~AsYa TS:Jane Pechane Se Ajnabe~Part 2(pg13)

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Hello Everyone back with an asya story😊

Jane Pehchane

Se Ajnabi

Sometimes Strangers are not really Strangers!!

Sounds Idiotic Right😆

So here is a story of two individiuals Asad and Zoya Who met as strangers but ended up having a great bond!!

This story I read long back in a novel love stories that touched my heart which is edited by ravinder singh(Writer) so I thought to share it with you
the stoy will take different turn from that in the novel an I have given it the Asya touch😳

Chapter 1:

It Was mid october after dusshera and it was a pleasent evening in Bhopal

Zoya Faroquie a girl of twenty Something was getting late to reach home but was struggling to get in the bus which was very Overcrowded

She could not get in and after running behind it half a mile she missed it

Zoya:Allah Miyaan!! Whats wrong with u out of all the days aj hi mujhe office se late nikalna tha,now how will i reach home on time

I hate to wait for buses!

Zoya was busy talking to herself when she listened a male voice

"Can u Please tell me which bus i should i board in to reach Arera Colony??

Zoya To Herself:

He is so Handsome!

I must say in the irritation of having lost the bus,the presence of an attractive guy gave me some relief!

I love his dressing sense-White shirt and blue jeans,i think boys look great in it with a great hairdo too

And the cherry on the cake is that he looks my age

Hello Miss i am talking to you,can u plese tell me the bus said the guy

Zoya: I am going on the same way.you can board the bus on which i'll go!

Oh! Thankyou so much he replied,actually i am just one month old in this city he added

Zoya to herself"Did i asked for an explanation! But i liked the fact that he told me

Zoya: So you are not from Bhopal

Stranger: Actually i was born here but long back we shifted to ludhiana because Abu got transfered their

Zoya:So i must say welcome back!

Stranger:Thanks. By the way myself Asad ,he extended his hand toward her

Zoya was stunned for some time and it was her reaction every time she listenes this name

And you? Asad asked surprised by her reaction

Zoya, Nice name she added(She never tell her surname to strangers)

That should have been my line,he winked and smiled

Flashback Starts:

"Asad"- Zoya's Best buddy at school "Asad Ahmed Khan".

Their Story was very common and simple story and as every story it started witha big fight in the schoolBecause he has cheated in the test and got better marks than zoya.

They used to fight on every small and big things and their fights never seem to end...

Until One day teacher to end their fight make them partners in maths project

But their fights continues because their ideas always contradict

But when the date of submission their project was chosen the best one ans they realized that they can become friends too..

Time passed and after that they became beat friends

They sit together,eat together,play together and have fun together

They were just like inseperables

Everyone in the class were jealous of them

But Asad and zoya never bothered it

Every thing was going smoothly and it had been five years of their friendship

Their Friendship didn't got down well with Asad's Parents because they belonged to a very conservative family and friendship between boys and girls was a very big thing for them and therefore they took their relationship very seriously

The Very Next session he left the city and never came back,neither she knew where he has gone and what is his contact number

Since then she lost all her contact with Asad

After he was gone she made friends but never a best friend

She was afraid to Loose them forever how he loose his asad

She didn't know where he was and wheather he will come back or not

She had so many questions but their was no one to answer them

Flashback ends

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After and overcrowded bus a half filled bus arrived

Zoya Took the corner seat and asad followed him to the next seat

Asad:So what u do?

Zoya:I am a CA

Asad: Thats cool so ap to hisab kitab ki bohat paki honge??

Zoya:Ya! I love Maths

Asad:Maths,oh i just hated it in my school days

Zoya:Its everyones problem vaise what you do?

Asad:I am a software engineer in Ludhiana

Zoya:So came here for Holidays

Asad:engineers dont get holidays maam!

I have got transferred here

Zoya:So how do u fell to be back in your birthplace after 15 Years

Asad:Are u Jyotish?

Zoya: no Why are u saying so?

Asad:coz i am here exactly after 15 yrs

Vaise its nice tactic to know some's age,i'll use it on other people said asad with a wink

Zoya: But it was purely unintentional u see!

Asad: Come on Yar its cool

Zoya:Where is your stop asked asked
Asad:two stops ahead of yours,So i'll get a good company throughout my way and i hope i am not being a bore actually i am a chatterbox and love to talk !!

Its my hobby and sometimes people get irritated ,He added again with a wink

Zoya:Oh,not at all rather i am enjoying the conversation,every day i go home alone and my one companion is My phone's Playlist

Asad:So u listen to songs daily on your way to home?

Zoya:not only in my way to home but also whenever i am free coz music is my best friend
Asad:Whta kind of music do u like to listen

Zoya:Umm... Melodious numbers it may be english and hindi but i dont like rock and pop

Asad: Favourite Singers?

Zoya: Atif aslam,shreya ghoshal and enrique

Now my turn whos ur favourite

Asad:AR RAHMAM

Zoya:Thats great!,So yaha pe akele rehte ho?

Zoya: No mom hai and dad is still in ludhiana

Asad: And u?

Zoya: I live with my parents,i have an elder sister too and she is married

Asad:So when are you Planning to get married

Zoya:well it will happen when its destined to be

He smiled and zoya bade him a goodbye as her stop has arrived

"See You Soon"said asad

Zoya was wondering wheather She will met this stranger again or not??

Precap:will the history reoeat itself??

Ok so plzz guyzz do tell me if u like it or not and leave your valuable comments

I will continue only if I will get a good response😉

I know its pathetic and all chappals and tamatars are welcomes😆

Nuts😳

P.s-Plzz leave your comments😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow update soon
m first !!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WONDERFUL.
ASAD IS A CHATTERBOX???
STRANGE.
CONTINUE SOON.
THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Nuts

New TS Gd Gd

Acha i ik ua concept

spe d way Asad talks..


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wow..i jst lyk d idea..and i too thnk white and blue suits men best..update and pm me
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thats very interesting
story... like it...

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Asya have a history... together

hmmm now what a coincidence..

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Asad chatter box... nice

cheat his exam papers... hmmm


what zoya will do went she no who asad is
and come to no who zoya... is...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am loving the plot...and i actually got a bit of what you are planning to write further...
Love it...POST SOONISH...😉
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Awsome and intresting ts... 😊
update nxt part soon.,... 😊

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