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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
wonderful update dear..continue soon n pm me
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wow nice story
superb, i liked it alot
please cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Wonderful story..stillreading..just finished readu ng the first chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Chapter 4..

New entry brother and sister... who have long history together..
now they patch up
3 nikah is up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5... only few minus happiness...and
see what happen...

Now who is kidnapping them...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6

6 hours later : MANGALPUR

Asad and ayaan both got out of the car hurriedly ... They both ran towards some people who were busy in there work.
Asad showing picture of zaara and hania : kya aap ne in ko dekha hai??
Man 1: nahin janab hum kahan se dekhenge ??
Asad was going to various people and asking them...
Ayaan saw a lady sitting in the corner with ragged clothes ...he went towards her..
He bent on his knees : kya aap in ko dekha hai ; he said showing the pic
Lady : jee sahab , dekha hai humne .
Asad ran towards ayaan and said : kya hua ayaan?
Ayaan: bhaijaan in ko pata hai woh dono kahan hain...
Lady : woh dono anarkali dhabbe mien hain , meine khud dekha tha un ko wahan jab mien subha wahan se doodh lene gayi thi...woh dhabba highway par hai...
Asad: thankyou so much , aap ka bahat bahat shukriya .
Ayaan left a note of 500 with the lady.
Both the brothers sat in the car and dashed to the dhabba.

Anarkali dhabba

The men dragged both the girls to one of the rooms and lay them there...
Man 1 : madam hum ne aap ka kaam kar diya hai ...
Woman : theek hai ab yahan se jao.
Man 2 : paise?
The woman gave him two lakhs and shooed him off...
Once the men got out the woman closed the door.
Woman : akira bahar aa jao...
A girl for about 19 years old was standing in a dress which barely covered her .
Akira : JEE TANVEER BAAJI...
Tanveer : hahhaha akhir dono mere kabze mien hain ab mujhe mera asad aur tumhe tumhara ayaan mil jaaye ga..
Akira : jee haan baji .
(Akira is behind ayaan just like tanveer is behind asad. )
Aisa kabhi nahi hoga!! : a voice came from the entrance...
Tanveer : jammmyyy ...:$
Akira : saluu :$
(Akira named ayaan salu beacause he is a huge fan of salman khan)
Ayaan and asad both come in , both red with rage...

Tanveer's pov
Zoya tau bhool chuki hai sab kuch tau agar miene woh kiya tau mera liye hi acha hoga ...:)

Tanveer signalled some guys...the hit asad from the back and injected him with something which made him collapse and faint...
Ayaan : bhaijaa... But was cut short because he was also hit and injected...
Both of them lay there on the floor...
Tanveer and akira dragged both of them
To the nearest room ..
Zaara who was awake all the time , kept quite, she clearly knew what tanveer was up to and was shocked that she had a sister to, she glanced at hania who was still under the affect .
She stood up and slowly tip toed to the room , the scene she saw was shocking !!!
There were two beds in the room , on one was asad , while on one was akira.
They both pulled off as much as clothing as they could, they then went towards the men, they started with taking off thier shirts...but before they could continue , both the girls were on the floor , hands on thier cheeks,

Up till now hania had woken up and the scene in front of her was hell shocking.
She and zoya both went and slapped the two ...!!

Tanveer : aahhh banno rani!!!
Akira : humera ki bachi!!

Asad and ayan both woke up by the sound of shouting only to see , zaara and hania , full of anger towering tanveer and akira, they just then noticed that they were not wearing any shirts,
Asad then got the flashback of his past ,,,, that fateful day!!
Asad and ayaan hurriedly wore their shirt and ran towards the two girls who looked like they will kill the other two..
Asad : ZOYA stop!!!
Zaara stopped and looked at asad,
Asad : i meant, zaara!
Ayaan looked at asad while hania looked at zoya.
Hania : hum dono ko kuch baat karni hai...
Ayaan : ohh k , kya??
Zaara : uhh woh abhi nahi baad mien!!
She looked at hania and she understood,
Hania : Umm hum chalte hain ,
Asad : chalo

It was a silent trip back home all were in their thoughts ...

