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Posted: 11 years ago
Bheegi--not fair ending so abruptly! Faasle has been a part of my happy moments and I have so loved your style of writing ever since I read all your DMG stories that I feel orphaned without anymore of Faasle! Anyway Thank You and take care!

PS --Maybe you could give us a peak on the two parts--the honeymoon and the three weddings with all the nok jhok of Asad and Zoya plus him getting decorated with medals and promotions and her art exhibitions and accolades and Dilahad! Please pretty please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome but sad on its ending plzzz come up with something new
plzzz pm me for your next work

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Nooo! The beautiful and the very amazing story is over?😭
i just caaant believe this! sangeeta this is not fair!
i dont want to miss your fantastic writing,i love your work.so pleeeaaase do write some ff atleast for the fans like me!! dont disappoint me please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Luvly ending
I'll miss this ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for sharing such a great piece of work! I loved reading each and every word of this story.
I started reading this ff when you were already twenty something chapters into the story. I have been a relatively silent reader; commenting here and there. But I have enjoyed each and every update.

Although I would have loved to read Asad-Zoya as a married couple, I understand your reasons for ending the story.

When I started reading this story, I had no idea that I would grow to love the story. Along the way, I feel in love with Zoya in your story. She has been, by far, the strongest version of Zoya that I have read.

I hope you continue to share any other marvelous words that you may pen down in the future!

Great story. Awesome plot line. Such engaging dialogues! Splendid characters. I especially loved the character growth that you have shown for every character!

Who would have thought a run-away rebel Zoya would erase all the Faasle?

I will miss this story very much!


Much love,
Simi
Edited by saida.m - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di this is not fair...u ended soo abruptly 😭
this ff is one of my favourites...
awesome update but sad that its ended 😭
thank u soo much for sharing this beautiful story 😊
hope u come up with new story soon
will miss this ff very much !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 50
This is the secomd time i am writing this comment my comment got deleted the first time😭
I know i am very very late and I am really very soory for being so late...I was just very busy first with mom's birthday and then well with my daily routine...Also i have been visiting forum very less but today i am in a very good mood so i thought of updating my comment...
But before that once again very very sorry...

Now without wasting any more time let us come to the update😳I have been waiting so long for this update and i ust say that the wait was worth it coz i was smiling thoughout the update😳😳😳

What had started as a disorganized mess had ended up being the most memorable night of his life. Never in his wildest imagination had he experienced the kind of solace as he did in her arms. Life could never be the same now; his expectations from life had just gone up by many notches. There was no doubt in his mind that love was the most wonderful feeling in this world. The dusty, worn out mattress felt like a bed of feather while the moldy odor in the room was more fragrant than the rose petals he had arranged on their bed in his room.

Beautiful lines di👏what a way to begin the update...very very beautiful😳😳😳

Bemused, Asad raised his eyebrow, "Allah ka shukr hai budhaape se pehle dekh liya warna sirf jhurriyan nazar aati."

She chuckled and smacked his chest playfully, "buddhe ho aapke dushman. Hum dono tho hamesha aise hi jawan rahenge Mr. Khan!"

🤣🤣🤣Haha i just couldnt stop laughing at this...ye log kabhi bhi apni nok jhok nahi chodenge na...loved their sweet banter😆😆😆


He placed his finger on her lips, "No more Mr. Khan. Jaise kal raat ko mera naam liya tha, ab waise hi pukaarna mujhey. If not, I won't answer back to you."

Aww this was so sweet and hawwt😳😳😳I love how you manage to make small little things so beautiful and poignant😳😳


She bit his palm😆😆😆Mr.Khan ka sach wali sherni se pala pada hai😉😉😉

On seeing Asad buried under the folded mattress, she was in splits.

lol bechara asad itni buri haalat mein hai and zoya madam ki hasin nahi ruk rahi😆😆😆beware zoya kahin itna hasna aap pe bhari na pad jaye😆😆


"Aur agar nahin miley tho? What if they have gotten washed away in the rain?" She chided.

