FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#511

The Asad here is so perfect.
He is so much in control of himself.
No more emotionally challenged.
I love him even more here 😳

Update is Fantastic as always. 👏
Every scene was beyond perfection.

Waiting for next monday next update 😉

Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Love the conversations between asad and zoya

Asad being a tiger

Rohan being a jaguar

Lovely

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

😛😛

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Wow...what an update...

Asad cautious for zoya..

Old injury acting up for zoya..and Rohan..

Najma tells asad...of her involvement...

Which asad is not able to digest...

Mona and Rabert...Ajit connection is out..

Holding hands...and the tiger not hunting alone...

Made me feel..asad opening up...

So both of them hand in hand...

So zoya now not to put herself in danger...

Thanks for the pm..

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@Zola029

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

awesome update !

loved it !

asad caring for zoya !

both zoya and rohan putting an act about injuries

najma is so courageous here ! she herself told asad !!

loving mona and rabert bond !

asad-zoya scenes were so cute !

putting their foreheads together , asad holding her hands ! 😳

And asad is the tiger and rohan the jaguar !

when zoya said tiger are alone and asad is alone , loved when he said not anymore !!

now their is a riot in najma college !?

wonder what these 2 will do !

eager to read your next update !

continue soon (:

thanks for the pm (:

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

wow...! Dat was some update...! Total fab...! loved d way asad was caring fr zoya...! bt now m wondering if rohan is actually innocent...! i mean it could be that he feels too lonely... i dont noe... m juz messed up... bt ur lines got me thinking...!

Rohan's eyes are dark and cloudy, for the first time revealing the full extent of the aching emptiness in his soul. Asad has his back to the sports star. He doesn't see the grim resignation of a man going through the motions of life but not truly living. Asad misses Rohan's desperate loneliness, a stark reflection of his own former hollow existence before Zoya.

bt this was soo sweet...!

"I don't think there's anything I wouldn't do for you." His voice is light but his eyes are dark and serious.

bt i pity asad i mean how many shocks did her recieve...?! B4 zoya then najma nd then ayaan..! Poor him...! Bt wat exactly r rohan's intentions...?! Is he a good man gone astray..? or is he a bad man doing more bad...?! God...! eagerly w8ing fr ur next update...! hoping to get sm answers...! U really keep us thinking...!

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Again an awesome part 👏

This story is one of my favorite in the forum ❤️

I love each part continue soon please 😃

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#517

LOVED the chapter.

Along with there being a progression in the story line, the emotions were also dealt with sensitively.

Good job:)

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

Loving asad so much, his conversations with Zoya, beautiful the way you penned down. Superb update👏 can't wait for the next one.. Hopefully no one gets hurt now.

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Akilla

@Akilla

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

As always beautiful, I loved how you progress their relationship without losing sight of the actual plot. The small acts of love and understanding are the best. Love love your work...can't wait for the next one

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#520

Truly amazing... Such a great update... You know you make the week long wait totally worth it!!

I wonder what he would've done if Rohan hadn't ruined the perfect moment... ;)

Asad's acceptance of his love for Zoya was the most beautiful thing in this update... He truly deserves her... After all the things they went through together...

So Zoya found the disguise... Looking forward to see what happens next... :)