An AsYa TS - The Co-Passengers. Updated - Last Part - 28th Oct. '13 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Linsie

Waking her up and that moment was so funny...
zoya in dream land...
asad romance...
pink Ex 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: zola007

AWESOME !!

it is the first time that i am reading this kind of story on asad and zoya and it is just great !!!

Stupid heart! Pump blood, idiot! I need to stay alive, I'm too young to die! Resume beating right now buddy!

ROFL !!!! couldn't stop laughing !!!😆

Get a grip lady! Stop drooling! You aren't that kind, remember?

i was like : you ARE that kind Zoya !!!

(cf : six packs😆)

Calls me a grown up man and talks to me like I'm 7. Talk about Ammi and logic.

well ,, all mothers are the same right ??😕

"Ammi, she liked it a lot and is immensely impressed with you. She even... " "She?", Dilshaad chimed in, "She's a girl! Is she pretty? How old is she? What does she do? Is she married?"

oh my god !!!!!! even here dilshad wants asad to be married 😆

"Um, Asad?", "I mean, if you're fine with me calling you Asad?"
"Of course, you won't call me Ammi now, will you?!"

Asad jokes ???!!!!!?!?!?!?!😛

***

What the hell's wrong wrong with Pink Ex ... ??? Like Baby ... honestly ??? 🤢

***

Pulling her towards him, his free hand encircled her waist. Their faces were barely inches apart, making it hard for them to resist each other's fragrance.
She tilted her head as she snaked her free arm around his neck and tip toed to reach his level.
Bending his head till his nose touched hers, both held their breath for the moment they had been waiting for.

How cute !!!!

but im 100 % sure Pink Ex will spoilt this wonderful moment up😡

eagerly waiting for your next update!😃

Originally posted by: zola007

AWESOME !!

it is the first time that i am reading this kind of story on asad and zoya and it is just great !!!

Stupid heart! Pump blood, idiot! I need to stay alive, I'm too young to die! Resume beating right now buddy!

ROFL !!!! couldn't stop laughing !!!😆

Get a grip lady! Stop drooling! You aren't that kind, remember?

i was like : you ARE that kind Zoya !!!

(cf : six packs😆)

Calls me a grown up man and talks to me like I'm 7. Talk about Ammi and logic.

well ,, all mothers are the same right ??😕

"Ammi, she liked it a lot and is immensely impressed with you. She even... " "She?", Dilshaad chimed in, "She's a girl! Is she pretty? How old is she? What does she do? Is she married?"

oh my god !!!!!! even here dilshad wants asad to be married 😆

"Um, Asad?", "I mean, if you're fine with me calling you Asad?"
"Of course, you won't call me Ammi now, will you?!"

Asad jokes ???!!!!!?!?!?!?!😛

***

What the hell's wrong wrong with Pink Ex ... ??? Like Baby ... honestly ??? 🤢

***

Pulling her towards him, his free hand encircled her waist. Their faces were barely inches apart, making it hard for them to resist each other's fragrance.
She tilted her head as she snaked her free arm around his neck and tip toed to reach his level.
Bending his head till his nose touched hers, both held their breath for the moment they had been waiting for.

How cute !!!!

but im 100 % sure Pink Ex will spoilt this wonderful moment up😡

eagerly waiting for your next update!😃

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

I LOVE IT! 😃 I really love Zoya's quirky little thoughts. 😳 I have to say though, I AM OBSESSED WITH PINK! 😆 I'm that typical girl who needs pink, pink, and only pink! 😉 A lot of people don't really like pink anymore, they seem to like blue and purple and green, etc. Anyways, I really LOVE the concept for this story, AsYa next to each other on the train. At first, I was convinced that the "pink explosion" was Tanveer. 🤢 Thank goodness it's not her, even though I still hate this girl. 😆 Continue soon, please! 😛 Asad and Zoya are SO cute! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: kabhi7777

awesome start😊continue soon 😉

nd plz pm me😛

Originally posted by: manognasai

Wow...read both the parts nw!It was really awesome n cute!Update fast...pm me wen u update😃

Originally posted by: saida.m

I loved it!!!!👏

Such a great, funny, witty and smile inducing update!!!!
They talk, and talk!

Stupid heart! Pump blood, idiot! I need to stay alive, I'm too young to die! Resume beating right now buddy!

I loved this line!!! Don't I always say it! Honestly, heart really likes to step its feet in brain's functions! 😆

Get a grip lady! Stop drooling! You aren't that kind, remember?

- Great!😆

But the world refused to acknowledge it just because Mads didn't even know Zoya existed! How utterly irrational reasoning is that?

It really is unfair!!! FYI, I am huge fangirl! 😳

Calls me a grown up man and talks to me like I'm 7. Talk about Ammi and logic.

Welcome to Ammi land, Asad. And, no, there has to be no logic to their words! It's like a part of the mom description!

Feeling like a fool for having shut them for a while, he opened them, only to find a Zoya busy with her phone.
She turned the Secondary Camera on and held it in front of Asad's face. "Better?", she asked a dazed Asad.
"Mm hm". He could just nod in response, wiping the cheese spot in the process.
Beauty with brains. Nice.

Gah! I LOVED this bit! So freaking hilarious!🤣

"Would she be joining us too Baby?", Aditi screamed in Asad's ear, earning a death glare from Zoya.
Baby? Seriously?

Back off, Pink 'Ex'!!! Haha, great character!!

Pulling her towards him, his free hand encircled her waist. Their faces were barely inches apart, making it hard for them to resist each other's fragrance.
She tilted her head as she snaked her free arm around his neck and tip toed to reach his level.
Bending his head till his nose touched hers, both held their breath for the moment they had been waiting for.

Eeep! Me:

Update soon!!!❤️

Much love,

Simi

Originally posted by: nnn

disappoint duh?!!?!!

Such an amazing piece of creativity😊😊and u talk of disappointment!??😃😃😃

seriously it's wonderful and please keep the story going, it helps to get over the disgusting tracks 🤢

we getting to see on qubool hai lately😊

hope they'll have no interferance from that pinky-girly and share and intimate moment😊

oh and not only from her but the lights as well, should not come before they kiss😳😳!!!!!!!!!!

!!😆😆😆

dilshad's so cute man.. alrready foreseeing them as a couple i presume😆😆

continue soon and pm me please ..sent u a buddy request.

thanks😉😉

Originally posted by: Applef

love it..

''pink ex'' haha..

Stupid heart! Pump blood, idiot! I need to stay alive, I'm too young to die! Resume beating right now buddy!

awesome buddy..😆

aww.. dilshad momma..

so curious about the girl sitting beside her son..😉

and you stopped it, right there??

how could you??😲

update soon..

Originally posted by: laks_vish

loooved your update..thanks for Pm ing me...Asad talking to his heart was very cute and funny...and our little zoya a foodie always hungry unlike many size zero girls...Amazing!!