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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz dont stop
continue writing
good luck on ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All you have to do to get an image is you type whatever image u want on google images and then copy the url

Write ur ff and stop where u want the pics
Click on the icon next to the hyperlink icon ( hyperlink = like a earth and a pin across )
There is an icon like a image click on tht paste the url and kaboom!
When u will click the icon it will say like
Http://
erase that out and paste the url
Hope it helped even i didnt get it i figured it out later
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 8!

Khan mansion 11:00 am

Hania entered the room wearing the beautiful dress ayaan gave her...

She had a bright smile on her face and she had a dark pink blush on her cheeks...she was looking like an angle descended from heaven.
Zaara came out of the washroom wearing a gorgeous churidar..

Hania turned around just to look at her beautiful sister standing their with a mischievous glint in her eyes..
'Mashallah humera begum! Rabart ka diya hua suit pehen kar tau aap Bari khubsurat lag rahi hain .."
Hania looked at zoya shocked "aap ko kese pata ke yeh ayaan ne diya hai?"
"Well woh iss liye kyun ke un ke beloved bhaijaan ne bhi humien jeans tohfe mein di hai, and its obvious ke itna cute blush tum kabhi nahi karti ho"
"Haha very funny! But appi why didnt you wear the jeans?"
"Well girl...i think that we should have some fun with them,you know thora sa annoy karte hain..."
"Hmm idea bura nahi hai...but does that mean ke mien yeh dress utaar doon?"
"Only if you want to.."
"Well if it means having fun with the boys,then...ok!"
Hania ran inside and changed into another churidar .

Both the girls walked out of the door and went down for breakfast..

DINING TABLE

The whole khan family including najma,imran,nikhat & farhaan were present(they had come to spend the day) Faisal was also present. Dilshaad had cooked an amazing breakfast for the family.
Dilshaad: Are...yeh zaara aur hania kahan reh gaye?
Ayaan: tayyar ho rahe honge Bari ammi ;he winked at asad
Zaara: nahi ayaan miya hum tayyar ho gaye.
The whole family except ayaan and asad turned around to see hania and zaara standing there.

*Asad and Ayaan whispering*
Ayaan: haha bhaijaan i am sure ke un dono ne humare diye hue kapre pehne honge.
Asad:obviously, lekin tumhe pata hai na ke humien unhien ignore karna hai.
Ayaan:haan bhaijaan obviously!
*whispering finished*

Dilshaad: mashallah bahat khubsurat lag rahe ho dono
Shireen: haan dilshaad bilkul sahi kaha, lekin meri bahu zyada khubsurat lag rahi hai..
Dilshaad: nahi zoya zyada khubsurat lag rahi hai!
Shireen:nahi humera!
Dilshaad: nahi zoya!
Shireen:nahi...*rashid cuts in*
Rashid: uhh shireen..dilshaad bas!
Zaara and hania look at each other and smirk.
Hania:hmm ab humien bhi koyi bataye ke yeh humera aur zoya kaun hai?
Asad and ayaan turn around and look at the girls shocked..then they notice the smirk on thier faces.
Asad:kyun aap jaan kar kya Karen gi?
Zaara walks closer to asad and says : well is ghar mien woh bahat important lagti hain aur ab jab hum is ghar ki bahuien ban ne ja rahi hain tau humien bhi tau pata chale woh kaun thi..
Ayaan :well main humera main bata sakta hun but zoya ke bara main bhaijaan hi batain ge.
Hania:tau bhaijaan pehle aap bataye.
Asad stands up from the dining table and walks towards the sofa in a dramatic manner
Asad: zoya meri...meri..
Zaara:aapki?
Asad:sabar karo...tau main kya keh raha tha ...haan! Zoya meri girlfriend thi... *the whole family looked at asad shocked, the most shocked were zaara and hania...*
Zaara:girl..f..rie..nd?
Asad smirked: haan girlfriend ! Hum dono ek night club mien mile the ...bechari ne bahat zyada pi li thi..tau Maine socha ke kyun na iss ki thori si madad kar doon..main uss ko ek yacht par le kar gaya jo meri friend ki thi...wahan gaye tau pata chala keh yacht ki saari lights kharaab ho gayi thi..iss liye main uss ko apne ghar le gaya aur wahan ammi aur baki sab ghar wale mile...woh subha uthi tau pata chala ke us ke paas rehne ke liye koi jaga nahi hai..tau humne uss ko humare paas rehne ko kaha...kuch din beete aur sab ko woh bahat pasand aane lagi...uss ki shayriyaan , uss ki dhamkiyan, aur us ka confidence sab ko bahat pasand ayaa...lekin mujhe woh sab kuch bahat annoy karta tha, meri ek dost thi tanveer ,wohi jiss ne uss din tumhe kidnap kiya tha...woh mera paisa chahti thi apni respect ke liye iss liye jo bhi mere kareeb aata tha woh iss ko mar deti thi ya use mujh se door bhej deti thi...anjaane main hi main aur zoya bahat kareeb aa gaye aur mujhe zoya se pyaar ho gaya aur tanveer ki wajah se saari problems khari huyi aur uss hi wajah se zoya aaj mere saath nahi hai par main ab bhi uss se utni hi mahabbat kar hoon!

