FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 66

Originally posted by: me2you

Personal diary: RK mom and I had a sweet little 'fight': I wanted her to res a spot and she wanted me to res a spot. So who wins??? You must be thinking me, since I am the first one but no...the true winner is RK mom. Because, she wanted her bachha to go first. Isn't that the most beautiful feeling and bonding between a mom and her daughter???

Thanks mom!!! 🤗You are the sweetest 😳

wah wah...mother daughter bond ho tho aisa ho😃

Coming back to the update...

Chapter 48

Next day

"That's okay sister. I will manage." (I knew it!)

"Mrs. Khan doesn't need to walk nor use that wheelchair." (As long as she has her Mr. Khan no need to worry about other things...)

Asad's home

PEHLE THO KABHIE COMPLAIN NAHIN KIYA AAPNE! (Oops...dheere bholiye Zoya)

I don't want to trouble Mr. Khan. Waise bhi unki back kamzor ho gayi hai (You will pay for this Mrs. Khan! BWT, it reminded me of Friday's episode, the scene with the back pain...funny yet cute)

Dilshaad's bedroom

Old memories brought a faint smile on her face (It even brought me back to those very first chapters, very lovely memories)

Khaas taur se apne shauhar ko tadpaane ka tax bahut bhaari hota hai (Poor man, kitna tadpa rahe hain woh...)

The word gentle doesn't exist in my dictionary (Okay...good to know) 😛

And make sure you put ice in it. I am very thirsty. I am sure you would understand how frustrating it is to remain thirsty (Acha Mrs. Khan...two can play a game...)

Mujhey jab jo cheez chaahiye hoti hai main le leta hoon. The word thirsty doesn't exist in my dictionary (He is Mr. Wicked Ahmed Khan) 😎

Zoya ko pyaas lagi hai. Is liye pareshan ho rahi hai - Tho tum yahan kya khade khade dekh rahe ho? Shauhar ka kaam hai apni biwi ki har zaroorat ko poora karna (I could seriously NOT stop laughing...) 😆😆😆

Ho sakta isi bahaane aap mere gharib khaane mein tashreef laane ki taqleef karengi (Wah! Very nice, new and creative Di. I like very much)

Zyaada excitement aapki sehet ke liye theek nahin hai (Right there, back at ya Mrs. Khan)

Loved their Mr. and Mrs. Khan style of nok jhonk?😉

Next four weeks: snippets

he was being starved of her company and intimacy (Look at the patience this man has...)

tell me about it...😆

The day Farhan addressed her as ammi,' had been the happiest day of her life (I really thought Farhan would be adopted by the newly wed couple, but I am genuinely happy for Humeira that both she and her son are doing fine) 😊

yes, it would have been cliche to have Asya adopt Farhan. Also, i wanted to show that a person with mental illness if taken good care of and under the right medication should be fit to be a parent

chef du jour (A husband cooking for his wife is just so romantic...) 😳

every woman's dream...to have a husband who cooks for her😳

let your imaginations loose here (Should I speak my imaginations out loud or should I leave it to you so you can let your imagination loose and thinking what my imagination must have been...what say???)

he he...u can always PM me😉 or keep them tucked in ur imagination

Jab itna intezaar karna padhe, tho aadmi besharam ho hi jaata hai (Good to know...let the husband for a long time. I wanna see ke uska besharmi aur badtameezi kis hadh thak ja saakta hain)

He winked at her (Yes, yes, yes...the wink) 😉

"intezaar----yes----intezaar karne waala hi jaanta hai intezaar kya hota hai." (I am starting to feel sorry for this man...please, someone help him!)

"I want it to be perfect for you, Zoya." (So sweet) 😳😊 Bechara Asad...will it be perfect?😉 Abhi tak tho kuch perfect nahin hua hai

"Desperate times lead to desperate measures." (He must be really desperate...)😆

"Sabr hi tho nahin hai." (Its your ammi's bathroom, control Mr. Khan control)

"Mujhey sirf meetha nahin---teekha----khatta----kadva-----garam----thanda sab chaahiye." (Aur mujhe sirf Mr. Khan chahiye)

"aaj raat aapki mooh dikhai ke baad." (Plan kya hain...) 😛

OH MY GOD, Di!!! What to say?! How can one utter a word after this? Is it even possible to talk? (Apparently yes, mein toh kabse bholti ja rahi hoon) What I mean is, I need the right word for this update...*thinks, thinks, thinks* MIL GAYA! This was ek dum, full on...

SANGI-LICIOUS! He he Narges. Glad u liked it:)

The moment he said that she does not need a wheelchair, I just knew what he was going to do. Of course, ek dum true hero style mein he carried her in his arms 😳 Of course

Mere khayal se, none of us can ever get enough of their nok-jhok and how the way they tease each other. Mr. Khan was in a totally different mood, saach mein ek dum naughty.