Bhopal ( two hrs later ) 10 :00 pm

The whole family was walking here and there , tensed
Najma , imran , farhaan and nikhat had also come hearing about zaara and hania.
Nikhat : na jaane kab ayen ge!!
Nuzrat : aa gaye!!

The whole family looked towards the door only to see zaara and hania deep in sleep in asad and ayaan's hands.
Najma and the whole family had a huge smile on thier face.
Dilshaad : in ko in ke room mien daal do.
Everybody sighed relief.
Asad and ayaan both went upstairs and put the girls in their room!
After putting the girls down , they both looked at each other then suddenly started searching the room,
Ayaan : bhaijaan!!!
Asad : sshhh!! Kya hua??
Ayaan : humara shak sahi nikla ye dono zoya aur humera hi hain!!
Asad smiled and then took the id's , : hmm lagta hai yeh news hum inhe break karte hai!!
Ayaan : magar kese ??
Asad whispered the plan in ayaan's ears.
The both took out the boxes they had in their hands and kept it on the sidetable .
Ayaan : chalo bhaijaan chalte hain...

They both went to thier rooms with a contented smile and started to work on their plan, which was obviously going to take a while!!!

Precap : SURPRISE!!!!!!i

So how was it , i know i updated
pretty late, sorry !!!!!

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interesting storyline continue soon
pm plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wahh! What a slap..lol. Can't wait to find out what they are going to do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khan mansion : 3:00 am

"AMMIII!!!!! " echoed through the whole mansion waking each and every member of the khan family.
Zaara sat there on her bed sweating!
Hania : baji aap therk tau ho??
Zaara : uhh woh haan hania mien bilkul theek hun
Asad came rushing towards the girls room and barged in along with the other family members just to see zoya sitting on the bed with her hand on her head and hania besides her , comforting her...
Asad: uhh zaara aap theek tau hain?
Zaara : ji , uhh mien theek hoon
Zaara looked at his eyes and could see the concern. His eyes spoke volumes and she knew that. There eyes locked and for once she felt her body go weak but instantly she broke her gaze and. Looked the ground .
Zaara: uhh mr.khan aap ja sakte hain , i Am fine ...trust me
Asad:are you sure?
Zaara: ji ab aap jaye mr khan
Dilshaad: zaara magar woh sapna..
Zaara: uhh woh kuch nahi phoopi, jab se mien choti thi tab se mujhe yeh sapne aate hain, ap ko tau pata hi hai...!
Dilshaad : haan??
Zaara : mera matlab tha ke ab pata chal gaya hai na..
Ayaan and asad looked at each other and smiled , ayaan came closer to asad and whispered " lagta hai ab yeh log bhi nahi chupa pa rahe hain "
Asad smiled and replied " achi tarah pata hai "
Ayra : baji aap theek ho na ??
Zaara : arre haan baby ..
Faisal : beta hum chalte hain aap ko agar kuch kaam ho to bula lena
Zaara : ji abbu <3
Everyone goes out of the room except asad and ayaan.
Hania : aap dono bhi jaa kar so jaye..
Ayaan : haan haan hum jaa rahe hain!!
They both go out while hania goes to zaara ,
Hania : baji ab hum kya kar sakte hain! Ek ek kar ke sab ko pata chal jaye ga ke hum hania aur zaara nahi hain..
Zaara : jaanti hun mien magar shaadi se pehle hum yeh kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakte kyunke agar kiSi ko pata chAla ke hum wapis aa chuke hain tau hamare dushman humien phir se target karien ge...
Hania : baat tau aap ki sahi hai, hmm tau ab
Zaara : ab bas agar kisi ko pata chale ga tau woh MR.KHAN aur ayaan honge.
Hania : hmm theek hai tau phir abhi so jate hain.
They both lie down and and face the other side.
Hania goes to sleep instantly but zaara keeps on thinking...
Zaara pov
Agar mr.khan ko pata chala tau shayad woh mujhse bohat naraz honge.magar mere paas aur koi option bhi tau nahi hai...khair jo hoga so haga ab hum is mien hum kya kar sakte hain...
She also goes to sleep baffled with her thoughts ,
At the other side if the house ayaan and asad cant sleep themselves they are also baffled with thier own thoughts...
Asad pov
Ughh why zoya why ???!! Kyun kiya tha yeh sab KYUN!! Miss zoya farooqi kal aap mujhe mere har sawaal ka jawaab dena hoga tumhe.. And by that he also went to sleep while ayaan had already slept ...