The whole family had tears in there eyes after listening to this ...zaara was crying silently thinking about how much her decision had pained asad ...she knew it was high time and she had to take away the pain from asad...
Faisal: magar kya tum zaara ko apna pao ge...zoya ki jagah?
Asad looked at faisal then looked at zaara ..they were talking through there eyes saying something which none could comprehend except them.
Zaara broke her gaze and said: Abu..sacha pyaar sacha pyaar hi hota hai aur mujhe lagta hai ke mr khan ne zoya se sachi mahabbat ki hai tau uss ki jagha zaara ko kese mil sakti hai? Woh tau sirf zoya ko hi mil sakti hai na lekin shayad zoya ko bhi mr.khan par yakeen karna chahiye tha...un ke pyaar par yakeen karna chahiye tha..
Asad: zoya ne jo kiya shayad galat tha zaara magar har galti ki ek saza hoti hai aur uss ki mafi bhi hoti hai ...aur shayad zoya hum sab se door reh kar apni saza bhugat rahi hai aur ab main sirf us ko maaf kar sakta hun aur us se apni galati ki maafi mang satka hoon ...
Ayra: asad jeeju dont worry maybe aapko apki zoya nahi mil payee but meri aapi bhi kuch kam nahi hai..
Asad:mujhe meri zoya mil gayi hai..
Zaara looked at asad shocked.
Asad:mera matlab hai ke haan ayra tum theek keh rahi ho.
Ayaan :main apni kahaani baad main hi suna doon ga.
Asad:haha haan ayaan miyan..
Shireen :chalo breakfast pura kar lo.
Without any noise the whole family went back and started eating ..the whole breakfast was a silent affair.

All the decorations and stuff had been done for the engagement ceremony ...

Engagement <3

Both the brides decended the stairs wearing beautiful lehengas...zoya was wearing a pink and silver one with a small tika on her head while humera was wearing a blue and silver one with a small tika...
Both were looking heavenly ...
The grooms were wearing silver sherwani's with a pink scarf on asad's neck while a blue one on ayaan's & right now they were lost in the beauty of thier brides...
Dilshaad and shireen held the hands of thier daughter in law's and took them towards their lost sons...
They forwaded the rings and the rings were exchanged between both the couples...the whole house was bursting with noise of music and the guests...but both the brides were not there...asad and ayaan panicked and looked everywhere, asad was just going in the garden when he saw zaara sitting on a bench in the balcony...he went towards her and tapped her shoulder , she looked up to see asad staring at her , asad could see tears rolling down her cheeks and suddenly zaara hugged him like her life depended on it and kept saying "i'm sorry!"...asad hugged her back and thet stayed like that for atleast ten minutes when asad pulled back and said"zaara why are you saying sorry"
Zaara:mr.khan i am not zaara..
Asad: i know ...i know that you are zoya...my zoya!
Zoya:i am so sorry mr.khan...i shudnt have gone...i should have trusted you ...
She hugged him again while he kissed her hair...
Asad:forget the past zoya ...forget everything the only thing that matters now is that I LOVE YOU AND ALWAYS WILL!
Zoya: I LOVE YOU TOO MR.KHAN AND ALWAYS WILL!
The couple stayed in each others arms under the bright white moon.