He was bang on aur kyun na ho. Woh bhi kissi se kaam nahin hain. Goes to show how far they have come in their relationship

Their teasing in Dilshaad's bedroom, him cooking dinner for his Mrs. Khan and of course, the very very very romantic bathroom scene were just amazing! Superbly written, not out of character at all. Of course, we have not seen a naughty Mr. Khan but we can see little changes in his character in the show, hence this seems quite in sync with the current Mr. Khan. I also loved the double meaning dialogues. Is that a first for you, Di? Or is it just the first time I get them? 😛 Yes, if QH asad can start changing, why not Faasle Asad? Faasle asad was not as emotionally challenged to start with. My dialogues are very toned down here bachcha😉

You proved once again, that there is no need for vulgarity and/or boldness to make a scene romantic or passionate. The beauty of a true and talented writer is to make the feeling come alive with only words. And for me Di, you belong to one of the very best... 😃 👏 👏 👏

shukriya...and that's the biggest compliment Narges. Don't need anything more😊

Rating: ⭐️ point five. Why am I not giving you five stars? Don't think its my kanjoosi but take it as a challenge to do even better (if that is even possible with your standards) Yeh update toh superrr se bahot uparrr tha! (Shilpa Shetty style mein, judge Nach Baliye 6)

Thank you so very much Di! This was the perfect way to end my weekend.

Oh BTW...the mood is ek dum set now😳 next part will be main course now😉

Love ya! 🤗love ya too...

P.S. Special thanks Anushree, my Tamatar, for demanding a naughty Mr. Khan. Because of you we got to see this side of him as well 😳😊 I am trying to fulfill all ur requests...

P.P.S. The disclaimer, great idea! 👍🏼 Poor readers, I can already see them asking for permission 😆 (Oops sorry, no intention to hurt anyone's feelings) yeah, despite the disclaimer I think I still kept it quite PG level😆 altho I know aaj kal ke bachche sab padhte aur dekhte hain

P.P.P.S especially for Narges

For real?! 😲 A big thank you in advance...you can understand that my patience is getting tested here...just like Mr. Khan his patience, for different reasons though 😆

yes...next one ke liye thoda intezaar karna hoga😳

Originally posted by: webuser7

Personal diary for public viewing: Thanks Narges beta! For the PM, for offering me the 1st spot, even when you saw it first, and just for being you!! How could Mom take her darling daughter's right, especially when she fully deserved it?! Mom loves her DQS!!🤗 Muah!! We kept the family tradition of getting the 1st spot. Mom is proud of you!! Such a good bachha!!

thu thu thu to mom-daughter bond😃

Sangeeta, had enough of the Mom - DQS nautanki? No??!! Seriously?! 😆

Coming to the update ... Once again a brilliant update!! 👏 👏 👏 Take a bow, lady! YOU ROCK!!! shukriya shukriya...

Kya opening phrase hain!! Wah! Wah!!

A meal without an appetizer...

A raag without an alaap...

Is like sex without foreplay...

And Nikaah without suhaag raat ...?? Is like ...

A birthday without a cake ...

A meal without dessert ...

A raag without sur taal ...

wah wah wah...kya baat hai...bilkul sahi and I am sure Mr. Khan will really agree with u

😆 Bechaare Mr. And Mrs. Khan!!

Let's start with the beginning!! (I must say its a good place to start!!😃 Yeah, I am grinning like a Cheshire Cat. Feeling happy and silly!)

Zoya ko discharge mil gaya!! Yippee! Yeh kya? The Navy hospital nurse is so influenced by Zoya, she called Asad Mr. Khan instead of Commander Khan!! Humme official title sunne ki aadat ho gayi thi! 😃 Nayi nurse hogi!!

my blooper there😃 but we can always blame the nurse

"Mrs. Khan doesn't need to walk nor use that wheelchair

Of course, she doesn't!! Jahapanah 6 packs lift service jo hai!! If he could carry her on his back through torrential rain, hospital room se car tak kya cheez hai?!

"Waise hi jaise ek dulhan ko jaana chaahiye." He lifted her from the bed, in both arms and walked out of the hospital room, discharge instructions in his pocket.

Oye hoye, Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jaayenge!! How cute is Mr. Khan!!

This Mr. Khan is obviously the man of every woman's dreams...aise aadmi real life mein hote hain?😆

"Mrs. Khan, aapko kab se tamashe se sharam aane lagi? Aap tho khud tamasha khada karne mein maahir hain." He whispered back and unabashed, carried her out to his car.

😃 Their Nok jokh was super cute!! that will be a life long thing for them

Bechaara Asad! Couldn't take his wifey to his room, but instead she ended up in Dilshad's room!! Didn't expect that!! 😆

Both of them are such teases!! Is Mr. Khan taking a lot of cold showers?! 🤣 Bechaara!!

yes...both are tadpoing but teasing each other to the max. I bet both take long cold showers😆

"Phoophi?" Dilshaad frowned, "yahan koi phoophi nahin hain. Sirf ammi hain."

Good!! Abhi jaldi hi yeh dono first name basis par aajaye!! SR ke baad? Ya PG 13 version mein as Asad said mooh dikh...ayi ke baad!!

yes...wo bhi hoga😉 but I love writing their banter as Mr. and Mrs. Khan...very Asya

Zoya is such a nautanki. Mr. Khan and rough?! Tauba tauba!! Bechaara!! Aaj toh iss title pe pura unhi ka haque hain!

