FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 93

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Posted: 11 years ago
Epilogue...this word bhi na, just don't like it. Means, the end bas sab khatam... Makes me sad, Di. Very very sad. However, I do understand your feelings too. As a writer, you should be motivated and if you do not have the motivation, then you can not produce anything good. So perhaps, this was all in our muqaddar.

With mixed feelings and emotions, let me try to give my comments 😊

Honeymoon
This was for sure something I wanted to read a full chapter about. Lekin koi baat nahin!
Taj Mahal, of course...the symbol of their love; their love story would be incomplete without it.

observing the various shades of the Taj under the full moon (Is that what couples do on their honeymoon? Or am I thinking PG13+ now) 😉

Najma and Karan's wedding
Finally, in donho ka khwaab bhi poora ho gaya. Three times shaadi! Just imagine the nok jhok and lovely dovey romance of AsYa 😳

Pregnancy and Kids
Twins!!! 😃 I just love love love their names; Aaliyah and Zain 😊
Badtameez Zain aur super boring Aaliyah (just like Zoya and Asas respectively) 😆
A daddy's girl and a mama's boy, how lovely 😳

Imagine the fights their parents had because of their kids! (I can very well imagine this) Isn't that what makes them AsYa 😳

on a world tour to find himself (Oh I like this! Different and unique)

(something like the One direction) (This must be a something special for your younger readers, which is not me) 😛

They relived their past and reminisced how they had met and fallen in love on the cruise 30 years ago (Yaadein yaad aati hain...)

They were still quite different and argued a lot but converged on the most important things in their lives- their love for each other, their families and their values (The end...) 😭


Can't believe it. Yakeen nahin hota that this was it. I have very beautiful memories with this story:
Faasle gave me my very first IF friend (Anushree). Our love for this story was the common factor and from their on it all started.
Faasle gave me the purest and most beautiful rishta a girl can have with someone. A mother. Yes, yeh hi woh jaaga hain that RK Mom and I met and ever since we have become inseparable.
And at last but not the least, Faasle gave me a friend, a guide, a mentor, a support system and above all my most favorite writer on this forum...YOU!
Saach mein Di, through this we got a chance to interact with each other and I am glad I did not miss out the opportunity.

Is impossible for a writer like you to stop writing so I do understand why you could not continue with it the way you had planned. No worries, Di 😊
Toh kya hua if this FF is ending, I know that you will be back with another masterpiece or rather masterpieces. Therefore I wil not say goodbye. Alvida nahin ... alvida kehne se phir milne ki umeed mar jaati hai ...

Words can not explain how much I loved Faasle. Its right there on the top of my list, iski asli aur saayi jaaga. Words are not enough to praise you and to thank you for sharing this beautiful journey with us. When I say masterpiece, I truly mean it. This is one of the best stories ever written on AsYa 👏


A big THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart 🤗


See you soon Di, very very soon 😳😊


❤️

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haan😲😲

faasle is over now😲😲

i can't belive it😲

i m very sad after reading this😔

u make some more post of this ff

but what to do😕😕

this is such a amezing ff👏👏

i loved it fully heart❤️

and i missed it so much😭😭

and ur discreption and writtingg skiil is very good diii😃

hats off to u😃

once again for u👏👏👏 👏👏👏

plz.. start a new story on asya when u got time plz,... plz...😊😊


and thanks for lovely ff❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for this amazing story 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have been a silent reader of your FF.Every chapter of this FF left me wanting for more.
Since this has come to an end i'd like to thank you for giving such a wonderful and unique story.
Thank you so so much for making each chapter more beautiful than the previous one.
😭 Farewell feelings at the end
Shuchi
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Posted: 11 years ago
will miss u n miss this piece of great work🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
No! The FF, one of the best stories I have ever read, ended!😭😭😭
It was the best!👏😳

I hope you come back with a new story!😃
Will miss you Di!😭
Love you!❤️
Watching Qh won't be the same without reading your reviews!
Please please please reconsider your decision!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
iT WAS FUN READLING YOUR FICTION!

I STILL REMEMBER I READ ALL THE OCEANN PART IN A GO..AND THAN IT ENDED WITH ASYA SEPARATION FROM ZOYA'S AAPI AND ASAD SHARING HIS WRONG NUMBER. ZOYA'S NNUMEROUS TRIALS TO GET TO ASAD HAD BROUGHT TEARS IN MY EYES.

AND THE MOST MISERABLE THING WAS I WAS UNABLE TO FIND YOUR FF AND HAD MISSED SOME CHAPTERS!

THAN AGAIN ONE DAY I CAME THROUGH IT AND READ 5 CHAPTERS IN A GO...

AND ONCE YOU HAD STOPPED UPDATING FOR A WHILE AND I WAS DREADING FOR IT!
THIS FF WOULD REALLY BE MISSED BY MANY OF THE READERS OF QH FORUM...SERIOUSLY!

YOU ARE REALLY A BRILLIANT WRITER SANGEETA DEE!
Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so bittersweet to read this chapter bheegi, cos your Asad and Zoya really overshadow their counterparts in QH. But unfortunately, all good things must come to an end, and their beautiful journey has finally reached the ultimate destination.


I cant say that I am not disappointed with a summarized ending, but from the intro/explaination you gave at the beginning of the epilogue, it seems that you are disillusioned with QH and its followers so hence the hastened ending.


Just wanted to tell you to hang in there, hopefully the QH we all fell in love with will come back again. After all, the only way for QH now is up, cos I dont think it get any worse than this.


Also, I regret that I wont be able to interact with you now that Faasle has ended, but I do hope to continue leaving comments on your future stories! 😊


Thanks for all the memories of Faasle, bheegi, Even though fictional ones, they will always remain in my heart and mind.



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Posted: 11 years ago
Why did u end it like this?😭for those readers who have found other interests😭...what about us who can never stop waiting for the next chapter of FAASLE?😭...would have loved to read these parts in details...esp the last part..omg they spent their 25th anniversary on the cruise...the song was perfect...if we can still watch QH after ASYA marriage was broken thrice n the crappy ZOYAAN track(just becoz we love ASYA too much🤗),how can we get bored/stop loving such a beautiful FF?...pls think about writing these parts...just give it a thought😊...
loved the ending though😳...AWSOME...they had twins...Farhaan-a brilliant mathematician😊...n their anniversary on the cruise👏...at least write this 25th anniversary part(if u can) if not all😊

u're a gifted writer🤗...I enjoyed reading every bit of FAASLE to the core...I laughed and cried with it...such a beautiful plot...it felt like a movie all over...write more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
sangi... please pm me if u write any FF... take care...see u soon in IF...😭

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