Zoya kitni naughty ho gayi hai...ye asad miyan ka asar hai ya phir zoya ke asli rang ab dikhayi de rahe hain😳


"Mujhey aisa behooda mazaak bilkul pasand nahin hai----please go look for them."

Don't worry Mr.khan your Mrs.Khan has everything planned for you😉😉😉

Kya plan tha😳😳😳i loved it zoya is a genius and i am glad that she had backup clothes warna kya hota😆


So Mr.khan is angry with the plan...Comeon asad you didn't let her have her perfect nikaah so she didn't let you have the perfect SR it is only fair...also you can't say that you didn't enjoy it😳😳😳


"I heard that Zoya!"

Lol table shave turned...ye to zoya ki lines hain😆😆😆aur aj asad miyan bol rahe hain😆😆

Perfect honeymoon😳😳😳i can't wait for it😳😳


Mr.Sher ki bolti band ho gayi momma ke samne and sab kuch zoya pe chod diya😆But acha kiya ki zoya pe chod diya kya safai se jhoot bolti hai...

But what if dilshad had asked zoya ki how did they get their own clothes at asad's friends's house?tab kya hota ya phir dilshad suspects something?😉😉


I loved how you showed zoya's nervousness while entering the room...very natural👏and well asad standing there without his shirt wouldn't have helped either right😆😆😆


"I want my spotless room to become more colorful and trouble free existence to become more adventurous. Kya mera saath dogi?" He whispered with a gentle kiss on her earlobe.

Awww you asad knows just how to say the right things doesn't he?Nd the kiss was so hawwttt😳😳😳

"Sher ke mooh sherni ka khoon jo lag gaya hai." He pulled her back into his strong arms.

Hayee so hawwt...i like this naughty asad😳😳😳

Aww the zoya took in the room and the way she was happy seeing everything reminded me of the dream sequence Jaanam dekh lo and zoya's beautiful smile😳😳😳


Inebriated by her excitement, he placed his hands around her waist and pulled her closer, "I need the appreciation in action----not just words."

haawww Mr.Khan kal raat ka action kafi nahi tha jo aur action chahiye😳

"Aap ko tho nasha sa chad gaya hai." His drunken eyes were ready to swallow her in his intoxicated state. Blushing, she hid her face in his chest.

Awww this was so sweet😳😳😳and the way she hid her face in his chest😳😳😳

"Aisa nasha jo zindagi bhar kaayam rahe---aur kabhie utarne ka naam hi na le." He lifted her in his arms and carried her to their special sej.'

Mr. nd Mrs.Khan subah subah?waise acha hai it is good for health😆😆😆


Bechara asad zoya ke pyaar mein paagal ho gaya hai na kuch sunayi deta hai na kuch dikhayi except for zoya😆😆😆


To add to his discomfiture, Zoya decided to play footsies with Asad. He was taken aback and almost jumped in his seat, "yeh---I mean----yeh??" He gave her an incredulous look with an I-can't-believe-you-are-doing-this-in-front-of-everyone expression. The warmth of her foot threw him in a frenzy of emotions, rendering him wordless.

Poor asad aise hi uski pareshaniyan kam this jo zoya started with her sweet torture😳😳😳Footsies😆😆😆did she run her foot up and down his leg too😳😳😳


🤣Haha honeymoon convo was hilarious...i was laughing my ass off...

So asad decided to play the game too😆😆😆

"Kuch nahin ammi. Wo billi----I mean ek choohe ne shayad kharonch maari hai."

"Hamare ghar mein choohe nahin hain bhabhi---sirf sher hain." Najma smiled at her brother, who had his eyes shut.

Chooha😆Hayee meri najma kitni smart hai chooha nahi sher😆😆😆

"Yes bhaijaan and bhabhi----please go---otherwise you guys will drive us crazy. At least you will spare us the drama that's going on under the dining table."

