FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

amazing n power packed update ...luvd asya conversation in car ...n d way asad said zoya is nt guest ..she belongs here ...
update soon ...
plzzz pm me for nxt update

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deziqt611

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Great chapter! Thank god Najma is safe!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

loved it.yours 'web of lies' was also awesome n this one is too.plz show some romantic scenes between asya.its just a request.yes their relation is progressing but asad is still much rigid.

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EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Loved the update. Thanks for the pm

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

hey tis is amazing...

luv it...

fabulous...

luv the way hw asad n zoya care for each other...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

So Asad and Rohan finally had a face off... Kinda... And he left... I hope Dilshaad doesn't pay the price of that..

Asad and Zoya were super sweet... Just like a couple who have been together for long enough to know what the other person feels and thinks... So adorable... :)

Looking forward to the next chapter... :)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

good going..thank you for the PM..😊

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Nice one! 👍🏼 I loved how Asad and Zoya hugged and he kissed her forehead. I'm so glad he said that Zoya belongs and is family! 😃 Yay! Those were my two favorite parts. 😉

Okay, now that we know what Rohan is after, we just have to figure out why. I'm so excited for the next chapter!

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Paly, brilliant updates as usual. Sorry I didn't get a chance to post earlier, so this comment is for chapters 10 and 11.

What I love about your writing primarily is the mystery/ adventure element. There are plenty romantic FF writers and several do a great job. My first love is mystery and hence your stories are a major draw for me!! Thank you for these wonderful stories!

Chapter 10:

I loved the Asad and Zoya bonding, esp: She sighs and leans forward so that their foreheads touch. "You said you'd support me."
His arm tightens, going from her waist to the middle of her back. "Do you want me to make breakfast?"
She laughs, low and intimate. "You would do that for me?"
"I don't think there's anything I wouldn't do for you." His voice is light but his eyes are dark and serious.. Lovely!! 👏

Zoya's confusion about the "sleeping" arrangement was hilarious. 😆

Asad's confrontation with Rohan was awesome. Loved the dialogue:

Asad takes a deep breath. "I make my own luck. I've worked hard for everything I've achieved." He turns and heads for his room. "I deserve what I have."

"Including Zoya?" Rohan challenges.

Asad stops in his tracks but doesn't look back. He's silent for a moment, staring down at his scarred knuckles, remembering the times people had tried to snatch Zoya from him. He takes a deep breath and nods. "Especially Zoya."

Asad's care for Zoya at the dining table was touching!

Their discussion in the car and his office was great! I can go on and on. Needless to say, I loved it! It was good to see slight jealousy or insecurity from Asad. Once she reassured him that he was tiger, he was back to normal!

Smart Zoya figured out what Rohan's disguise was! Cool! She is closing in on him...

Chapter 2:

The "car"omance was amazing! As one of my friends said about AsYa: these are 2 imperfect individuals who are perfect for each other!! Great bonding!

Najma is back home safely after the billboard drama!

Uff, Rohan's insecurity and loneliness is coming out. He provoked the tiger by "hurting" the tigress with his words!!oh boy! Loved how AAK insisted Zoya was family. Rohan out of the house!

The sleuth figured out all about NAAS! Splendid !

Now, the million dollar question, why does Rohan need the lot? Yes, yes! I'll patiently wait for the future updates.

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Simi

@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Hi!

I will admit that I have been somewhat a stalker of your stories. Well, not really a stalker in the technical sense, but more like a follower who was way to late in discovering your stories and then was frantically trying to get up to speed.

And finally I am!

I read "For you I will" then hopped the train to "Web of Lies" and now here I am onto this one!

Now that I have finally read ALL the awesome chapters, I thought of leaving a little comment!

First of all, you are a brilliant writer. You have a very creative and very impressive way of telling a story and I must acknowledge that you use your characters, the plot and the element of suspense and thrill very well.

I love your portrayal of Asad. A lot. I have this image of an uncontrollable force of nature if you provoke him. You have made such a believe world that it does not surprise me that Asad is capable of almost killing people with his bare hands.

And I love the subtle way you have brought Asad and Zoya together. Asad will leave no stone unmoved to make sure that his Musibat is fine! And Zoya! How I love her "All I do is for you" approach. Very heartwarming, and heart clenching at the same time.

There are so many little things that you pay attention to which turn out to be a vital key at the end of the suspense. From on top of my head, I can think of like you did with the whole "firewall" thing in "Web of lies".

I love (you can see I love many things!😆) that Najma and Ayaan have come into play! Little Tamatar is all grown up! And Dilshad! That woman is a class of her own. I can't help but love her in each chapter.

Asad and Zoya are on a very tumultuous journey, aren't they? Zoya, especially has had terrible ordeals over and over again - physically and emotionally. There open admittance to relying and caring on/about each other is so fresh to read and so endearing!

I want to say so much more about this series! But, I won't bore you with my blabber! You are doing a great job! Fantastic writing!

Well, um, not so little comment, eh? Oops! 😆

Best,

Simi