On the other side ayaan was looking for hania when he saw her in the garden talking to herself while looking at the stars...
Hania: i wish abbu aap yahan hote
Ayaan kept his hand on hania's shoulder:hania...
Hania:ayaan! Aap yahan?
Ayaan :haan woh main aap ko dhoond raha tha...
Hania:oh acha , chalo...*hania stood up from the bench just then ayaan held her hand*
Ayaan:hania...can we talk.
Hania turned her face towards him: sure ayaan..
Ayaan:umm...actually main janta hun ke aap humera hi hain..
Humera:haha mujhe pata hai
Ayaan:huh?!?! Kese?
Humera:ayaan main aap ko aap se bhi acha janti hun aur iss waqt sirf yeh kehna chahti hun ke mera decision galat tha ..sab galat tha...mujhe nahi jjaana chahiye tha...
Ayaan: humera..
Humera:nahi ayaan main ek bahat buri insaan hun..main..
*humera was cut by ayaan's hug*
Ayaan: I LOVE YOU A LOT HUMERA BEGUM!!!
Humera:par main bahat buti hun!
Ayaan:SHHH!!! Tum duniya ki best insaan ho kyunke tum meri humera ho aur meri humera kabhi buri nahi ho sakti ...
Humera:I LOVE YOU AYAAN!
Ayaan:hahahah I LOVE YOU TOO<3
Thats how both the couple confessed under the smiling stars and the mischevious moon...

Phew!!! Well the story didnt end yet people and i have no idea how far this story will go but i gave you a confession...and please tell me if you liked it or not ...give your comments it always increases my confidence in writing down my thoughts :)

Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Dress ayaan gave humera


Dress humera wore afterwards

Dress zoya wore
Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
plz do continue dont stop
great update
loved how the girls played with the guys
and the confessions were awesome
Edited by anopama - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
yupieee finally they confessed
loved it ywr..it was wonderful
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: anopama

plz do continue dont stop
great update
loved how the girls played with the guys
and the confessions were awesome



I will continue i guess a few parts left and thnkyou
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Plz dnt stop writing
its very nyc
do continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Thankyouuu for your lovely comments love you all 😊
Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
CHAPTER 9


Ayaan and humera broke from the embrace and looked at each other then looked up at the stars...
Humera:ayaan..aaj yeh taare bhi iss baat keh saboot hain keh hum ek doosrey se kitna pyaar karte hain..
Ayaan:haan humera...*he let out a soft chuckle*
Humera:aap has kyun rahe hain?
Ayaan:itni dino ..sorry itne saalon baad aapko humera bulana bahat acha lag raha hai...
The both looked at each other and burst out laughing.
Humera caught someone at the balcony ...
Humera pointed towards the balcony: ayaan..woh kaun hai?
Ayaan looked where she pointed..
Ayaan:yeh koi ek insaan nahi lag raha..yeh do log hain aur hug kar rahe hain!
Humera:chalo upar chalo ayaan dekhte hain!!! She dragged him up the stairs towards and into the balcony but before she could step in ayaan pulled her back...
Ayaan:woh log hug kar rahe hain aur tum un ke paas ese hi chale jao gi?
Humera : yeh tau main ne socha hi nahi ...magar yeh hai kaun?
Ayaan:pata na... He was cut short by the voices of the people in the balcony and he was shocked would be an understatement...