🤣...

Stunned and embarrassed, Asad and Zoya lowered their eyelids and focused on their paranthas. Like two kids who had been caught cheating in the classroom, Zoya withdrew her foot promptly.

Bechare mere Asya kitna embarras hona pada😆😆😆Next time play footies in private☺️☺️

loved the whole dining table scene...it was hilarious😆😆😆


Amazing amazing amazing chapter di...loved it...it was romantic and very very funny...i was laughing and smiling throughout...

thanku for such an amazing chapter


Love you loads di❤️❤️❤️

lots of hugs and kisses🤗🤗

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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I have a fixed feeling while reading this update and updating my comment.I am happy that Faasle has been such a beautiful journey and it ended on such a beautiful note but the very fact that Faasle has ending is making me very emotional.😭so without any further ado i will talk about the epilogue😳

They spent a romantic night under covers, observing the various shades of the Taj under the full moon.
Aww i loved the idea of seeing Taj Mahal on their honeymoon😳😳😳Very personal and touching😳😳😳They can't have anything perfect can they?Even their honeymoon didn't go as planned but well no compliants till they are together...
Afterall being together makes every imperfection perfection for them😳

So najma nd karan finally got married and three times wow😃😃😃That must have been hell of an experience for everyone...I can imagine how much asya must have faught and enjoyed this time😳😳😳

Haha Zoya must have been handfull for Dilshad with asad away😆😆😆
Awww they had twins...loved the idea of chintu and bunty😳😳😳
So Mr.Khan got promoted😃😃😃I am so happy to see that Asad was there with zoya during delivery...Man she must have felt so good😳😳😳
Aaliyah and zain wow beautiful names di😃😃😃

As evident, Aaliyah was Asad's pet and Zain, Zoya's. Imagine the fights their parents had because of their kids!

I knew it that zain would take after zoya nd Aaliyah after asad😳😳😳Asya must have felt so good to see their own childhood in their children's😃😃

Aww so happy for Aaliyah,zain and especially Farhan😃😃😃MIT wow...he is sure a genius...i loved that you didn't forget him😳😳😳


On their 25th wedding anniversary, Aaliyah and Zain gifted their parents a seven day package to a Mediterranean cruise on the same route as the one where Asad and Zoya had first met each other

I loved this 25th anniversary gift for Asya..It was thoughful and just perfect...They must have felt so good living all those adventures again 😳😳😳


Di I am almost in tears while writing this comment and i just want to say "Faasle" has been one beautiful journey and as people say everything comes to an end but well it still hurts..I wish Faasle could go on forever but unfortunately it can't but it will always be in my heart as a very beautiful memory...

Thanku for giving us such a beautiful work and allowing us to be part of this amazing journey...

I will miss Faasle a lot 😭

Love you loads di❤️❤️

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome. i will miss it alottt.
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Faasle has been such a beautiful journey and i wanted to do something special to celebrate such a beautiful journey in a memorable way...So i decided to walk down the memory lane and write y favorite lines from each part...I hope you will like the idea and love reliving the beautiful journey with me😳😳😳

Part 1

"Aapi, main aapke paas aa rahi hoon'.."

And the journey begins😳😳😳

Part 2

"Beg your pardon?" She felt slighted, "NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS OFFICER!

"Kitni badtameez ladki hai!" He mumbled as she huffed away in anger.

Asya first meet

Part 3

Back in her room, she threw her bag on her bed angrily, "yeh junior abbu se kaise paala padh gaya mera? I hate this man! Why can't he mind his own business?"

Their first fight😳😳😳Mr.judgeental Vs miss batameez😳😳😳

Part 4

He sank into his chair and pounded his fists on the armrests, "never trust an innocent face again Asad."

