~AsYa TS:Jane Pechane Se Ajnabe~Part 2(pg13) - Page 8

Originally posted by: kabhi7777

nice one... 😊 update next part soon ... loved it.. 😊

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Asad miyan is a chatterbox? Wow! this is a first!

Really like the story! Update soon!

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

awesome

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

🤣 Asad is a chatterbox?

Nice concept, I like it! 👍🏼 Continue soon! 😃

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: 11sinal

its very intresting

continue soon

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome story line

Originally posted by: tareyfan

Nuts first of all seriously sry...i noe m quite late...😳

so nw cuming to d update..i had read d original story edited by ravinder singh..bt nt completely...😳

u added ur own touch to it...

n it came out beautifully...

d feelings were expressed in an amazzing way...

zoya mmissing d bus meeting Asad...

n d flashbak ...

at a point i thought dat it'll make me nostalgic...😳

n ya i forgot to mmention..i adore ur title..gud choice buddy...

n d end will dey ever meet again...??

hope dey do...

n nw update d nxt part ASAP...

waiting for it...

eager to read further...

PS- n u call it pathetic...?? it was amazing...!!

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

interesting

Originally posted by: -Hinaloveasya-

Wow update soon

Originally posted by: nuts_22

Loved ur comment ashu🤗