10 am , khan mansion ENGAGEMENT DAY

The mansion was in full swing , it was engagement day of all 3 couples..
Hania and zaara's room:

Both had woken up about and half an hour ago , and had a bath they both had identical washrooms in the sane room so both went and had a bath , hania was the first one to come out , she came out in her bathrobe only and was going to take her clothes when she caught a gift wrapped in pink gift paper on her side of the bed and it also had a note, she went to the note and picked it up :
The note said :
Meri Ankhon Mein Gham Ki Nishaani Nahi
Pathron Ke Payalon Mein Paani Nahi
Main Tujhe Bhool Ker Bhi Nahi Bhoolta
Pyaar Sona Hai Sone Ka Paani Nahi
Meri Apni Bhi Majbooriyan Hain Bohat
Main Samandar Hoon Peene Ka Paani Nahi
Mer Chehra Lakeeron Mein Taqseem Hai
Ayinon Se Mujhe Badgumaani Nahi
Shaam Ke Baad Bachon Se Kaise Miloon
Ab Mere Paas Koi Kahani Nahi
Mausmon Ke Lafaafe Badalte Rahe
Koi Tehreer Itni Puraani Nahi
Koi Asaib Hai Is Haseen Shehar Per faysal
Shaam Roshan Hai Lekin Suhaani Nahi
"Please wear the dress and come hania."
...~~~~~~~~~~~~~...
Hania blushed and looked at the box , she unwrapped it and saw a beautiful shalwaar kameez it was blue in colour and it had an embroidered border in it it and a beautiful dupatta ,but it resembled to the ones she used to wear before, she happily took the dress and went in the washroom to change .
Just as hania went inside zaara came out , she was about to go and take her normal clothes when she noticed an amazingly wrapped gift resting on her side table, she went towards it and saw a note stuck to it, it said :
In ankhon mai dekh ker bata sakta hoon,
Mujh se bicher ne ke baad tum soye nahi hoge,
Ye nain jis mai abhi hansi nazer ati hai,
Vo nain tum ne aanso mai bhigoye hoge,
Ye haath jispe mehekti hai surkhiya,
Vo haath dard chupane mai tumhare kaam aye hoge,
Zindagi ka ye safer ab tanha hi katega yaara,
Udaas mai hoon to khush tum bhi nahi hoge,
Ghum ye nahi ke mere pyaar pe hans diye,
Ghum ye hai ke uske baad tum bohot roye hoge..
"Zaara please mera diya hua dress pehe kar aana :) "
...--------...
Zaara blushed a bright red as she opened the box but immediately stopped as she looked at the dress ...
A pink top with blue denim jeans they did look amazing but it was obvious that the family wont like it especially faisal abbu!! But zaara being zaara was ready to wear it just for asad...
Precap : asad and ayaan annoying hania and zaara and a beautiful confession.

Soo hw was it people???? I am sorry i was soo busy !!! Thankyou for those amazing comments!! Love you all thankyou for the encouragement <3
Please please please comment and tell me how it was ???!!!

Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago

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