AsYa FF: Only in the darkness can you see the stars THREAD #1

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

This was so well written and you brought out all the emotions of everyone beautifully 👍🏼
Aww..Zoya agreed to marry Asad but let's see if he or the other family members agree or not 😳
Aaawwweee..Aadil called Zoya Ammi..This boy is really a bundle of cuteness and it's so saddening to see him go through this 😔
Please continue soon 😃

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Bubbles_buttons

@Bubbles_buttons

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Thanks for the lovely update! 😛

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roxon

@roxon

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

hi...i'm new to this forum and yours is the first FF i've read so far...and i just finished all the 15 chapters in one go and i've yet to complete my college work...this should say how gripping and entertaining your tale is...totally in love with all the characters and love that Ghafoor Siddiqui is not a badass in this and hope that he does not mind zoya marrying a guy who already has child...pls do add me to ur pm list and accept my buddy request...

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Hey Simmi😃

Good update as usual👍🏼

Please feel free to take as much liberties as you like😆 The story is going fabulous. The pace amazing...

And right now if I was into girls I think I would kiss Zoya😆 Awww...What the heck, I'm kissing her anyway😆 She just made my day by saying she will marry Asad...

Take that you toad Quereshi😡

The story is about to get a whole lot more interesting👍🏼

The sweetest moment for me was when Adil whispered to Zoya "I love you too Ammi" That was so beautiful...

I liked the way Asad explained Adil about custody and court and "Insides"...Brilliant dear.

This was again a well written chapter👏

Eagerly waiting for you to hit me with the next part😃

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mhd72

@mhd72

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Hey Simi,

This is awesome piece of work!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters in one go...😊

The pace, the characters, the concept...everything is so well written..wow..

Additional character of the kid is cute..Asad is also quite easy going & dare I say, normal, compared to the show...Of course , both of them come with a baggage, but seem to be more accepting & understanding of each other..

& for a change, GS does not look like a villain here...that is really fresh..😆 Pray he doesn't play the spoilsport in AsYa wedding coz of Aadil!! 😕

Hope you just do away with this Qureshi idiot soon...😃

Pls do pm me when you update next.

🤗

Mili.

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: love_kash
wow asya getting married.
i loved the whole update asad and aadil relationship surpasses the blood relationships.their whole convo was so emotional.
cont soon.

Thank you! 😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
next wala update kab ayega? ^-^

May be a teeny weeny while! 😳

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie
Hawww you stopped at this !
You got to continue soon
Can't what to see AsYa getting married
Update soon :)

Yes, I did, because cliffys like that! 😆😆

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Aww Asya Nikha!!!

The way Adil whispered to zoya referring her as Ammi was so touchy & emotional!!

Adil he is so innocent & understanding!!!

Nw lets see what's gonna happen in court

thanks 4 pm

update soon

Aadil is my little baby, so yea, he is the best! 😆😆