FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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nazali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: webuser7
Sorry to disappoint the readers asking for an update. Palygirl had mentioned the following in the Author notes section of the last update on page 42:

"Due to the upcoming holiday weekend the next update will be January 6, 2014."

So the next update will most likely be next Monday.

Oh yeah...I saw it now, thank you dear :)

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

I actually like Rohan... I liked Malak too in your last story. I love AsYa but I do feel Zoya is too good for Asad.

I do, too. I like strong characters with mysterious backstories. No one is all good or all bad so why should my characters not have lots of shades, too?

Thank you for the feedback. Happy New Year!!!!

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: webuser7

Thank you for the lovely feedback!! After reading that, I am more eagerly waiting for the next update!

How could I forget you don't speak hindi? My apologies!! The literal translation of "kebab mein haddi" is "a bone in kebab (boneless meat dish)", meaning something unwanted in between or kinda like a "third wheel" between 2 people.

Ohh, I actually knew what that meant! I'm so excited - my Hindi is improving.

Well, I understood it to translate into 'bone-in-meat" but I thought it meant a piece of meat that had the bone removed to turn it into a kebab meat cube. So I understood the translation but not the meaning. I had no idea what that had to do with Rohan or my story. I would never have known 'kebab mein haddi" meant 'third wheel'.

Thank you for the explanation and for leaving feedback. Happy New Year!!!

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Hi everyone! I hope you're having a safe and happy holiday. As I noted in the last chapter, I didn't post an update this week because of the holidays. I've been too busy with my family to spare a single moment to work on the chapter. I will try to start the next chapter today.

Happy New Year!!

Paly