FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Lavina

@volatile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Oh no!

The more involved Asad is getting, the more rude and bitter he is behaving towards Zoya! So its true when they say that guys are always the meanest to the girl they like the most!

Love how you let Asad think that Zoya was talking about him and his sixpacks (and she was!) and then realising that she was actually meant Dhoni! (But she sooo didnt!)

So sad that I have to wait 2 weeks for your next update...but wishing you happy holidays!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

ah i could feel the heat of the sizzling chemistry ,the unsaid desires the burning love ,the simmering Jealousy

Happy holidays and happy new year in advance

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Why oh why as well as a 'like' button can there not be an 'absolutely love' button?! So i'm guessing by that you already know what i think?? Yep... it was BRILLIANT!! I loved every single bit about it... the part where Zoya fell on Asad, when Rohan asked about her parents and Asad went mad (not exactly shouting and stuff, but he did feel it inside)... the end part i just LOVED!! I mean, Asad is sometimes a little cruel to her, but i hope that he will feel bad and we'll get some more scenes between them. And besides i love the fights between them, because they're sort of getting closer and that's exactly what i want!! :D And Zoya *sighs* well, what more can i say?? She is just AWESOME!! The way she hides so much behind her smile... she is so strong and i just LOVE HER!! <3 Can't wait for your next update, thanks for the pm!! Oh, and i hope you have a good christmas!! :D xxx

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Lovely ff...Paly

Both of them have it real bad..😳

Jealous Asad...Ooohhh😆

Make them see sense soon...😉

Pls do pm me when you update next dear

Mili 🤗

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MayaB5

@MayaB5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

I wish we were watching your story in the serial right now. I can just imagine ksg and Surbhi as your Zoya and Asad...

They are so into each other but they can't see it...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Hey ...
Fab update !!! :)

Zoya's fangurling was amazing ... ;)
The jealous Asad is a treat to watch and adorable too but unfortunately he sometimes crosses the line and just blurt out things which he doesn't mean ...

Thanks for the pm :)