NEW ASYA: Uss Raat Wahan... PART 4 UP...(10/12) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update soon! Please PM me updates 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice & Interesting Story...
Continue Soon...
Thnx for PM...


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PART 2

Here zoya was also lost in her own memory land...

The day he came to talk to her and she didn't let him say anything came to her mind and she smiled... but the memory of the next day faded her smile he didn't came to college after that. She had seen him taking up her challenge by smiling back but didn't saw him after that. She had seen him in his mother's shop that evening helping her to pack few things...

Uss raat wahan aakhir aisa hua kya tha...

She had also asked her friends to search for him but they also didn't got anything.

Her trance broke when she heard loud claps as the show got ended and the curtains got closed.

This time she didn't wasted any moment and directly went to the mike over stage and announced...

"Mr. Khan, Mr. Asad Khan jo delhi ke hain vo please back stage aayein Mr. Khan jo delhi ke hai please back stage aayein... "

She repeated it few times when there was a tap over her shoulder. She turned around to find Asad standing over there.

Zoya: hi..

Asad: hi...

Zoya: long time...

Asad: yea...

Zoya: so bhopal me kaise...

Asad: vo...

Zoya: khair vo chodo, vaise tum aaj kal karte kya ho???

Asad: vo...

Zoya: khair vo bhi chodo tum rehte kahan ho??

Asad: vo...

Zoya: allah miya whats wrong with you tum kuch bolte kyun nahi...

Asad: tum kuch bolne dogi tab na...

Zoya: opps... I'm sorry... Accha finally tum bhopal me kaise...

Asad: main toh yahin hun tum batao...

Zoya was about to say but hen her driver came and told her that her aapi and jeeju are waiting for her and are angry that she is getting late...

Zoya: tell them I'm coming...

So asad give me your no. I'll contact you, right now I have to leave. She took asad's phone from his hand and gae a miss call to her phone and handed him back the phone...

Zoya: save kar lo... Vaise asad humare yahan kal ek party hai tum aaoge na... main bhi kyun puch rahi hun tume toh aana hi hai... Tum rehte kahan ho batao main invitation dene khud aaungi...

Asad: kal main ghar par toh nahi hum tum shop par aa jana... main road par jo 'HEENA Handicrafts' ki shop hai vo aapni hai...

Zoya: okay... Bye then...

Asad: bye...

They both left for their home with a wonderful smile on their face.

Next day zoya was here at 'HEENA' she went to the counter where dilshad was busy with some customers. She turned to zoya and asked...

Dilshad: ji beta how can I help you.

Zoya: ji mujhe iss shop ke malik se milna hai.

Dilshad looked at her confusedly and asked again

Dilshad: ji kahiye...

Zoya: ji mijhe iss shop ke malik Mr. asad se milna hai...

Dilshad smiled at her and said..."Najma inhe ander le jaao inhe shop ke malik Mr. asad se milna hai..."

Najma looked at her mother incredulously and then to the guest she got her mother's point and said "aap ko shop ke malik se milna hai aap kaise janti hain unhen..."

Zoya: don't mind delhi se janti hum main unhe. Hum ek saath padhe hai, kafi acche talukat hai humare ...

Dilshad and najma were amused that asad had a girlfriend and they didn't know it...

Just the asad entered the shop...

Najma: Mr. Khan ye iss shop ke malik yani aapse milne aai hai...

Asad: najma... and najma giggled...

Zoya was surprised to see what was happening there...

Asad: najma ye zoya hai meri college ki dost. Hum delhi me ek saath the, aur zoya ye najam hai meri choti behen aur ye meri ammi hai, shop ki owner yahi hai...

Asad gave the introduction to everyone...

Zoya now embarrassed did salam to everyone and quickly gave the invitation and ran away from there... Leaving asad to face the teasing from his ammi and sister...



again i did it...😆😆😆

well this was last now from next update i'll be back to original maal... so say your views... all types of comments (encouraging and discouraging) allowed...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was brilliant

Totally loved it

The way you have written it was amazing

Fabulous work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting! The title got me wondering about what happened. Zoya was very cute asking so many questions and in the shop too.
Can't wait to see how the story unfolds! Thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sarfarosh I liked the scene and same you've penned down on asad and zoya lovely awesome and waiting for next update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh ho.. zoya...

that must be so embarrassing...😳

update soon..
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LOLL OMG LOVED IT..Zoya and embarrassed wow. Great update.
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