FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 64

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Posted: 11 years ago
Never thought a hospital wedding could be so romantic. Damn Girl, you have some great thoughts.! Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGGG THIS WAS SOO ADORABLEEE!! ☺️

Bichara Asad kitna tadap raha hai 🤣 I enjoyed reading all the teasing LIKE A LOOOT! Poor Zoya is gonna have it from him raat ko

'Yeh raat meri hai, ammi ki nahi' awww Asad is soo adorable and romantic OH GOSH :|

Abhi toh Walima bhi bacha hai i am so sure they'll have a hard time controlling themselves 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Sangeeta, its perfect extension to the last one..

Asad has changed so much that even Zoya is embarrassed, tables turned completely.
Seriously he waited patiently for such long😲, LOL I thought that bathroom encounter will fulfill the requirements of Valima😛 . But the guy has done so much preparation so it has to be perfect. Will wait for Zoya in red sari and walima, update soon..
And now that QH Asad is catching up with Faasle Asad, would love to see him embarrass Zoya and show who is the boss..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nice update. It was definitely very naughty n full of teasing sessions from both asya.

Loved the update n please update soon as can't wait to see what happens on their first but not so perfect night
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..poor lovebirds had to wait for so long...can't wait for ur next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Morning presents again ehe
N now i hav a BIG BROAD GRINN PASTED ON MY FACE euahaha
Lord!!! I just could imagine Asad n Zoya there out being so desperate rather Asad lol
N asad being a cook what n adorable cook ehehehe hahahaha i cant stop laughing hahaha
Thankyou dii meri monday morning bann gayyii hahahahahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally I am up to speed!😆😆

I loved the hospital nikah and adored Zoya's reaction to getting married while injured! I feel her but I also felt for Asad! No more waiting!
side note: Maybe the actual show needs to take a page from your story, more maybe more than one page! 😆😆

And my bechara Asad - no one is leaving him be with his wife! How hard it must be! 🤣😉

Great updates!

I think I have mentioned before - I love your writing style! ❤️

lots and lots and lots of love,

Simi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohk I am back😃I mean finally i am here😆😆...I know i am very late and i know i am not supposed to say sorry but i really feel very guilty for being so late for last few times...i won't even bore you with my "i was busy rant" coz it is getting old so i will just say three words "i am sorry"

So back to the update now😃Can i say i have been thinking for a while that how great it would be if di dedicated something to me but then i always dismissed that thought coz i have never seen you doing dedications😆😆But can the moment i read the first line of the update i squealed like a kid who just got his favorite candy😳😳.So now let me walk you through the monday morning-the eventful day when i read faasle chapter 48 which was dedicated to me.I hope you don't get bored.So as usual i got up at 9 and the first thing i did was check my phone and log on IF.The moment i log on IF i see that my dearest faasle has been updated and i rush to Res a spot.Now i couldn't read the update right away coz well apparently being on your phone the moment you wake up doesn't go well with the parents😆😆(you must know this since you are one).So i decided to read the update after doing my morning chores and having my breakfast and i literally gulped down my breakfast so that i can hurry back to reading the update.Finally the moment arrived and i went to my terrace and started reading the update while strolling and my god i did my happy dance and squealed the moment i read the first line.I was blushing and smiling throughout the part till i read before the sucky BSNL decided to make me wait to read the rest of the updateI tried restarting my modem,torturing my landline and fiddling with the wires basically every trick in the trade but couln't get my net to work and can you imagine how frustrated i was😡😡and then my mom called me to help her sorting dry fruits so i had to go help her but my heart longed for my faasle.So finally after a break of about 40 mins i got back to reading the most amazing updated dedicated by the most amazing person to me😳😳😳
kuch zyada hi bakwaas kar di na maine😆😆well i had to make this comment extra special coz this update was dedicated to me and also for being very late and i hope my little anecdote brought a smile to your face as your updates bring to mine.😳😳
ok now coming to the update😆😆pakka pakka no more bakwaas😆😆

