FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Nida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Hey ...
Mindblowing update !!! :)

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

riot at Najma's college omg...
awesome update

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

I loved their exchange at the very beginning of the chapter, so sweet and intimate :)

And Asad taking care of her lol. So cute. I love that they are much more comfortable with each other now. And OH MY GOD Asad attacking Rohan was priceless.

I kinda wish Asad had seen the empty look in Rohan's eyes, but then again, I guess it'll come later, I'm sure you have it planned out :)

I wonder if Rohan's stomach issue has to do with why he was there, in Bhopal, and sneaking away. Maybe he's sick? Or maybe someone is drugging him? Unlikely, since he's staying at the KV, but you never know.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the conversation between Zoya and Ayaan, especially with Asad's reactions, and AsYa's conversation after she hung up with Raabart. So sweet, and intense, yet meaningful. You have such an incredible way with words. I still loved the last chapter more, but that's cause I'm a sucker for AsYa angst, but this was good, typing up loose ends.

I wasn't at all surprised that Asad already knew Najma was involved, but I'm glad to see Ayaan wanting to own up to his share of the blame, or rather his part in helping Zoya. And man does he know her well, in a short time, knowing that she hadn't told Asad about him helping her.

I still cringe a tad when he calls her musibat, but I like that you show Zoya not paying it much mind now. It would certainly still bug me, but then I'm not Zoya lol.

And I'm glad you showed Asad realize how much his words can have an effect on her, with the filing storage system. I wonder if it relates to Rohan, and someone in Asad's office, or if it's something to do with a sequel to this perhaps :D

Anyway, waiting for the next chapter anxiously! 😳

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Awesome update
Mr & Mrs Bond are ready but another problem
Riots in najma college.
Asad knew everything now & disappointed for not saving zoya
Zoya agreed not to hide anything from asad
As it is important to save their family
Happy Mona rabert bonding &
Najma confession to Asad.
In short full packed update
Continue soon
Thanks for PM

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Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Awesome update :)

Asad's clever :P

I loved Mona-Raabart's conversation

Can't wait for the next update :) I really want to find out what's happening with the riot

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

loved the update

really interesting

can't wait for the next one

thanks a lot for the pm 😊

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

another great update
loved their connection and bonding at the beginning
and the way he threatened rohan. oh he made her chai
glad najma told him and he said he already knew he is so calm
in this story all because of zoya
loved the way he handled himself during mona and raabert convo
oh and the convo about the jaguar,lion and tiger is so cute
he is not alone .wow
continue soon