FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Awesome waiting for more. Thank u for the pm

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webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Paly,

First of all Congrats on winning the award! Truly well deserved! 👏

Coming to this update:

WOW! AMAZING! BRILLIANT! MIND-BLOWING! FANTASTIC! SUPERB! AWESOME!

I have run out of superlatives to describe this last update. This update was so beautiful, I am speechless.

In your last comment to me, you mentioned:

"If you think this chapter is good, wait until the next chapter! I hope it will be heart-wrenching."

Girl, you delivered and how!! This has got to be your best chapter so far and I have been an ardent fan of all 3 FFs! How in the world are you going to beat this?! 😆

Yes, it was indeed heart-wrenching! I actually got tears in my eyes , especially in the last scene.😭 Very emotional!

Do I need to say it? I LOVED IT!!

Patiently waiting for next Monday to find out what happens when they wake up! 😃

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Wow..this was absolutely amazing...

Did not expect this asad ...

Showing his emotions...

Not hiding himself behind a veil..

He was scared for zoya...

Probably...his fears out in front of his eyes..

He knows she is not selfish..

And loves his family...

But was not ready to acknowledge it..

Both in tune to each others mood swings..

Happy that asad is with zoya...

She will remain safe and sound...

Thanks for the pm...

Congratulations once again...

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Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I have beta readers who work very, VERY hard to improve my stories. I wish I could thank them by name but I have to respect their privacy. Truly they deserve so much credit because they devote HOURS a week reading and rereading and making sure every line, even every word, is correct. My writing would be a mess without them.

Wow!

Please deliver my sincere appreciation to them! They really deserve it a lot!

A beautiful product of a wonderful teamwork!

CONGRATULATIONS! 🤗

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Ankahee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Congrats on being chosen as one of the best author on QH forum, well deserved indeed. And a lovely chapter.

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Congrats on winning best writer award! You are indeed the best!

This chapter left me speechless. The angst, passion, hurt, anger...and love...everything was described so nicely!!
Loved it.

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

<font color="#cc00ff">Thank you so much! I work very hard to make my stories entertaining. It's so nice to be recognized for my effort.</font>

YOU DESERVE IT . Congracts once again.

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

<font color="#cc00ff">Thank you so much! I work very hard to make my stories entertaining. It's so nice to be recognized for my effort.</font>

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Tamara27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

I know you say you don't write romance... but this update... man, it was amazing!

Emotional, beautiful... and even romantic in it's own way.

I absolutely loved how Zoya kept speaking and all Asad could say in response was, "I know"

Really wonderful. Don't want the story to end, but I also want to know what happens next. I hope they reach an understanding of some sort, and clear up whatever misunderstandings they have of each other. Also, I am DYING to know what Rohan's story is, so cannot wait for that to unfold.

Great, great writing and story!