Voices:
Girl: look!! Stars...
Boy:haan haan i can see them ..main andha nahin hun...
Girl: shut up!
Boy : acha sorryy..
Girl :its ok
Boy: ab humein jaana chahiye varna koi aa jaye ga..
Girl: ji chaliye..

Humera : itni asani se nahi lovebirds!
Ayaan: absolutely!
Girl:ayaan! Hania!
Humera:ji zoya baji ...magar hania nahi humera!
Zoya:huh?
Ayaan:wah asad bhaijaan! Aap tau bare chupe rustum nikle ...kuch bataya bhi nahi aur yeh sab?
Asad: ayaan beta! Aap ne mujhe bataya kya ke main aapko batao and btw yeh sab kuch do teen mahine pehle nahi abhi hua hai samjhe!
Humera:haan haan bhaijaan samajh gaye...sab samajh gaye!
Ayaan: chalo jaldi neeche chalte hain sab ko batana hai!!
Zoya:ayaan...hum nahi bata sakte...
Asad:tum janti ho ke zoya ke in sab ne tumhe kitna miss kiya hai!
Zoya:main janti hun magar
Ayaan:mona!! Are you in ur senses hum yeh sab kisi se nahi chupa sakte...
Zoya: ayaan meri baat please puri tarah sun lo!!!
Asad:sunao!
Zoya:dekho...
Asad: kya dekhon? *sarcastically*
Zoya:asad...humare peeche kitne log the jo chahte the ke yeh shaadi na ho...aur kitne log mere peeche the kyunke woh yeh shaadi nahi chahte the...agar abhi hum batain ge tau logon ko pata chal sakta hai iss liye chup rehana he better ho ga aur rahi baat humera ki tau agar hum ne bataya ke yeh humera hai...zahir hai ke main zoya hun!
Ayaan:ohh but still...
Humera:ayaan aapi theek keh rahi hai! Pls *she pouted*
Ayaan:uhh ...ok!

Rashid calling..."AYAAN...ASAD !!! Kahan ho???"

All four of them looked at each other then towards the door ...all four of them ran downstairs as fast as they could...just in time before anyone cud notice the brides...


On the other side of Bhopal...
Man:aap fikar mat kejiye main hotel main reh loon ga...
Rashid:nahi aap hamare bussiness partner hain aur hum aapko hotel main kese rehne dien MR.HAIDER SHAIKH...
Haider:agar aap itna keh hi rahe hain tau theek hai...
Rashid:yeh hui na baat...tau bataye aap kab aa rahe hain.
Haider:bas kal hi..
Rashid:theek hai ...khudahafiz
Haider:khudahafiz
*phone cancel*
Haider: razia siddique ab aap ka gunah aap ki beti HUMERA bhugte gi...aur aap zinda reh kar mera kuch nahi kar payi tau mar kar kya karien gi...?Meri maa ko Marne ki saza apki beti ko mile ki RAZIA!

In Mumbai ...

Rashid:tau MR RIZWAN IQBAL ji aap aa jayen ge?
Rizwan:hi bilkul kal tak pahanch jaon ga...
Rashid: shukar hai ke dono business partner saath hi aa jayen ge ek aap aur ek MR HAIDER shaikh... Riwan:ji bilkul theek kaha...acha ab chalta hun..khudahafiz
Rashid:ji...khudahafiz
*phone cancel*
Rizwan:zoya siddique urf MERI SAUTELI BEHEN...hahahah mujhe ek orphanage main chora gaya tha sirf tumhari wajah se!! Aur ab us ki saza tumhe khani pare gi...chuchuchu!!


(RIZWAN is played by VIVIAN D'SENA and his character and relation will get told as the story unfolds)


I know its very short but i didnt have the energy to write more :( I feel really down these days..SORRY FOR SUCH A SHORT UPDATE :( I feel that only some people read my FF...Well hope you atleast like this update...i will surely update soon<3
Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago

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