FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 14

Originally posted by: me2you

Rarely, I become speechless, but you are really one of the first who has made that possible.

I read the update last night, just before going to bed, and right after that I wanted to comment on it but I couldn't. I wast just not able to...

aww...that's the best compliment for me Narges😃

Let's give it a try though...

Zoya's house

Is he your lover? Bahut ishq ladha rahi thi na iske saath aaj parking lot mein? Duniya ke saamne tho Asad bhaijaan se mohabbat ka natak karti ho. You are a bloody wh**re!" (Totally unacceptable and unforgivable)

"AYAAN!" Asad's anger had no bounds (I could imagine the fire, the aggression and the fierceness in his eyes and voice)

Asad was a bit skeptical at the sudden turnaround (Even I am)

lekin agar koi meri mohabbat ke daman par daag lagaayega, tho main us insaan ko kabhie maaf nahin kar sakta, chaahe wo mera chota bhai hi kyun na ho! (Mohabbat karne waale ho toh aisa, he is a true lover)

"Kya main tum par yakeen kar sakta hoon?" (I am really not sure about this one)

"bhaijaan, I will do anything for you." (Prove it first Ayaan, kehne se kuch nahin hota)

What a turn of events. First we have a battle between the brothers and later on we see them hugging. Can'really blame Ayaan for the way he reacted but that does not mean woh kuch bhi bhole. The tihng he said about Zoya's character is really women unfriendly.

I am glad that Dilshaad told him who AK really is. Still I am not yet convinced by Ayaan's promise to Asad, that he will help him. Like Zoya said, he is impulsive and can do anything very abruptly. What an ending for such a beautiful start of the evening...

Ayaan's car

We will take the first boat out to Dubai right now (What?!)

This new impulsive action of Ayaan can lead to anything. Of course, here he is not keeping his promise to his bhaijaan but maybe he wants to help him at his own way? Maybe he will double cross Razia? Or perhaps, the safety of his family comes first?

There is a big question mark here why Ayaan is leaving to Dubai, all of a sudden...

very good questions Narges...wait and see😉

Zoya's home

It's not a matter of principles but a matter of love and life (You probably would have done the same, Mr. Khan)

Dil par hamara zor nahin hota (Saach...ishq pe zor nahin...)

At the hospital

At that moment, he was not a criminal, but a man who had made the wrong choices in life and instead of fighting against his failures, had surrendered to them in the name of destiny

"Asad? Asad kahan hai?" He asked (The first thing he says...he remembered)

"Asad beta." "Abbu." (I could not hold back my tears, absolutely one of the best scenes ever)

"ABBU!" Asad yelled (Nooo...!!!) 😭

For him deliverance was a loving glance from Dilshaad, a hug from his daughter and a tear in his son's eyes... (Speechless...) 😭

First you made me cry when Zoya was at the hospital to identify Mr. Khan's body,

second time was when they first met after the 5 year long seperation. It was the rain scene with the beautiful song 'Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein' and now for the third time, you again succeeded to make me cry.

The first tears begun when Rashid called out for Asad. After long and painful years a father heard his son calling him 'abbu'. The second time he calls him 'abbu', the father let out his last breath...

This scene left me speechless... The whole scene was right there in front of my eyes.

I was shocked and sad. I refused to believe that Rashid died, because somewhere I hoped he would stay alive. The very last sentence of this chapter is one of most beautiful lines ever.

aww.I am sorry...didn't intend to make you cry but I wanted to make the scene realistic and not melodramatic+ didn't want asad to go all out with abbu jaap either

Being die-hard romantics (I belong to that category as well), most of us are always looking for romantic scenes. We know that you are master in romantic scenes, no doubt but today with this chapter you have proved that you can do much more than only romance.

Making people laugh and cry with a story is probably one of the most difficult things to do, especially when the story has not been pictured. But you have this immense power in your writing style that you managed to bring out the deepest emotions out of your readers.

This update belongs to one of your best and finest chapters of all time. I really want to say a lot, but like mentioned before, I was and I still am speechless. You really deserve a standing ovation for this...

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

shukriya! shukriya! Appreciation by readers is my best inspiration...thanks again Narges😃

Btw, did you see me applauding for you?

jee bilkul and accepted graciously😃