FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was another awesome update again! Loved reading every bit of it...and can't wait for the next update! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Humme aur jeene ki,
chahat na hoti,
Agar aapka Post na hota,
Agar Post na hota...🤣

I wish you could post 2-3 times a week...that would definitely bring 'Happiness' in the lives of your Silent but Avid readers😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
really..very nice update..oops they got busted..now what will happen next?
continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
awe najma she was so right and the way asad an dilshad made her understand lovely
zoya is oo smart and I just loved the conversation with ayaan she fooled him so easily
and najma and zoyas sign language
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
This is fab !!!
I'm loving this Najma ... She's mature and responsible too

I totally enjoyed Zoya and Ayaan's conversation ...
Loved their flirtatiousness ;)

The end was such a cliffy !!
The million dollar question is how much of the conversation was heard by the lion, Asad Ahmed Khan himself ...

Thanks for the pm :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Aw, I felt so sad for Najma in the beginning of this chapter! 😭 But I'm happy with the little family moment. 😃 But yikes, Asad and Zoya are always fighting, aren't they? 😆 I loved the phone convo between Zoya and Ayaan, though. 😉 They're awesome. 😎
OMG THAT CLIFFY! 😲 UH-OH. I'm super-scared now. 😕 What happens next?
Continue soon, pwetty pweej? 😳
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter! You write so well we get drawn right into the store! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
mona and raabert too good
najma is just too cute
asad and zoya will never quit their fighting
busted or not.
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Luv it! Thank you...such a lovely and powerful update...

Hungry for more...hehehe...

Take care,
Naz
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update !
i've just read all the 6 chapters in a go and i loved it !
in the last update : i love najma ! she's so mature here ! loving the way she's helping zoya !

"Ammi, did you miss the part where she thinks Ms. Farooqui and I are having children together?" 😆😆

loved how both najma and dilshad were smiling at them !
rabeert and mona's convo was so funny !
that's a cliffy end !?!?
wonder if asad heard the entire conversation or not !
continue soon and do pm if possible (:

ps : i've also read your ff "web of lies" and that was fabulous too ! i loved it !


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