I just loved the opening quote...can't say how true coz i haven't experienced for myself😳😳

Hayee asad carries zoya out of hospital in his armscan there be anything more romantic nd filmy than this bidaai ofcourse the whole hospital witnessing and cheering this😳😳But still asya manage their nok jhok😆😆Di what a dhamakedaar beginning to the update...I could totally imagine zoya in asad's arms and both staring at each other oblivious to their surrounding...hayee *sighs*😳😳😳

Wow kya entry hai nayi dulhann ki apne ghar me😳😳ek dum raapchick😆😆sainyaan ke baiyaan mein😳😳BTW did you get your post nikaah rituals after returning home approved?😆😆😆

"Karan ko bhi sikha doonga main! Okay, can we come in now?" Asad asked impatiently.
ohk i can't believe this is the same asad😆😆Did he just say he will reach his to be BIL how to be romantic with his little sister😳😳

"KYA KAHA AAPNE? MAIN BHAARI HO GAYI HOON? PEHLE THO KABHIE COMPLAIN NAHIN KIYA AAPNE!" Zoya glared at him and then bit her lip, embarrassed by her own statement.
🤣 i felt second hand embarassment for zoya too when i read this...hayee this bring back so many good memories..everytime asad has carried zoya in his arms😳😳Don't worry zoya AAK ab legally aapke hain so enjoy his company in anyway you want😉😉
"Your room?" Asad's face fell, "I have no problem carrying Zoya upstairs to my-I meanour room."
OMG bechara asadKya kya socha hoga ki hospital se ane ke baad zoya ke sath finally kuch private time bitane to milega but😆😆😆najma doesn't leave any chance to rub it in his face😆😆Zoya ma'am beware aap jitna AAK to dadpayengi aapko bhi utna hi tadapna padega😆😆
loved how dilshad insisted on being called "ammi"😳😳i am so so so happy for zoya😳😳

OMG the convo between asad nd zoya in dilshad's room was so hawwt and sexy☺️☺️

"Tax yahan har cheez par lagta hai Mrs. Khan. Khaas taur se apne shauhar ko tadpaane ka tax bahut bhaari hota hai."

Hayee kitna haseen hoga ye tax☺️

"Yes, Mr. Khan. Doctor ne kaha tha na---be gentle with me. You are very rough Mr. Khan." She pouted.

He noticed that little twinkle in her eyes-----she was tormenting him on purpose.

"Ab kya karoon Mrs. Khan, I am a soldier. The word gentle doesn't exist in my dictionary. Agar aap mujhey apni seva karne ka mauka deti tho I would have learnt how to be gentle lekin aapne tho wo mauka mujh se cheen liya. Saza aap mujhey nahin apne aap ko de rahi hain."

My face looked like this when i read this.Now this is called being naughty and sexy without being too explicit😳😳😳Can i say among all the works i have read you make asya look the hottest just by mere words😳😳😳You must be one smooth talker di😆😆and i refuse to believe otherwise😳😳

"filhaal mujhey ek glass paani mil sakta hai. And make sure you put ice in it. I am very thirsty. I am sure you would understand how frustrating it is to remain thirsty."

Asad stood up with a faint smile, "jee nahin Mrs. Khan. I don't strain my senses that much. Mujhey jab jo cheez chaahiye hoti hai main le leta hoon. The word thirsty doesn't exist in my dictionary."

☺️...

OMG did asya really ahve this convo?😲😲please tell me that you did mean it the way i understood it and it isn't just my dirty imagination😳😳I mean all the asya convos are supposed to have euphemisms and there is nothing wrong with my thought process😆😆and if this is indeed how you meant it to be can I say how hot this was😳😳😳

Shauhar ka kaam hai apni biwi ki har zaroorat ko poora karna

Ahem ahem😳😳😳

The mooh dikhayi and the kheer chatai rasam was so cute...i am glad that asya are so even in front of dilshad...shows a great comfort level.

