FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Oooh, this just keeps getting more and more interesting every time you update!! :D Loving absolutely everything that is going on... especially the progression of Asad and Zoya's relationship. And the conversation they had in the car was FAB!! Loved how Tamatar heard everything, hope everything will be okay for them. Thank you sooo much for the BRILL update!! Oh, and the pm... lots of love.xxx

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...
Amazing Amazing Amazing update Paly
I love the way u write
i am so happy najma found out they like each other
cant wait for more james bond in action
continue soon

Najma knew LONG before they did. Remember the whole chocolate eyes/washboard abs discussion? She was trying to get Zoya to admit how she felt about Asad. Zoya got all dreamy and did admit it but then 'remembered' Asad didn't approve of her. Her eyes filled with tears and she insisted she was talking about MSD to cover her pain.

Now, if she and Najma have the same conversation again, there'll be no question that Zoya is talking about her own tiger's abs, eyes and power!

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Linsie
Awesome turning point... so everything is clear ... rohan
is after the property... papers... and my guess is that
its not for him... its for his manager...
they made him do it... coz the connection with dilshad...
last minute confession from him ... he wish she can be proud
of him... coz his past is catching up on him...

Little emotional moment in the car... with asya...
asad is right najma... know it better then them...

Rohan is fishing to get zoya against asad... coz of what
or how he behavour early with zoya... he try
but zoya stand still... and asad protect her... very closely
Rohan got defeated...

Truly awesome update... love it..

You totally got where I was going with this chapter!!! Wow, I must be a good writer. 😉

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Shiyamala
Oh my goodness,m this suspence is killing me. How in the world did Rohan have the heart to hurt Zoya like that (meanie). Loved the way Asad was like "Nagima already knew...even before we knew!" OH YEAH! THEY ARE IN LOVE...great post Paly.😉

I wasn't about Zoya. It was about how Rohan felt about himself. But it hurt Zoya anyway. Which, of course, means that Asad won't let Rohan anywhere near his musibat any longer.

Edited by PalyGirl - 11 years ago

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
I really hope Rashid doesn't have a big role in this story because I despise him. Amazing update! Worth the wait!I feel like this story is about to end thought... like a few chapters left.

Nope - Rashid's part is already finished. He bought the property. No matter what he does, that man always manages to create problems for Dilshad, Asad and Najma, doesn't he?

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: lourel24
loved it.yours 'web of lies' was also awesome n this one is too.plz show some romantic scenes between asya.its just a request.yes their relation is progressing but asad is still much rigid.

I'm sorry. This is as romantic as this story gets. I'm writing an adventure story so I can't focus too much on their personal relationship. My next story will be a romance so hopefully that will make up for this.

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

You totally got where I was going with this chapter!!! Wow, I must be a good writer. 😉

yes you are good writer...i love all you story... 👏 👏 👏

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

About najmas doubt...

I had gone back to read that particular dicussion..and you mentioned it ..

Thank you...

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sarbrathan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

Nope - Rashid's part is already finished. He bought the property. No matter what he does, that man always manages to create problems for Dilshad, Asad and Najma, doesn't he?

Couldn't agree more! Have you started working on another story? I am big fan of yours😳

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Shiyamala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I wasn't about Zoya. It was about how Rohan felt about himself. But it hurt Zoya anyway. Which, of course, means that Asad won't let Rohan anywhere near his musibat any longer.

You are right! I didn't realize Rohan was talking about himself. I can't wait for Asad to be in his TIGER mode.😉