AsYa FF: Only in the darkness can you see the stars THREAD #1

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

What a meeting! Simply a heartfelt update! I love Ghaffur! So much! Hehe

Zainub, hmm. Ghaffur was right to have at least hoped that Zoya would know of him and come to him. Zainub, didn't let that happen now, did she. Why? No love and affection for her daughter. So sad. Is there more to her than what you've let on so far? Hmm.

All in all, great going! Amazing story!

FaRz

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Amazing update Simi. I never thought Zainab would be like this. 🤔 I feel really bad for Zoya, worse than before. Somehow Zainab was at fault for the way Zoya was treated.

Gaffur is good? Wow so many surprises in this update! 😆😆 Loved the way Asad supported Zoya through everything. I feel bad for Gaffur as well! 🥺 Poor him, had high hopes that Zoya knew him and knew that he loved her.

The connection between Gaffur and Zoya is heartwarming now. (: <33 🥳 Hehe Gaffur is gonna have a 'chat' with Asad. 🤣

Once again lovely update. 😃😃😃 Continue soon! xx

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

this was awesome the pain she kept with her for 22 years came out and the love he kept with him showered on her finally she is home and she is back where she has parents love security and now lets see what gaffur talks to asad

thanks for pm

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Zainub is a materialistic bitch.😡 (Btw nice role reversal from the show)😛

The scene was as I expected and your writing was great, which again I expected😉

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Finally she got down to talking to her father..

Asad being the one to guide zoya through her hesitations..

Father and daughter spoke..

And for zoya finally hugging her father felt like home..

Meeting her boyfriend..Every fathers right...

Awesome update...

Waiting..

Thanks for the pm..

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

love the father daughter bond

loved the way asad supported zo

putting the fear of God into u r daughter bf line was killer

i am no one to judge zainub sometimes circumstances in life make some people materalistic

but one thing is for sure she is wrong to have lied and not told zo about her real father and her childhood

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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: saida.m

Hi Angel!

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! 🤗 I love reading long and detailed reviews. Makes me so giddy!😆

Naughty Asad is good! 😆😆

I am happy that you liked the update and I will try to post the next chapter as soon as I get it done! I'll try to get it done fast!
😃

Hi Simi...

i too love giving long comments...it feels good...😉
and u r alwys welcome...
thnks fr continuing ur stories...cos nly this will keep us our KaBhi as AsYa now...

Edited by angel2930 - 11 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Awesome and lovely story...👏

Love all update and all are amazing...👍🏼

Now waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊

Pm me when u update nxt part...😃

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

omg dat was amazing...do continue soon...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#620

wow what an update
amazing better than what I imagine
her mother was quiet a character how can u
just watch ur child suffer yrs of abuse
loved the way gaffur wants to go have a chat
with asad that is always the job of the girls father
to scare the shit out of the boyfriend.
continue soon