"The word gentle doesn't exist in my dictionary."

"Mr. Khan, the word loss doesn't exist in my dictionary."

As Meenamma from Chennai Express would say, kaisi bokwas dictionary hai!! Bechaaras need new one!!

yes...i just saw CE last night and thought about the dialogues i wrote😆

Zoya is thirsty. Reminded me of the phrase "Water, water everywhere but not a drop to drink!!" I am sure dono ko bahut pyaas lag rahi hain!! 😉 🤣

yes...and water has always been their companion...phir bhi pyaase hain😆

"Zoya, yeh kheer tum dono ek doosre ko khilaana. Waise kheer chatai mein dulhan ke haath par kheer rakhte hain aur dulha uske haath se kheer khaane ki koshish karta hai"

You mean like the Dulha has to lick off the kheer from the dulhan's palm? Or from the bowl? Yummy!!

yes...apparently that is the tradition in Islam...

Asad did not have a mooh dikhayi gift!! Main tho Zoya ka mooh pichle 5 saal se dekh raha hoon.

I am sure poor guy dreamt of her angelic face when he was locked up in Dubai.

Bahut tease kiya bechaaron ko aur humko! Ab toh PG 13 SR toh banta hi hai! 😉

sabr ka phal meetha hoga😃

Glad to see the story moved on too. Zoya generously donated her house to her father. Hope Humeira received Ayaan's estate and Ghafoor can help her take care of investments for Farhan! Nice touch with Zeenat helping out with Farhaan!!

yes, i wanted Ghafoor to get a slap on his face via Zoya. He used to be so arrogant about his wealth and status...isi liye parents ko kabhie paise ka threat nahin dena chaahiye bachchon ko. Ayaan's estate is probably under custody of Govt Of India. Let Ghafoor take on responsibilities for a change. Yes, didn't want Farhan to just be Asya's responsibility- would have been cliche

Mr. Khan can cook!! Man of many hidden talents!! every woman's dream

More nok jokh. Uff! Bathroom romance!! Ha! ha! Red sari had to make an appearance!! Hopefully with a backless blouse!! Does Mr. khan have time for a cold shower before the valima!! Bet that's one party he'd love to miss!!

ha ha...i am sure he will have to😆

"Mujhey sirf meetha nahin---teekha----khatta----kadva-----garam----thanda sab chaahiye."

"Like your mirchi ice cream?" She chuckled, her fingers continued to trace circles on his chest, driving him into a vortex of frenzied roused emotions.

"Mrs. Khan-----at this rate, even mirchi ice cream wouldn't be enough." He pulled her even closer; the warmth of their breaths stroked their senses, "don't tempt me Mrs. Khan."

Koi mujhe pankha dedho? Uff, November ke mahine mein itni garmi!! 😳

oye hoye...now sochi bechare Asya ka kya haal hoga

Zoya opened the box and caressed the beautiful saree, "Mr. Khan-----I know it's going to be a perfect night------ab aur intezaar mujhse bhi nahin hota."

Ab aur intezaar hum se bhi nahi hota!! Agla update kab hain? Ticket jo reserve karne hain! Show houseful ho ga!

in a few days...have to think about how to write the Pg13 part without going overboard...

Sangeeta, once again a mind-blowing update!! This was very sweet and naughty with lots of cute nok jokh scenes. Can't wait for the next one!! shukriya. AsYa without nok jhonk is like a meal without spices

Achha, ek serious baat puchni thi!! Aapne apne sab faithful fans ke liye update dedicate kiye hai: Ankie ka Mangalpuri aur hospital wala Nikaah, Shona ka naughty Asad, Narges ka ahem ahem special night. Aur mere liye?! 😭 Just kidding. Aapne bahut kuch diya hai! On demand script changes!! Jee jee...aapke liye bhi plan hai mera...pregnancy and kids😆

Until the next update...

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

OMGGG THIS WAS SOO ADORABLEEE!! ☺️

Bichara Asad kitna tadap raha hai 🤣 I enjoyed reading all the teasing LIKE A LOOOT! Poor Zoya is gonna have it from him raat ko

'Yeh raat meri hai, ammi ki nahi' awww Asad is soo adorable and romantic OH GOSH :|

Abhi toh Walima bhi bacha hai i am so sure they'll have a hard time controlling themselves 🤣

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Hi Sangeeta, its perfect extension to the last one..

Asad has changed so much that even Zoya is embarrassed, tables turned completely.

Seriously he waited patiently for such long😲, LOL I thought that bathroom encounter will fulfill the requirements of Valima😛 . But the guy has done so much preparation so it has to be perfect. Will wait for Zoya in red sari and walima, update soon..

And now that QH Asad is catching up with Faasle Asad, would love to see him embarrass Zoya and show who is the boss..

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Hey nice update. It was definitely very naughty n full of teasing sessions from both asya.

Loved the update n please update soon as can't wait to see what happens on their first but not so perfect night

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Wow..poor lovebirds had to wait for so long...can't wait for ur next update.