FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 90

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith

Couldn't write this on tumblr because I have not signed up hence writing it here-

Di, you have mentioned that how characters didn't have a logical conversation but the way I look at it Asad and Zoya's scene in yesterday's(Monday's) episode was very much fine in that sense because their reactions were very true to their nature and the opinions they hold.
Zoya maturely tried to put Dilshad's stance in front of Asad, Asad listened to her but he is also very firm in his opinion about Rashid.

Friday's episode had not one but three very nicely put scenes- Nazma-Nikhat, Dilshad-Asad and Ayaan-Humiera.
Am sorry Di, but there wasn't any use of 'Mohabbat' in those scenes or in any of the scenes in yesterday's episode apart from Zoya's dialogue.

Shireen also made sense yesterday, albiet under Raziya's influence but she did say sensible things to Ayaan :)

While I cannot say that how will this track and the future tracks of QH will be handled but I can definitely say that the last two episodes were very good and to some extent also emotionally intriguing.

Di, we have watched episodes of QH which were pure drag, in comparision to those the makers are doing very well IMO. 😊


I know what you are saying Nikita but I felt there was something missing in the Asya scene again. I feel Zoya used the word 'mohabbat' more like a bandaid- to cover up for everything else that's gone wrong in the last 17 years. Granted, mohabbat is life but not at the expense of your own kin. Like they used muqaddar as a bandaid to cover up loopholes in their Zoyaan script, I feel they are using 'mohabbat' as a buzz word here. THis situation is way more complicated than just explaining it by 'mohabbat'...yes, ishq par zor nahin- i guess that's what's it's all about. Right now, my expectations from the show are very low...I would be happy if Haider's track infuses some life into the show. Even the Farhan track came as a damp squib ...it's like khoda pahaad nikli choohiya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
when are u gonna update dear😊
Eagerly waiting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AAKKSG

when are u gonna update dear😊

Eagerly waiting😃


it will take a few days...sorry have been busy
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Posted: 11 years ago
when are u gonna update dear...pls...pls...pls...update soon...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls...pls...pls...update soon...😭
pls...pls...pls...update soon...😭
pls...pls...pls...update soon...😭
pls...pls...pls...update soon...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part . Waiting for the honey moon part. Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will try to update over the long Thanksgiving weekend...
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Posted: 11 years ago

EPILOGUE:

I am sorry but I will end the ff with this epilogue. The ff has already gone on for a long time and I feel a number of readers have already found other interests. It takes me hours to update each part and right now, it would best to end on a happy note. I will just summarize the parts I had planned on writing.

HONEYMOON:

Asad and Zoya had their honeymoon in Agra. Asad had promised her a view of the Taj Mahal under the full moon. Unfortunately, the day they arrived, there was a "Agra bandh' declared in the city. A disheartened Zoya had a big argument with Asad as she couldn't get her perfect honeymoon.' Asad managed to get her a view of the Taj under the full moon through the window of their hotel. They spent a romantic night under covers, observing the various shades of the Taj under the full moon.

NAJMA & KARAN'S WEDDING:

They got married three times- a Hindu wedding, an Islam wedding and a court marriage. Asad and Zoya had a lot of fun planning these weddings. Of course, with loads of banter and typical fights to add to the spicy mix.

PREGNANCY & KIDS:

A few weeks after their honeymoon, Zoya was stunned to find out that she was pregnant. After their usual banter and blame game, Asad and Zoya were ecstatic to know that they were going to be parents. At the same time, Asad was asked to join a Navy mission on the Indian Ocean. With a heavy heart, he had to leave a very pregnant Zoya- with morning sickness and what not. You can just imagine how Zoya must have reacted but she was a trooper while he was away. They chatted on skype every night. She even scanned the ultrasound images to him. To their surprise and horror, they found out they were going to be parents of twins. Zoya decided to name them Chintu and Bunty irrespective of their sexes. They decided not to find the sexes till the delivery

Asad promised to be home before the delivery but unfortunately Zoya went into premature labor at 34 weeks gestation. As she cursed Asad while being wheeled to the operating room for an emergency C-section, when she heard the cries of the babies and a nurse congratulate Captain (yes he had been promoted) Khan' in the operating room, she had tears of joy as her Mr. Khan had once again, not disappointed her and whenever she needed him in an emergency, he was always there for her.

They had a boy and a girl.

Bunty- girl- her name was Aaliyah

Chintu- boy- name was Zain

Their personalities were like chalk and cheese. Even as infants, their personalities were distinct. Aaliyah, was the quiet and serene one who barely cried even when she was hungry. Zain was the hyperactive one and cried for no reason most of the time. While Aaaliyah loved to gaze at her surroundings from her father's lap, Zain loved to bounce and monkey around with his mother.

As they grew up, Aaliyah was the organized one, who kept all her toys in the toy box neatly, never lost or broke a toy, loved to read books with her abbu'

Zain, on the other hand never stayed still. His mind and body were always restless. He loved messing with Aaliyah and could never keep his toys or belongings in place. He loved to take things apart but never put them back together. The only thing that calmed him was music and a bear hug from his ammi. As evident, Aaliyah was Asad's pet and Zain, Zoya's. Imagine the fights their parents had because of their kids!