Zoya thinks asad is her father's hired spy and asad thinks zoya is a drug dealer😆😆

Part 5

She looked so innocent, almost angelic while asleep. His mind was conflicted. What he saw, what he believed and what he wanted to believe were all out of sync.

Asad realizes zoya isn't involved with the drug cartel😳😳and his feeling for her starts changing😳😳

Part 6

He felt a twinge in his heart when he saw the bruises on her wrist from the handcuffs. Softly, he caressed the bruise with his fingers and felt sorry for her. He felt a sense of comfort as her head rolled gently on his shoulder

Asad saves zoya from police and they enjoy their stay in Monte Carlo😳😳

Part 7

The thumping of her heart slowed down his heartbeat. His heart was no longer racing with panic- as if he came to life when he detected signs of life in her.

Asad saves zoya from drowing and they stay in a hotel where asad sleeps in the bathtub😆😆

Part 8

There he was ' her protector, her bodyguard, her savior and her Mr. Khan, she chuckled as she signed 'Z' at the bottom of the page.

Asya reach back to their ship via helicopter 😳😳

Part 9

They swayed in unison, even though far way from their respective countries, it felt like home.

Talent show on the ship and Asya romantic dance 😳😳

Part 10

Unknowingly, they had both touched a sensitive chord in each other's hearts. Their throats were bogged down by the heaviness of the emotions, but their hearts felt lighter after their conversation. Their mothers, although absent, had as if helped bridge a long lost connection between the two of them.

Zoya misunderstands asad.Asad searches for her in Genoa.Asya have a heartfelt convo.😳😳

Part 11

She knew he was hurting as much as she was; their hands communicated what they couldn't in words. Zoya's fingers intertwined with his fingers, reluctant to part with each other.

Zoya and asad part at the Istanbul airport😭😭😭

Part 12

. Aap chaahe faasle rakhna chaahein, main in faaslon ko door karke hi rahoongi

Asad and zoya miss each other😳😳😳and zoya decided to find asad😃😃

Part 13

She caressed the picture with her fingers and murmured softly, surprising herself with a sher she had read a while back-

Zoya reaches Mumbai and meets Najma nd dilshad😳😳

Part 14

Mujhey aisa kyon laga ki wo saansein bahut jaani pehchaani si thi.

Zoya settles in asad's house.Asad thinks about zoya while on his mission.

Part 15

As they stood face to face, silently caressing each other's face with their eyes; momentarily pausing at the lips, their hearts sang in unison, ecstatic at the sight in front of them.

Asya finally meet again😳😳

Part 16

"Aapke liye." She replied softly, "sirf aapke liye Mr. Khan."

Asya clebrate Eid...asya sweet banter and zoya confesses that she came to Mumbai only for him😳😳

Part 17

Just being with her, close to her, protecting her, with her soft breaths tickling against his neck made it another memorable journey for him.

Asad saves zoya from heavy rains😳

Part 18

It was no ordinary handshake. An electric thrill trekked down their spines as their hands met. Their eyes were locked in an extended exchange of silent emotions. Neither spoke nor withdrew their hand.

Asya become friends and zoya realizes her love for asad😳😳

Part 19

The fragrance from the musty air, smog from the cars, his cologne and her hair all melted into one as their lips brushed against each other, tenderly at first and then passionately.

Asya's Mumbai Darshad and their first kiss...i had goose bumps and tears in my eyes when i read this part again while writing this😳😳

Part 20

'Kya mera naam aapke liye mujhse zyaada important hai?'

Asad tells zoya that the kiss didn't mean anything and asks her to move out😭😭😭

Part 21

"I am her daughter in law."

Dilshad is rushed to the hospital and asad tells arjun that he may be in love😳😳

Part 22

"Allah! Is ladki se main kabhie nafrat nahin kar sakta."

Dilshad's surgery is a success and when asad comes to know how well zoya handled everything he learns he could never hate her.

