#WEsupportKSG AsYa FF First Touch Thread #3 {Completed}

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Gr8 superb loved it
asad and arham bonding is amazing and zoya is swet arham is wow too cute😛
i m gonna miss this ff😭
plz give us a epilouge
and plz update your new ff soon
plz pm me for it
continue soon your work😊

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

so so sad to say goodbye to first touch
it was an amazing journey with asya and one
story I would neve forget this was the second
story I read on IF and sorry to see the end
but u have started another so yayyy
thank u

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Maha

@maha2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

This was indeed the BEST fanfic of the forum!!!!!👏

i'll probably read the whole FF in my free time again!!!

looking forward to ur new one..😃

i really like this asad being right hand of gafoor concept😉

i was a silent reader when the story started.. im sorry i didnt contribute in comments

p.s i hope u dont mind.. but dilshad getting pregnant in the end cracked me up a bit😆

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het27

@het27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Awesome

highlight was "Ammi wo bechare nahi hain" 🤣

Dil too had a baby? 😲

I know many of us must be shocked and some may disapprove but you must have had some reason for writing that

AsYa aur unke Chaar bacche but nice you balanced out girls and boys but cmon Zo and her girls humesha bhari padenge in Asad and boys

Epilogue? please de do umm life after 10 years...

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komalpreet kaur

@Komal_gill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

hey chahanya😊 honestly telling that after reading the very first part of this ff I felt very irritated coz I was feeling like that somebody has put u on fast mode to write this ff...after that I stopped reading it and i'm telling u that a few days ago I went to a wedding which was at a very far place...so I thought about taking some stories of IF with myself which I had saved in my pc and after that I transferred those into my phone...and urs was one of them *don't worry i'll never-ever use any of these stories for my own purpose, I promise...I swear to god*...so where was I...oh yeah so I took those stories with me...and when I got some free time I thought about reading First Touch...and as I continued reading it...I was really regretting that why had I never thought about reading it earlier...it was damn good...I feel like slapping myself for thinking that u r not a good writer...i'm sorry...u r really very good...let alone good u r awesome, mindblowing and fantabulous...truly wonderful...i'm seriously very sorry...please forgive me if u could now coming back to the story it was flawless...very sensuous and hot ff I loved AsYa in this hot, bold and besharam avatar...they supported each other in every possible way...they never left each others side...and I truly admired the way they stood together in tough phases of life the things which I loved the most were zoya's boldness to bring her asad out of the pain, making love in car, asad changing his name to Asad Dilshad Khan, zoya being totally frank with asad about everything, asad's birthday night, asad's prank about coffee with zoya *I felt like awww while reading it*, the way asad explained the reason behind zoya's rejection as his personal secretary, his joke about personal secretary lolz, asya's effort of creating baby in hospital heheheee, zoya having antibiotics, her eagerness to get pregnant to make asad live his childhood through his son, asad's approval of najma-kabeer's nikaah, adoption of aharam and everything else about their cute kids- the little asads and the little zoyas...god they forgot about family planning at last i'll say that u r a wonderful writer...keep doing the great work...and i'm sorry once again do pm me for ur other works as well please take care

Edited by Komal_gill - 11 years ago

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: Linsie
awesome story...

Thank you

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi
brilliantly written story just loved reading it...the ending was awesome...
Awe asya have four children zoya, najma, dilshaad & humaira all were pregnet at same time, bichara asad 😆
This is one of the best story...,..

Thank you

Surbhi wo behcare nahi hai 😆

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
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unres

awesome update
it was a happy ending 😃
loved how all r now settled n happy now after facing all problems 😃
i am gonna miss this ff 😭
seriously i cannot believe that this FF has come to end 😲😭
Thanks for writing this beautiful FF which i think is oldest in this forum n came this long 👏😆

Thank you

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: anopama
so so sad to say goodbye to first touch
it was an amazing journey with asya and one
story I would neve forget this was the second
story I read on IF and sorry to see the end
but u have started another so yayyy
thank u

😃 😃 😃

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: maha2012
This was indeed the BEST fanfic of the forum!!!!!👏
i'll probably read the whole FF in my free time again!!!
looking forward to ur new one..😃
i really like this asad being right hand of gafoor concept😉
i was a silent reader when the story started.. im sorry i didnt contribute in comments
p.s i hope u dont mind.. but dilshad getting pregnant in the end cracked me up a bit😆

Thank you For liking First Touch

About Dilshad being pregnant I wanted her to have a full life

She raised Asad and Najma single handedly being both mom n dad

I wanted her to have the experience of being only a mother; I wanted her to have a partner at every phase of her life