"Aap se hi seekh raha hoon Mrs. Khan. Dil ka sauda tho pehle aapne kiya tha." Asad bent down gently, his lips inches away from hers.

aww this was so cute😳😳

"Mr. Khan---aap kya kar rahe hain? Yeh aapki ammi ka bedroom hai." Zoya lowered here eyes in anticipation of a kiss. He traced her lips with his finger, gently wiping the remnants of the kheer.

☺️☺️☺️OMG thsi was so so so hawttt😳😳😳hayee becahri zoya asad ka ek waar and zoya beemar😆😆Mr.khan bahut hi naughty hote ja rahe hain..waise good to see asad tadpaoing zoya😆😆


Good to see asad taking a much needed leave😃.i am so happy to see anwar being redeemed...If gaffoor could be redeemed then why not Anwar.So Zeenat is specail education teacher?I guess you added this detail wen you decided that Farhan would remain with Humeira?Good to see humeira doing fine..

Aww the Taj Mahal...brings back some very very good memories😳😳😳


Aww Mr.khan learnt how to cook for his Mrs.khan?That is the sweetest thing isn't it?😳😳(So does Mr.joshi cookd for Mrs.Joshi too😳😳?)

As usual their convo was so cute...

He caressed her face, gently removed the strands of her hair from her forehead and then whispered something in her ear. Her ears turned red as she realized what he had just whispered (Censored- let your imaginations loose here.)

Honestly i couldn't imagine anything here😆😆😆coz i was gushing so much about what i had already read but nice move leaving this one to readers discretion😆😆

hayee Mr.Khan aap Kitne naughty ho gaye hain☺️☺️and i must say "bhaad" must be one crowded place😆😆

He grinned and licked the remnants of the chicken curry off her finger, "actually, it's quite tasty!" He winked at her as Zoya's face turned a deeper shade of red.

☺️Di my cheek will become red permanently i had been blushing so much reading this update😳😳😳"Finger licking good"😉


The guests😡😡why did they have to ruin such a hawtt moment😳😳😳bechara asad bawarchi ban gaya apni biwi ke pyaar mein😆😆

Aww i loved the way zoya couldn't take her eyes off her Mr.khan😳😳

"Jee," he lowered his eyes but mumbled to himself, "intezaar----yes----intezaar karne waala hi jaanta hai intezaar kya hota hai."

😆Lol...asad must be singing "Intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki"😳😳

An excited Asad wanted to welcome his bride to his chambers in a grandiose manner. It was the day of the Valima. He decorated the whole room with flowers and candles. Asad purchased expensive designer silk bedding for their special night for after the function. Bedecked with rose petals, their sej' was at last ready for Mr. and Mrs. Khan.

He kept a box with his mooh-dikhai' gift on the nightstand. It was a beautiful bracelet watch with their initials AZ inscribed on the dial.

hamare Mr.Khan is a true perfectionist😳😳😳 kisi bhi kaam ko pure tan,amn anur dhan se karte hain😉😉

sajna hai mujhey sajnaa ke liye😆perfect song...good she is not in the kitchen otherwise she would have ended up buring something...😆😆

He pointed at the window. "Desperate times lead to desperate measures."

Chalo wo window kisi kaam ayi...asya must be thanking that window so much😆😆

"Mr. Khan. It's just a matter of a few hours. Kya itna bhi sabr nahin hai aapko?"

Zoya he has been waiting for weeks...kuch to taras kaho becahre par😆😆

"Sabr hi tho nahin hai." He replied in a low husky voice.

Hayee maar dala😳😳😳

She placed her finger on his neck and traced it down his chest, "sabr ka phal meetha hota hai Mr. Khan."

Zoya man you do this to him and then you expect him to wait😆😆😆how can he,how can any normal man for that matter😳😳i can't wait to see this "meetha" fal😳😳😳

"Mujhey sirf meetha nahin---teekha----khatta----kadva-----garam----thanda sab chaahiye."