Part 23

I want to come home to ammi, Najma and you. Aap please kahin nahin jaayengi. Aaj nahin, kal nahin, kabhie nahin.

Asad asks zoya never leave him😳😳

Part 24

JUST LEAVE! Mujhey afsos hai ki maine tumhein apne bte ke laayak bhi samjhaa

Dilshad throws Zoya out when she learns she is gaffur's daughter and asad's ship meets an accident

Part 25

"mere dil aur zindagi par is tarah kabzaa kar liya hai aapne ki aur kisi insaan ya yaadon ke liye wahan jagah hi nahin bachi hai. Ab bas aap jaldi ghar aa jaaiye. I miss you a lot."

Zoya takes up a job at Bombay art house after leaving her abbu

Part 26

Even if others wanted her to forget everything, she wouldn't and couldn't. If that meant living with his memories forever, so be it.

Zoya refuses to believe that the dead body was asad's and decides to not to forget him😳😳

Part 27

Agar zinda raha, tho hamesha unke paas rahoonga aur agar nahin, tho unse aur zyaada door kaise jaa sakta hoon

The unexpected 5 year leap and asad returns😃

Part 28

Zoya couldnt hold herself back anymore. Her Mr. Khan was back; alive and safe, right in front of her, her savior in the rain. Her fingers caressed the buttons on his shirt. Yes, she was not dreaming.

Asya meet after 5 years...in the rain the magical part with the melody of "bheegi bheegi"😳😳

Part 29

I just wanted to thank you for introducing me to myself. Jab insaan ko khud se mohabbat ho jaati hai, tho usey kisi cheez ke peeche ya kisi insaan ke peeche bhaagne ki zaroorat nahin padhti

Asad mistakes zoya to be Ayaan's wife.Dilshad finally meets asad😳

Part 30

Maine apne aapko, apne wajood ko, sab kuch Mr. Khan ke liye mitaa diya, lekin hamare darmiyan yeh faasle hamesha ki tarah hi kyun hain?

Zoya breaks down after asad refuses to recognise her😭and we her memory palace her Taj Mahal😳😳😳

Part 31

Main hamesha hamare beech faasle dekhta raha lekin yeh nahin samjha ki sabse badha faasla mere khud ke dil aur dimaag ke beech tha

Asad comes to know that zoya isn't ayaan's wife...Asya hawwt roamnce and asad paints a ring on zoya's finger in his proposal😳😳

Part 32

Agar tum mera saath dogi tho mera raasta aasaan ho jaayega, warna akele chalne ki tho aadat si ho gayi hai

Ayaan asks asad to take of zoya's safety and asad tells zoya about Rashid's involvement in illegal activites

Part 33

just because she has handled it before doesn't give anyone the right to break her time and again

Ayaan takes Farhan away from zoya😭😭

Part 34

Lekin itna jaanta hoon ki apni aakhiri saans tak sirf tumhein hi chaahta rahoonga aur tumhara intezaar karta rahoonga

Zoya is in the bomblast and Mangalpuria asad😳😳

Part 35

I love you Zoya aur is baat ka ehsaas shayad aaj se zyaada mujhey kabhie nahin hua

Dilshad and najma meet zoya.Shireen suggests that zoya should get married to Ayaan

Part 36

Time stood still as their lips moved slowly with the aftertaste of the sweet and sour sauce mixed with their warm but urgent breaths.

Asya share s romantic dinner and dance together😳😳

Part 37

It was an irony that Rashid's visit had left both Asad and Zoya confused. Rashid had fallen from the pedestal in Zoya's eyes but had managed to create a stir in Asad's heart, elevating him from an absolutely black character to a human being with shades of grey.

