An AsYa TS - The Co-Passengers. Updated - Last Part - 28th Oct. '13

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Marvellous and rocking update..

Loved her dream though..

Asad and zoya got along.. beauty with brains..

Trying to avoid the pink exp..left me with a smile..

Were their wish fulfilled..

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Awesome update. I wish they kiss.

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

disappoint duh?!!?!!

Such an amazing piece of creativity😊😊and u talk of disappointment!??😃😃😃

seriously it's wonderful and please keep the story going, it helps to get over the disgusting tracks 🤢

we getting to see on qubool hai lately😊

hope they'll have no interferance from that pinky-girly and share and intimate moment😊

oh and not only from her but the lights as well, should not come before they kiss😳😳!!!!!!!!!!

!!😆😆😆

dilshad's so cute man.. alrready foreseeing them as a couple i presume😆😆

continue soon and pm me please ..sent u a buddy request.

thanks😉😉

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sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Nice update plz update soon 😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Wow...read both the parts nw!It was really awesome n cute!Update fast...pm me wen u update😃

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kabhi7777

@kabhi7777

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awesome start😊continue soon 😉

nd plz pm me😛

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

I LOVE IT! 😃 I really love Zoya's quirky little thoughts. 😳 I have to say though, I AM OBSESSED WITH PINK! 😆 I'm that typical girl who needs pink, pink, and only pink! 😉 A lot of people don't really like pink anymore, they seem to like blue and purple and green, etc. Anyways, I really LOVE the concept for this story, AsYa next to each other on the train. At first, I was convinced that the "pink explosion" was Tanveer. 🤢 Thank goodness it's not her, even though I still hate this girl. 😆 Continue soon, please! 😛 Asad and Zoya are SO cute! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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@Zola029

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

AWESOME !!

it is the first time that i am reading this kind of story on asad and zoya and it is just great !!!

Stupid heart! Pump blood, idiot! I need to stay alive, I'm too young to die! Resume beating right now buddy!

ROFL !!!! couldn't stop laughing !!!😆

Get a grip lady! Stop drooling! You aren't that kind, remember?

i was like : you ARE that kind Zoya !!!

(cf : six packs😆)

Calls me a grown up man and talks to me like I'm 7. Talk about Ammi and logic.

well ,, all mothers are the same right ??😕

"Ammi, she liked it a lot and is immensely impressed with you. She even... " "She?", Dilshaad chimed in, "She's a girl! Is she pretty? How old is she? What does she do? Is she married?"

oh my god !!!!!! even here dilshad wants asad to be married 😆

"Um, Asad?", "I mean, if you're fine with me calling you Asad?"
"Of course, you won't call me Ammi now, will you?!"

Asad jokes ???!!!!!?!?!?!?!😛

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What the hell's wrong wrong with Pink Ex ... ??? Like Baby ... honestly ??? 🤢

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Pulling her towards him, his free hand encircled her waist. Their faces were barely inches apart, making it hard for them to resist each other's fragrance.
She tilted her head as she snaked her free arm around his neck and tip toed to reach his level.
Bending his head till his nose touched hers, both held their breath for the moment they had been waiting for.

How cute !!!!

but im 100 % sure Pink Ex will spoilt this wonderful moment up😡

eagerly waiting for your next update!😃