Heyyy!!!
Alright, I just got around to reading this and I read all 8 chapters in one go. I have to say I love the way it's moving. The concept is really interesting. 👏
What I loved the most was how their was a friendship between Tanveer and Zoya. See, I take it as a test of friendship and loyalty.
Then Zoya's character of being so headstrong and understanding is something that makes her so lovable. I felt really bad when Asad explained everything to her, how he didn't have any siblings or friends. Then Zoya's trust in him is another factor that makes us believe the two are meant for each other.
I personally really loved the phone conversation. It was absolutely adorable how she kept on pulling his leg and he got so agitated. 😆
Then came Ayaan's proposal, kudos to Zoya for not doing the whole "He's my best friend so I'll do anything to make him happy, including marrying him". Her refusal was really straightforward but at the same time it was kind. She didn't want to hurt him but make him understand.
Jesus christ, how desperate can Tanveer get?!? She's a married woman for God's sake! You can't just show up to a guy's house after your wedding without your husband demanding to meet him. She even asked to
sleep with him!! That's just disgusting. 😡 😡
I loved Asad's confession. Lol, it was amazing how he got frustrate and Zoya was like "meri ek lauti phuppi ke bete ke saath". That was so sweet!
Happy Diwali to you too and take your time with the next update.
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Thanks a lot for your comments.. and also for finding time to read all the parts.. 😊.. Trust me.. you will find people like Tanveer and Rajveer.. everywhere.. .. It is a pity most of the time evil people like them escape.. even in real life.. ...😭
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