Rashid asks zoya to marry ayaan.Asad feels sorry for Rashid.Dilshad and Rashid meet at Juhu beach where Rashid starts coughing blood

Part 38

Ek aap hi hain jo meri himmat badhaa sakte hain. I know I will get over this but I really need you right now

Zoya makes asad stay with her and Dilshad learns about rashid's illness

Part 39

Zoya, I promise I will always be there for you and with you for the rest of my life. Kya tum mujh se nikaah karogi

Asad puts the ring on zoya's finger and asks her to marry him.He asks zoya to pretend marry ayaan

Part 40

"Thodi teekhi, thodi naram, thodi thandi, jaldi se pighalne waali," he grabbed her hand, licked her cone to stop the ice cream from melting away to the ground, "lekin sab se zyaada tasty."

Zoya tells asad that she will help him but only on her terms.They make up over an ice cream date.Dilshad advices Ayaan to trust zoya more

Part 41

Asad couldn't take his eyes off his fiance. Mesmerized, his eyes stayed glued to the woman descending the stairway. She looked like a princess in red.

Asya get engaged before dilshad nd najma.Asya collect incriminating evidence against Rashid

Part 42

His soul had waited to reunite with his beloved family. They were all there; their eyes filled with tears, they had all forgiven him for is sins. Even though he felt he never deserved them, he held onto them till his last breath.

Ayaan leans that AK is his asad bhijaan.Rashid passes away😭😭

Part 43

Hamare beech koi bhi faasla hum dono ke yakeen aur mohabbat se badha nahin hoga

Shireen tells that ayaan isn't Rashid'sson.Zoya comforts asad.Razia asks ayaan to get her zoya

Part 44

Without paying any heed to the accompanying message, he dashed through the long corridors of the RAW office like a maniac.

Ayaan kidnaps zoya😭😭😭

Part 45

main aa gaya hoon jaan. Please wake up. Main tumheinyahan se le jaane aaya hoon

Asad saves zoya but now faces the ultimate villian Razia

Part 46

With tears in his eyes, Asad touched his hand to his forehead, saluting the young soldier, Ayaan Ahmed Khan, who lived a lie but died for the truth.

Asad saves zoya but ayaan dies

Part 47

It had been a long and tumultuous journey. They had been through hell and heaven together. They had craved and longed for each other. They had waited for this moment and now that it was here, they knew they still had to wait a little longer before they could assimilate into a complete union of heart, soul and body.

Hospital wala nikaah

Part 48

"Mujhey sirf meetha nahin---teekha----khatta----kadva-----garam----thanda sab chaahiye."

Asya's never ending foreplay😳😳😳and naughty asad just for me😳😳😳

Part 49

They had waded through enough storms, floods and tides in the past but at that moment there was only one hurricane awaiting a landfall---a landfall of hidden desires and an intense pining for each other.

The much awaited SR is here...the most beautiful SR ever...sweet but still so hawwt☺️☺️☺️...

Part 50

Life could never be the same now; his expectations from life had just gone up by many notches. There was no doubt in his mind that love was the most wonderful feeling in this world

Asya after SR nok jhok...one of the funniest parts ever😳😳😳

Epilogue

They were still quite different and argued a lot but converged on the most important things in their lives- their love for each other, their families and their values.

The most beautiful ending to the amazing journey called Faasle😳😳


Phew i am done finally😆

I hope you enjoyed the glimpse of this journey as much as I did.I loved writing this comment coz i got to live Faasle all over again and I felt every emotion every little feeling just like I did before😳😳😳

I laughed,i cried,i smiled,i blushed all over again😳

Di Faasle has been one very beautiful journey and i want to thank you so much for giving such a beautiful experience😳😳😳

Faasle has been such a beautiful experience and i have enjoyed each and every moment of it...It has given me so much happiness and such a wonderful friend like you...

Thanks to you for faasle and thanks to faasle for you😳😳😳

I love you di❤️❤️Bas aur kuch nahi keh sakti main ab i think i have said enough😳😳😳

I love you so much...I want to thank Faasle for removing all the faasles between us😳😳😳

A song when you end this beautiful journey"tera mera pyaar amar"😳😳

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