knows to smile even in hard times . And I don't hate men for this also. coz a person who hurts others can't be a human first .and more over I have a best friend , companion , spporter, adivicer, and more over a brother in the form of a man. our rehaan .he is our only family . our means me and maya kundra and soon to be maya rehaan . my maya is just a single piece. my sweetest friend. I just love them both a lot . I know I am so talkative sometimes may be always but never mind. but this is what I am . but don't think I don't believe in destiny by my attitude . I too believe in destiny but when it is written by me.
so what will happen when this two person meet r clash with each other.what destiny has plannsd for them ? when one don't believe in it ;when one believe in writing it . will her love will bring light in his life or his hate will engulf her in darkness too . will their love or hate change their thoughts about men and women. it's not a complete dark story but it's a story where light is unnoticed by the darkness. so to know the destiny of this love , remember this story coz it's a love to remember.
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago
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Looks interesting ...
Pm me 😊
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Nice continue soon and please PM me 😊
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Thanks dear .
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chapter 1

As the sun came from his home to cherish the world with his rays of brightness ,the earth just accepted his gift of rays with open arms. But a house in the Bhopal never allow the rays to one of it's room ,not that the windows are closed but the owner of the room never allowed to enter the brightness in his life with is engulfed by darkness . as the rays hit his eyes to welcome an another day of his life . but not with hopes only with his responsibilities.
Asad's p.o.v
Another day ;another 24 hours without love ,hopes ,love, peace only with responsibilities.this is the routine of my life but I used to this responsibilities as it is the only reason for my hears beat.I don't have anything else to say about my life . Coz even I too don't what my life is exactly.
DAD!DAD!came a cute little from outsides his room which broke his chain of thoughts . within few seconds he was engulfed by a pair of soft and little hands.
'' Good morning dad '' said a cute voice
''good morning aarav ''said asad with a smile and kissed his son's forehead.
AARAV:Dad r u free today ? said aarav with cute smile playing on his lips .
ASAD: no aarav dad have a meeting today.but did my son planned anything special today?said asad by taking his son in his arms and went towards the window.
AARAV: no dad nothing special but I thought we can go go outing today . but no problem dad we can go next weekend too.said aarav kissing asad's cheek
But asad know that his son was disappointed by this and he also know that his son will never voice out this as it will hurt him .Even though aarav was 6 years old he used to understand his abbu a lot. asad too don't want to hurt his son , but this was very important .he can't ignore his business too. but asad know how to chear up his son.
ASAD:but aarav be ready tonight by 8 . we are leaving to our dehradoon guest house for aweek.
Aarav face instantly lid up on hearing this .
AARAV:really dad ased aarav with a whole hearted smile .
ASAD:yes beta we r going tonight so be ready said asad ruffling his son's hairlovingly.
AARAV: thank so much dad I really love u a lot. don't worry dad iwill be ready at8 and I will make dadi and CA too ready.
ASAD:ok beta now go and get ready for breakfast . I will join u in a while
AARAV:ok dad I will be waiting for u in the breakfast table and he ran out of the room.
Asad stood there with a smile playing on his lips seeing his son happy. he is the only reason for his smile for the last 1/2 years .according to asad his son is the only ray of sunlight in his dark life .
Asad just closed his eyes for fewseconds and took his towel and went into the bathroom getting ready for his day.
PART B will be updated within tonight 10. and pms will be send afer updating part B
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interesting
plz pm me n cont soon

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