☺️...

Everytime that i think asad wouldn't surprise me anymore with his naughtiness there he comes back like anything and surpasses himself everytime😳😳

"Like your mirchi ice cream?" She chuckled, her fingers continued to trace circles on his chest, driving him into a vortex of frenzied roused emotions.

"Mrs. Khan-----at this rate, even mirchi ice cream wouldn't be enough." He pulled her even closer; the warmth of their breaths stroked their senses, "don't tempt me Mrs. Khan."

"Mr. Khan----aap mujhey Mrs. Khan bolna kab bandh karenge? Bahut formal lagta hai."

"Jab aap sach maayne mein Mrs. Khan ban jaayengi." He bent down and kissed the curve of her neck, "aaj raat aapki mooh dikhai ke baad."

Hayee i am dead...i am seriously dead after reading this convo😳😳😳

"Aaj raat meri hai Mrs. Khan-----ammi ki nahin." He gave her a quick peck on her cheek and walked backwards towards the window. Quietly, he pulled the window up and slithered out gently.

yes Mr.khan ye raat sirf aur sirf aapki hai😳😳make the best use of it😉😉

Zoya opened the box and caressed the beautiful saree, "Mr. Khan-----I know it's going to be a perfect night------ab aur intezaar mujhse bhi nahin hota."

Hayee meri besabar zoya😳😳😳

ab mujhse bhi is muh dikhayi ka intezaar nahi hota di😳😳


What an amazing update di👏

it couldn't have been any better😳😳😳It was perfect just perfect Madhuri dixit's perfect😳😳😳

I can't praise you enough for this.I am so glad i asked for a naughty asad coz this update was so hawttt,romatic nd sexy...Your couples do romance with words and they do it do it like no one else...they hardly touched each other and yet i was smiling and blushing throughout...i was literally looking like a tamatar😳😳😳

P.S.-I love you❤️❤️my comment would be incomplete if i don't say this

P.P.S-rabbit you are my bestest friend but this was my dedication i wanted the first spot😭😭😭and di thanku so much for the dedication😳😳it really means a lot

P.P.S-I am very sorry again di for being so late but i hope my comment makes up for it...this is the longest comment i have ever written and it took me almost ouble the time😳

P.P.P.S-Since this was such a hawt and roamntic update and your updates are always very magical i would like to dedicate one of my favorites ot romantic numbers"Zara Zara mehkta hai behkta hai"

P.P.P.P.S-Phew i was so worried one post wouldn't be enough so i copied and then updated my post 😆😆

loads of love

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats an awesome update
but at the end little confused not pleasnt night?
what do u mean by that
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Posted: 11 years ago
superbbb update sangeeta ...d original writers of d show need to take sum ideas n script frm u ...n if dey do so ...show ll break all records i bet it ...

luvd luvd luvd d update ...each n every word of it ...

thnx anushree for demanding a naughty asad ...n sangeeta thnk u for giving d same ...i just luvd dis side of asad ...poor asad no one is letting him spend tym wid zoya ...n his wait is getting sooo difficult ...poor fellow indulged in cooking to b around zoya ...luvd his care n concern for zoya thru out ...n i really luv groom carrying his bride ...n i just wish dis shud b declared as a tradition ...

asad n zoya cannot stop bantering watever d condition is ...shez missing asad as much as asad is missing her isliye shez eating watever he cuks ...but asad ko chedna to h ...

i thot ki humeira ll stay wid zoya due to farhan but m glad u dint do it ...

waiting for d nxt part n dere nt sooo perfect sr ...
plzzz update soon sangeeta ...

ps..u r an amazing writer sangeeta ...n it is shown in d way u write bold n sensuous scenes ...dey may b bold but dere is nth odd abt reading dem ...

Edited by sona_naksh - 11 years ago

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