As they grew up, it was quite obvious that Aaliyah was the scholar while Zain was the creative mind in the family.

After graduation from high school. Aaliyah was accepted to the prestigious AFMC (Armed Forces Medical College) in Pune. She would finally end up being a physician in the Navy. Zain, on the other hand refused to go to college. After a lot of discussion and arguments, much to Asad's chagrin, Zoya took her son's side and sent him on a world tour to find himself.'

Finally, Zain returned one day, member of an international rock band (something like the One direction).

During this period, Zoya continued to pursue her career in art. Her paintings were exhibited all over the country and she eve won some awards for her artwork.

Asad continued to get recognition and regular promotions in the Navy.

Farhan, a brilliant mathematician was accepted at the Massachusetts Instt Of Technology in Boston for an undergraduate program. He was a computer whiz, just like his father, but unlike his father was hired by a prestigious computer security firm in the US after his graduation from MIT.

On their 25th wedding anniversary, Aaliyah and Zain gifted their parents a seven day package to a Mediterranean cruise on the same route as the one where Asad and Zoya had first met each other. They relived their past and reminisced how they had met and fallen in love on the cruise 30 years ago. To Asad's relief, Zoya didn't land into any trouble while they were aboard the ship. She had learnt to be more cautious and he had learnt to be more carefree. They were still quite different and argued a lot but converged on the most important things in their lives- their love for each other, their families and their values.

Thanks again to all the readers who stuck with me throughout this journey. I enjoyed writing this fan fic. Hope we meet again...

Here is a song dedicated to the love birds as they stand on the deck of the cruise on a quiet, dark night, celebrating their 25 years of married life and 30 + years of love...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2fWd1vMXV8

Teri Bahon Mein Hum Jeete Marte Rahe

Yuhi Hum Tumse Pyaar Karte Rahe

Teri Bahon Mein Hum Jeete Marte Rahe

Yuhi Hum Tumse Pyaar Karte Rahe

Hum Ne Dekhe Nahi Aisi Deeangee

Kam Na Hogi Kabhi Ab To Dil Ki Lagi

Jism Se Ruh Mein Hum Utar Te RaheYuhi

Hum Tumse Pyaar Karte Rahe

THE END

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Posted: 11 years ago
why is it the last part
i really hope you come back with something new as your an amazing writer 😊😊
nice update awww they had twins😊😊
i hope we could see something like this in the show since its apparently taking a 3 year leap 😆😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sangeeta, it took me days to unres as I really am at a loss for words. I have mixed feelings and find it difficult to express it clearly!!
2 different phrases come to mind:
Every good thing comes to an end.
Did you know that the first time I saw this FF, I skimmed through the 1st chapter and stopped after realizing the characters were different from the show? Then we got friendly on your daily posts and one day you PMed me a new update alert. I decided to check it out and read all the chapters in a few days! I was hooked. Loved your writing style and then became a regular commenter. 😃 Can't believe this epic is over. 😭
This is not an end but a beginning!
As sad as I am that this story has ended, I understand your POV. Hopefully, QH will perk up and we'll get to see more stories from you!! I told you I am an optimist! 😆
This FF and your daily posts have given me 3 of my fave online friends: my buddy, my bachha and my twin!! 😉 I thank you for that!! So what if our musings on IF have drastically reduced, we'll continue to chat on FB! Cheers to that!!
Coming to the epilogue, it was a bit rushed but you had to cram potentially 3-4 chapters in one!! 😆
Honeymoon in Agra?! ZA influence?? No wait!! It's the Taj Mahal connection!! How appropriate! Zoya built a TM art studio in Asad's "memory" and he had to bring her to see the real thing!! Sigh, life is not a bed of roses, is it? Even here they face issues but make the best out of it. That's the best message!!
Najma & Karan got married - 3 times!! Yaha show pe, AsYa can't get married even once!! Accha, I thought rules for Muslim girls were different than for boys and they couldn't marry non-muslims the traditional way. Is that not so? Not that it's important now. Just curious.
Pregnancy and kids: Pregnant and husband away at sea? 😔 That must have been tough for Zoya. Life is tough for the families of armed forces personnel. My school best friend was an army child but they made the most out of it. In fact, she married an army guy too! Do you have any background in armed forces? Back to the story, Asad did make it on time for the delivery and Bunty aur Chintu made their appearance. Loved the A and Z initial used for the kids' first names!! Awesome names!! Daughter like father and son like mother! 😆 How cute!! AFMC student?! Nice!! Rock star?? Was that inspired by Asad's long hair?? Just kidding! That took me by surprise. I guess an artist (different kind) like his mother!!
Glad to hear that Farhan ended up as an MIT scholar and had a bright career.
25th WA on a Mediterranean cruise. How apt! They came a full circle and can reminisce their first meeting. Nice way to end it!!
Sangeeta, this was an awesome FF with all elements: drama, comedy, romance, fun, angst, action, hatred, pain, suffering, sensuality and so on!! A COMPLETE PACKAGE!! Thank you for taking out sooo much time to write this epic and for sharing it with us!!
I'll surely miss it!! Farewell FAASLE!
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